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* AesopAmnesia: You'd think that, after the fiasco with the enforcers, Spider-Man would know better that jumping blindly into the action without a plan, but no. He goes and does the same against the Kingpin.
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* AesopAmnesia: You'd think that, after the fiasco with the enforcers, Spider-Man would know better that than jumping blindly into the action without a plan, but no. He goes and does the same against the Kingpin.
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** The enforcers are talking about the Kingpin. Ox and Dan want to turn against him for petty reasons, Ox tries to force some sense into them. And the clarifies "Don't even joke. You never know who's listening".
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** The enforcers are talking about the Kingpin. Ox and Dan want to turn against him for petty reasons, Ox tries to force some sense into them. And the then clarifies "Don't even joke. You never know who's listening".
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: The Enforcers betrayed their Boss, Mr. Big, and sided with Kingpin when Mr. Big defied him. Kingpin killed him while the Enforcers held him. Ox would eventually regret his choice, and started [[DrowningMySorrows drowning his sorrows]].
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: The Enforcers betrayed their Boss, boss, Mr. Big, and sided with Kingpin when Mr. Big defied him. Kingpin killed him while the Enforcers held him. Ox would eventually regret his choice, and started [[DrowningMySorrows drowning his sorrows]].drinking]].
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* HellYesMoment: After a pair of fiascos, Spider-Man got the Cds that will incriminate the Kingpin, and managed to stand his ground to Electro and the Enforcers all at the same time. His confidence in himself started to recover, just in time to fight the Kingpin himself.
* HeroWithBadPublicity: The FBI found Spider-Man and the enforcers in a warehouse, and Spider-Man escaped. The Daily Bugle's cover the next day: "Spider-Man: Mob menace". This was the first time that Ultimate Spider-man was hit with this trope. A less visible newspaper has the ComicBook/UltimateXMen logo, and reads "Mutant menace".
* ImproperlyParanoid: Montana wants to take Spider-Man out of the building, quickly, and close the door. The guys must a trap from the feds. Ox says that no, he must be just a guy on his own doing stupid things.
* HeroWithBadPublicity: The FBI found Spider-Man and the enforcers in a warehouse, and Spider-Man escaped. The Daily Bugle's cover the next day: "Spider-Man: Mob menace". This was the first time that Ultimate Spider-man was hit with this trope. A less visible newspaper has the ComicBook/UltimateXMen logo, and reads "Mutant menace".
* ImproperlyParanoid: Montana wants to take Spider-Man out of the building, quickly, and close the door. The guys must a trap from the feds. Ox says that no, he must be just a guy on his own doing stupid things.
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* HellYesMoment: After a pair of fiascos, Spider-Man got the Cds [=CDs=] that will incriminate the Kingpin, and managed to stand his ground to Electro and the Enforcers all at the same time. His confidence in himself started to recover, just in time to fight the Kingpin himself.
* HeroWithBadPublicity: The FBI found Spider-Man and the enforcers in a warehouse, and Spider-Man escaped. The Daily Bugle's cover the next day: "Spider-Man: Mobmenace".Menace". This was the first time that Ultimate Spider-man was hit with this trope. A less visible newspaper has the ComicBook/UltimateXMen logo, and reads "Mutant menace".
* ImproperlyParanoid: Montana wants to take Spider-Man out of the building, quickly, and close the door. The guys must escape a trap from the feds. Ox says that no, he must be just a guy on his own doing stupid things.
* HeroWithBadPublicity: The FBI found Spider-Man and the enforcers in a warehouse, and Spider-Man escaped. The Daily Bugle's cover the next day: "Spider-Man: Mob
* ImproperlyParanoid: Montana wants to take Spider-Man out of the building, quickly, and close the door. The guys must escape a trap from the feds. Ox says that no, he must be just a guy on his own doing stupid things.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Spider-Man's first attack to the enforcers. he did it completely unprepared and with no plan, but he also ruined the attempt of the feds to capture those criminals. With the mess he had done, and escaping from the crime scene, he gave them the perfect excuse to claim that they were the victims in there.
