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The story is centred around the human homeworld Ava, which, thanks to precursor artefacts, created a small (compared to other races; a mere hundred or so planets) empire in a thousand years after finding them. However, Ava's first colony Hades, aggravated by Ava's total free marketing ideas (i.e. no workers' rights), revolted and turned [[strike: communist]] collectivist, taking fully half of Ava's colonies with them and renaming themselves the Red Blok. This forced Ava to cancel the debts of, and grant full membership into the U.N.A., to the remaining colonies in other to stop them from joining the revolt. Civil war soon followed.
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The story is centred around the human homeworld Ava, which, thanks to precursor artefacts, created a small (compared to other races; a mere hundred or so planets) empire in a thousand years after finding them. However, Ava's first colony Hades, aggravated by Ava's total free marketing ideas (i.e. no workers' rights), revolted and turned [[strike: communist]] collectivist, taking fully half of Ava's colonies with them and renaming themselves the Red Blok. This forced Ava to cancel the debts of, and grant full membership into the U.N.A., to to, the remaining colonies in other order to stop them from joining the revolt. Civil war soon followed.
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* Ambadassador: Muse would love to be this, but Daimyo John Priest really takes the laurel. He’s the first human to have successfully negotiated a trade deal with the Cogs, acquiring their battery and shield technology by impressing them through charm and violence.
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* Ambadassador: {{Ambadassador}}: Muse would love to be this, but Daimyo John Priest really takes the laurel. He’s the first human to have successfully negotiated a trade deal with the Cogs, acquiring their battery and shield technology by impressing them through charm and violence.
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* Designer Babies: Odin-01 and Man-02 are twins whose genes were selected from Red Blok’s elite, resulting in their genius-level intelligence.
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* Designer Babies: DesignerBabies: Odin-01 and Man-02 are twins whose genes were selected from Red Blok’s elite, resulting in their genius-level intelligence.
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43 years after The Trauma the U.N.A found the Therian world that launched the invasion (for a Therian it's more like a transport ship), ''Damocles.''
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43 years after The Trauma the Trauma, the U.N.A found the Therian world that launched the invasion (for a Therian the Therians it's more like a transport ship), ''Damocles.''
