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* Allen's[[spoiler: murder of Leonhart at the behest of Riliane. During the duel itself Leonhart, drunk as he was, could likely have won the battle--but he couldn't bring himself to kill the boy he'd raised as his son.]] Germaine's reaction to finding Leonhart's body washed up on the riverbank is also heartbreaking.
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* Allen’s famous TwinSwitch at the climax, [[spoiler:sacrificing himself so that Riliane can live]]. Even worse? [[spoiler: It doesn’t fool Kyle and Germaine. Allen lies to Kyle about killing Michaela so the former isn’t affected. And when Germaine realizes the deception and begs him to escape, he confesses that he killed Leonhart to keep her angry with him. After letting him be executed she's still consumed with regret for sending the boy who she'd loved as a brother to his death.]]
** Similarly, Chartette also breaks down when [[spoiler: Allen dies.]]
** In the revised VG version of the scene, seeing Allen's elation at [[spoiler: having saved Riliane from the fate that Elluka predicted]] transform into horror as he realizes [[spoiler: how terrified he is of dying, wishing he could have escaped with Germaine or Riliane.]]
** Similarly, Chartette also breaks down when [[spoiler: Allen dies.]]
** In the revised VG version of the scene, seeing Allen's elation at [[spoiler: having saved Riliane from the fate that Elluka predicted]] transform into horror as he realizes [[spoiler: how terrified he is of dying, wishing he could have escaped with Germaine or Riliane.]]
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* Allen's sheer devotion to Riliane is this considering that for much of the story she sees him as nothing more than another servant, frequently threatening his life and slapping him when she thinks he's being out of line. She only starts to care about him when the full breadth of what he's done for her is revealed.
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** While some have claimed this adds Shakespearean levels of narm, the scene is extended in the revised version to expand more on Leonhart and Allen.
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* Allen's [[spoiler: murder of Leonhart at the behest of Riliane. During the duel itself Leonhart, drunk as he was, could likely have won the battle--but he couldn't bring himself to kill the boy he'd raised as his son.]] Germaine's reaction to finding Leonhart's body washed up on the riverbank is also heartbreaking.
** While some have claimed this adds Shakespearean levels of narm, the scene is extended in the revised version to expand more on Leonhart and Allen.
* Allen's sheer devotion to Riliane is this considering that for much of the story she sees him as nothing more than another servant, frequently threatening his life and slapping him when she thinks he's being out of line. She only starts to care about him when the full breadth of what he's done for her is revealed.
* Riliane's talk with Allen about how trying to be like her mother left her LonelyAtTheTop as she prepares to be captured and killed.
* Allen’s famous TwinSwitch at the climax, [[spoiler:sacrificing himself so that Riliane can live]]. Even worse? [[spoiler: It doesn’t fool Kyle and Germaine. Allen lies to Kyle about killing Michaela so the former isn’t affected. And when Germaine realizes the deception and begs him to escape, he confesses that he killed Leonhart to keep her angry with him. After letting him be executed she's still consumed with regret for sending the boy who she'd loved as a brother to his death.]]
** Similarly, Chartette also breaks down when [[spoiler: Allen dies.]]
** While some have claimed this adds Shakespearean levels of narm, the scene is extended in the revised version to expand more on Leonhart and Allen.
* Allen's sheer devotion to Riliane is this considering that for much of the story she sees him as nothing more than another servant, frequently threatening his life and slapping him when she thinks he's being out of line. She only starts to care about him when the full breadth of what he's done for her is revealed.
* Riliane's talk with Allen about how trying to be like her mother left her LonelyAtTheTop as she prepares to be captured and killed.
* Allen’s famous TwinSwitch at the climax, [[spoiler:sacrificing himself so that Riliane can live]]. Even worse? [[spoiler: It doesn’t fool Kyle and Germaine. Allen lies to Kyle about killing Michaela so the former isn’t affected. And when Germaine realizes the deception and begs him to escape, he confesses that he killed Leonhart to keep her angry with him. After letting him be executed she's still consumed with regret for sending the boy who she'd loved as a brother to his death.]]
** Similarly, Chartette also breaks down when [[spoiler: Allen dies.]]