* NoSympathyForGrudgeholders: Dan wants the enforcers to destroy a Mc Donalds near his house, because they rejected him for a job... back when he was in high school. The other two guys tell him to get over it.
* NoSympathyForGrudgeholders: Dan wants the enforcers to destroy a Mc Donalds near his house, because they rejected him for a job... back when he was in high school. The other two guys tell him to get over it.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Spider-Man's first attack to the enforcers. he He did it completely unprepared and with no plan, but he also ruined the attempt of the feds to capture those criminals. With the mess he had done, and escaping from the crime scene, he gave them the perfect excuse to claim that they were the victims in there.
* NoSympathyForGrudgeholders: Dan wants the enforcers to destroy aMc Donalds [=McDonalds=] near his house, because they rejected him for a job... back when he was in high school. The other two guys tell him to get over it.
* NoSympathyForGrudgeholders: Dan wants the enforcers to destroy a
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* PlayingPossum: Spider-Man used this trick when he had to fight to Enforcers and Electro all at the same time, and Ox managed to grab and attack him.
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* PlayingPossum: Spider-Man used this trick when he had to fight to the Enforcers and Electro all at the same time, and Ox managed to grab and attack him.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Peter gave himself one, after being easily defeated by Electro.
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* ScrewTheRulesIMakeThem: Jameson is making a big load of smoke with his cigar. When it goes out, we can see the sign "No smoking please".
* SpiderSense: Spider-Man has finally figured out the meaning of that buzz in his head he feels sometimes: it means that something bad is about to happen.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Peter Parker gave one to himself, after being easily defeated by Electro.
* TropicalEpilogue: Kingpin escaped from the country and ended in a tropical location. But, contrary to tradition, it was not a happy ending for him. He was angry about the whole thing, and expecting his lawyer to solve everything asap, so he can return.
* YouHaveFailedMe: Discussed. Dan wants the enforcers to thrash a Mc Donalds that rejected him for a job several years ago. Montana pointed the likely reaction of the Kingpin if he discovers that they did such an operation without his approval. Either that, or he already owns the Mc Donalds to begin with.
* SpiderSense: Spider-Man has finally figured out the meaning of that buzz in his head he feels sometimes: it means that something bad is about to happen.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Peter Parker gave one to himself, after being easily defeated by Electro.
* TropicalEpilogue: Kingpin escaped from the country and ended in a tropical location. But, contrary to tradition, it was not a happy ending for him. He was angry about the whole thing, and expecting his lawyer to solve everything asap, so he can return.
* YouHaveFailedMe: Discussed. Dan wants the enforcers to thrash a Mc Donalds that rejected him for a job several years ago. Montana pointed the likely reaction of the Kingpin if he discovers that they did such an operation without his approval. Either that, or he already owns the Mc Donalds to begin with.
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* ScrewTheRulesIMakeThem: Jameson is making a big load of smoke with his cigar. When it he goes out, we can see the sign "No smoking please".
* SpiderSense: Spider-Man has finally figured out the meaning of that buzz in his head he feels sometimes: it means that something bad is about tohappen.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Peter Parker gave one to himself, after being easily defeated by Electro.
happen.
* TropicalEpilogue: Kingpin escaped from the country and ended in a tropical location. But, contrary to tradition, it was not a happy ending for him. He was angry about the whole thing, and expecting his lawyer to solve everythingasap, [=ASAP=], so he can return.
* YouHaveFailedMe: Discussed. Dan wants the enforcers to thrash aMc Donalds [=McDonalds=] that rejected him for a job several years ago. Montana pointed the likely reaction of the Kingpin if he discovers that they did such an operation without his approval. Either that, or he already owns the Mc Donalds [=McDonalds=] to begin with.
* SpiderSense: Spider-Man has finally figured out the meaning of that buzz in his head he feels sometimes: it means that something bad is about to
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Peter Parker gave one to himself, after being easily defeated by Electro.
* TropicalEpilogue: Kingpin escaped from the country and ended in a tropical location. But, contrary to tradition, it was not a happy ending for him. He was angry about the whole thing, and expecting his lawyer to solve everything
* YouHaveFailedMe: Discussed. Dan wants the enforcers to thrash a
