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* CloudCuckooLander
* WeaponOfChoice: her pipe. Hakuren suffered heavily from this.
* WeaponOfChoice: her pipe. Hakuren suffered heavily from this.
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* MysteriousWatcher
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* GrumpyBear
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* WeaponOfChoice: her [[SimpleStaff pipe]]. Hakuren suffered heavily from this.
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* WeaponOfChoice: her [[SimpleStaff pipe]].pipe. Hakuren suffered heavily from this.
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No longer a trope
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* CrapsaccharineWorld: "A setting which, at first sight, looks nice and cute." Check. "You're probably thinking you've just stepped into a Sugar Bowl that seriously TastesLikeDiabetes. Suddenly, you notice something wrong, and upon investigating, you realize that every single thing below the surface is horribly wrong and dysfunctional" Double Check.
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* CrapsaccharineWorld: "A setting which, at first sight, looks nice and cute." Check. "You're probably thinking you've just stepped into a Sugar Bowl that seriously TastesLikeDiabetes.SugarBowl. Suddenly, you notice something wrong, and upon investigating, you realize that every single thing below the surface is horribly wrong and dysfunctional" Double Check.
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* NiceHat: wears one in order to hide his pumpkin-orange eye.
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* {{Megane}}: Inadi is a mix of type on and type two.
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** She threw up afterwards.
* EnthrallingSiren: The entire premise of the chapter stems from the Siren in the lake that had been drowning residents.
* BurnTheWitch: An implied origin of the Siren.
** It turns out, however, she was burnt not in the name of praticing witchcraft, but being a traitor for hiding convicts.
* EnthrallingSiren: The entire premise of the chapter stems from the Siren in the lake that had been drowning residents.
* BurnTheWitch: An implied origin of the Siren.
** It turns out, however, she was burnt not in the name of praticing witchcraft, but being a traitor for hiding convicts.
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* EnthrallingSiren: The entire premise of the chapter stems from the Siren in the lake that had been drowning residents.
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* InfantImmortality: Subverted. When the chaotic star rams into the star fisher, Emily falls off the ship and to her death.
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* InfantImmortality: Subverted. DeathOfAChild: When the chaotic star rams into the star fisher, Emily falls off the ship and to her death.
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* SuicideMisson: Most of the missions are this.
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* SuicideMisson: SuicideMission: Most of the missions are this.
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* ArtMajorBiology: Possibly too many to list.
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* MomentOfAwesome: Chapter three, where the effect of power-enhancing amulet allows her to pull off feats she normally didn't have the physical capability of. She [[BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu got injured in the process]], however.
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* MomentOfAwesome: The last part of the Sky Pirate arc.
** The lost souls teamed up to take down the chaotic star. Harper distracted the star by firing at it with a rifle. Hakuren dove in when the star was distracted to fire a tart down it's throat. Mado hijacked a mini ship and fired her own tart at the star while Jasper distracted it with a flower wand.
** The lost souls teamed up to take down the chaotic star. Harper distracted the star by firing at it with a rifle. Hakuren dove in when the star was distracted to fire a tart down it's throat. Mado hijacked a mini ship and fired her own tart at the star while Jasper distracted it with a flower wand.
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-> "The longer you stay, the more you forget."
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* InTheHood: obviously.
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* ImportantHaircut: One is implied to have happened offscreen, during the timeskip after their alliance with the Hooded Figures.
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* VirtualTrainingSimulation: the paintball field was in fact the military's training grounds.
* NightmareFuel: as revealed by the Hooded Figures, when humans in Nowhere looses the last of their memories, they [[spoiler:turn into bunny guards]].
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* YourSoulIsMine: The angler fish sucks emotions out of things.
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* TeenGenius: During fights she uses physics and math to her advantage.
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* TeenGenius: During fights HyperAwareness: she uses physics and math to does this an awful lot in her advantage.earlier posts.
** SherlockScan averted, however, because she usually strays off to compose irrelevant mathematical models out of her observations
** Promoted to AwesomenessByAnalysis briefly during chapter Three, where her body temporary has the ability to actually perform the tasks she can imagine, gained via [[MagicalAccessory amulet magic]].
* TeenGenius
** SherlockScan averted, however, because she usually strays off to compose irrelevant mathematical models out of her observations
** Promoted to AwesomenessByAnalysis briefly during chapter Three, where her body temporary has the ability to actually perform the tasks she can imagine, gained via [[MagicalAccessory amulet magic]].
