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An in-progress PDF can be found [[http://mrgone.rocksolidshells.com/pdf/fansheets/Dragon_The_Embers_Bailout_Draft_2-14-11.pdf here]]. A completed pdf can be found here [[https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B31Gud9WnwZXTHU1OE8wSDVEQWM/edit?pli=1]]
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An in-progress PDF can be found [[http://mrgone.rocksolidshells.com/pdf/fansheets/Dragon_The_Embers_Bailout_Draft_2-14-11.pdf here]]. A completed pdf can be found here [[https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B31Gud9WnwZXTHU1OE8wSDVEQWM/edit?pli=1]]
com/file/d/0B31Gud9WnwZXTHU1OE8wSDVEQWM/edit?pli=1 here]]
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* IncendiaryExponent: flammable foods, such as high-proof liquor, work even better. [[ExtremeOmnivore So does gasoline.]] [[UpToEleven Ammonium nitrate/fuel oil]] works really well, though there are penalties for eating [[MasochistsMeal non-food-like "food"]].
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* IncendiaryExponent: flammable foods, such as high-proof liquor, work even better. [[ExtremeOmnivore So does gasoline.]] [[UpToEleven Ammonium nitrate/fuel oil]] oil works really well, though there are penalties for eating [[MasochistsMeal non-food-like "food"]].
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* SickeninglySweet: Bones Dragons are an in-universe example, being described as "nauseatingly cheerful, almost to the point of diabetic coma".
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* TastesLikeDiabetes: Bones Dragons are an in-universe example, being described as "nauseatingly cheerful, almost to the point of diabetic coma".
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** Even the [[AllLovingHero all-loving]], [[TastesLikeDiabetes nauseatingly friendly]] Bone Dragons, who are capable of tolerating ''vampires'', tend to hate the Scholars of the Five Evils.
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** Even the [[AllLovingHero all-loving]], [[TastesLikeDiabetes nauseatingly friendly]] friendly Bone Dragons, who are capable of tolerating ''vampires'', tend to hate the Scholars of the Five Evils.
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Long ago, dragons ruled the Earth and mankind. It was the Dominon, when a single sneer at a dragon could bring incineration. The dragons liked their power. Then came the day when a mortal realized he could kill a dragon. Realizing they could fight against their oppressors, mankind rose and fought, and soon, drangonkind was forced into hiding. It was the Collapse.
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Long ago, dragons ruled the Earth and mankind. It was the Dominon, Dominion, when a single sneer at a dragon could bring incineration. The dragons liked their power. Then came the day when a mortal realized he could kill a dragon. Realizing they could fight against their oppressors, mankind rose and fought, and soon, drangonkind was forced into hiding. It was the Collapse.
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* GeniusBruiser: Finders usually are smarter than other dragons, and are well-versed into everything abour Oroboroi, from anatomy to history to politics and religion.
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* GeniusBruiser: Finders usually are smarter than other dragons, and are well-versed into everything abour about Oroboroi, from anatomy to history to politics and religion.
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* PartialTransformation: One of the Dragons' two powersets work like this; each Oroboroi has a specific set of draconic features known as "Ablutions", which he can choose to manifest separately at more or less high level in human form. Below five dots of Ablutions manifested at the same time, he will still look human aside from very subtle clues, but above, the clues become less and less subtle, and his appearance becomes more and more dragon-like; for example, a Dragon with five dots of Ablution manifested will still look relatively human aside from sharper teeth and an usual skin tone, while starting with ten dots, he will turn into a LizardFolk. Manifesting all Ablution dots at the same time cause the Dragon to [[OneWingedAngel assume his true form]].
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* PartialTransformation: One of the Dragons' two powersets work like this; each Oroboroi has a specific set of draconic features known as "Ablutions", which he can choose to manifest separately at more or less high level in human form. Below five dots of Ablutions manifested at the same time, he will still look human aside from very subtle clues, but above, the clues become less and less subtle, and his appearance becomes more and more dragon-like; for example, a Dragon with five dots of Ablution manifested will still look relatively human aside from sharper teeth and an usual unusual skin tone, while while, starting with ten dots, he will turn into a LizardFolk. Manifesting all Ablution dots at the same time cause the Dragon to [[OneWingedAngel assume his true form]].
