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* FantasticSlurs: Castithans are sometimes derisively called "Haints".[[note]]A Southern US term for "ghost"; literally a "haunting spirit."[[/note]] The Castithan ambassador from the VC refers to Datak as a "Haint", [[NWordPrivileges then says it's okay when she says it]].
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* FantasticSlurs: Castithans are sometimes derisively called "Haints".[[note]]A "Haints"[[note]]A Southern US term for "ghost"; literally a "haunting spirit."[[/note]] "[[/note]], because of their pallor. The Castithan ambassador from the VC refers to Datak as a "Haint", [[NWordPrivileges then says it's okay when she says it]].
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Mob Debt created
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* GreyAndGreyMorality: To an extent. Was [[spoiler: Nolan]] in the right to kill someone in cold blood? Was [[spoiler: Yewll]]? Is Rafe really unambigiously good despite his racism and politicking?
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* GreyAndGreyMorality: To an extent. Was [[spoiler: Nolan]] in the right to kill someone in cold blood? Was [[spoiler: Yewll]]? Is Rafe really unambigiously unambiguously good despite his racism and politicking?
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** [[spoiler: Christie throws Deirdre off the top of the Arch for trying to slip her an abortificent.]]
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** [[spoiler: Christie throws Deirdre off the top of the Arch for trying to slip her an abortificent.abortifacient.]]
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* MobDebt: A sizable proportion of the town owes money to local Castithan crime boss Datak Tarr, whose EstablishingCharacterMoment is how he responds to a debtor trying to make a payment out in the open in the streets. Datak's wife, Stahma, distracts the debtor's kids with candy, while Datak has his enforcer break the debtor's wrist as a warning not to approach him in public again.
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* CouchGag: Starting Season 2 of the series, when it comes to the title card, it flies over the town and ends with a shot of the Gateway Arch. Depending on the weather of each episode, the title card reflects it. When it comes to Season 3, [[spoiler: the arch is shown to be damaged after it is bombed by Datak and Stahma, with the weather still reflected with each change seen in the episodes]].
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* CouchGag: Starting Season 2 of the series, when it comes to the title card, it flies over the town and ends with a shot of the Gateway Arch. Depending on the weather of each episode, the title card reflects it. In one episode, the opening credits showed a day to night transition for a difference in the opening scene and the following scene. When it comes to Season 3, [[spoiler: the arch is shown to be damaged after it is bombed by Datak and Stahma, with the weather still reflected with each change seen in the episodes]].