* TeenGenius
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* GoForTheEye: the initial attack Leila executed against the Mushroom man. When instructed to shoot it in the eye, she proceeded to shoot it elsewhere to redirect its attention, before tackling it in the face and [i]stabbing its eye with a handheld arrow.[/i]
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* ArtMajorBiology: Possibly too many to list.
* ElectricJellyfish: Averted, although Numair does take a moment to think about the possibility when touching jellyfish tentacles.
* GoForTheEye: C latching onto the angler's face and shoving a stone into its eye.
* OurMermaidsAreDifferent
* UnscaledMerfolk: The humans become merfolk under the effects of potions, with varying results.
** Sacha is half-octopus
** Leila now has a large, puffy, biofluorescent dress that's made of jellyfish.
** To an lesser extent, Numair's dolphin merman form.
* WaterIsAir: the City of Orion is much of this. Most of Orion is just a regular town constructed on the ocean floor.
** there are also lamps. And working electricity.
** complete with the characters swimming out of higher floor windows disregarding the fact that they are windows. Sometimes [i]through[/i] them too.
* ElectricJellyfish: Averted, although Numair does take a moment to think about the possibility when touching jellyfish tentacles.
* GoForTheEye: C latching onto the angler's face and shoving a stone into its eye.
* OurMermaidsAreDifferent
* UnscaledMerfolk: The humans become merfolk under the effects of potions, with varying results.
** Sacha is half-octopus
** Leila now has a large, puffy, biofluorescent dress that's made of jellyfish.
** To an lesser extent, Numair's dolphin merman form.
* WaterIsAir: the City of Orion is much of this. Most of Orion is just a regular town constructed on the ocean floor.
** there are also lamps. And working electricity.
** complete with the characters swimming out of higher floor windows disregarding the fact that they are windows. Sometimes [i]through[/i] them too.
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[[folder: Chapter Six - Apathy]]
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[[folder: Chapter Six - Apathy]]
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**Seems to have been slowly developing in the direction of [[WorldGoneMad World Gone Mad]] through the course of the last few chapters.
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* The Stoic
** NotSoStoic: as of Chapter Five.
** NotSoStoic: as of Chapter Five.
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* DragonRider: literal or not.
* DragonRider: literal or not.
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* BreathWeapon: The dragons encountered in this chapter breathed all kinds of things.
* GiantFlyer: The dragons are this. Size of a multiple storey house and capable of flight.
* GiantFlyer: The dragons are this. Size of a multiple storey house and capable of flight.
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* OneLiner: Several during the secod witch fight.
-> '''Leila''': “This may be Nowhere, this may be your world, BUT THIS IS MY BRAIN, AND I HAVE NOT GIVEN YOU PERMISSION TO MESS WITH IT!”
** badass implications averted as the witch proceeded to effortlessly deliver a merciless beatdown on the Lost Souls.
-> '''Leila''': “This may be Nowhere, this may be your world, BUT THIS IS MY BRAIN, AND I HAVE NOT GIVEN YOU PERMISSION TO MESS WITH IT!”
** badass implications averted as the witch proceeded to effortlessly deliver a merciless beatdown on the Lost Souls.
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* TeachHimAnger: possibly Leila, in the second witch fight.
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* BlackMagic: This chapter is pretty much full of it.
* DoomedExpedition: Their trek into the dark side of Nowhere.
* HeroicBSOD: Multiple characters during the second fight.
* HopelessBossFight: The rematch against the witch seems to be this.
* ShoutOut: The chapter's title, and the character of the same name, trace their origins back to a creepypasta describing a ritual to summon a spirit into the house.
* SummoningRitual: The midnight game.
* TakenForGranite: The witch's signature stoneflesh spell turns it victims to stone.
* WhenTreesAttack: The trees the witch summoned in their second fight.
* WickedWitch: Sunken cheeks, skeletal fingers, "a voice that sounded a thousand years old", and fingernails that she uses to stab people.
* DoomedExpedition: Their trek into the dark side of Nowhere.
* HeroicBSOD: Multiple characters during the second fight.
* HopelessBossFight: The rematch against the witch seems to be this.
* ShoutOut: The chapter's title, and the character of the same name, trace their origins back to a creepypasta describing a ritual to summon a spirit into the house.
* SummoningRitual: The midnight game.
* TakenForGranite: The witch's signature stoneflesh spell turns it victims to stone.
* WhenTreesAttack: The trees the witch summoned in their second fight.
* WickedWitch: Sunken cheeks, skeletal fingers, "a voice that sounded a thousand years old", and fingernails that she uses to stab people.
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*BlackMagic: This chapter is pretty much full of it.
