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* DarkerAndEdgier: A series supposedly for children doing a story in which [[spoiler: industrialists buy aliens as slaves]]? Even by SJA standards, this is darker and edgier stuff than the norm.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: A series supposedly for children doing a story in which [[spoiler: industrialists [[spoiler:industrialists buy aliens as slaves]]? Even by SJA standards, this is darker and edgier stuff than the norm.
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-->'''Sarah Jane''': I'm going to stop you.
-->'''Harrison''': What are you going to do? [[HandbagOfHurt Hit me with your handbag?]]
-->'''Harrison''': What are you going to do? [[HandbagOfHurt Hit me with your handbag?]]
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-->'''Sarah Jane''': Jane:''' I'm going to stop you.
-->'''Harrison''':you.\\
'''Harrison:''' What are you going to do? [[HandbagOfHurt Hit me with your handbag?]]
-->'''Harrison''':
'''Harrison:''' What are you going to do? [[HandbagOfHurt Hit me with your handbag?]]
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-->'''Clyde''': Isn't that a bit dangerous, though? They know you know.
-->'''Sarah Jane''': Oh, I know they know I know. That's the only way to get in.
-->'''Sky''': And they know you know they know you know.
-->'''Sarah Jane''': Sometimes that's the best way.
-->'''Sarah Jane''': Oh, I know they know I know. That's the only way to get in.
-->'''Sky''': And they know you know they know you know.
-->'''Sarah Jane''': Sometimes that's the best way.
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-->'''Sarah Jane''':
'''Sarah Jane:''' Oh, I know they know I know. That's the only way to get
-->'''Sky''':
'''Sky:''' And they know you know they know you
-->'''Sarah Jane''':
'''Sarah Jane:''' Sometimes that's the best way.
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* ProjectedMan / MobileSuitHuman: [[spoiler: Joseph Serf is a hologram controlled from a room by a team of Skullions.]]
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* ProjectedMan / MobileSuitHuman: [[spoiler: Joseph [[spoiler:Joseph Serf is a hologram controlled from a room by a team of Skullions.]]
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--> '''Luke:''' Remember, he's American.
--> ''Sky makes Serf talk like a cowboy''
--> '''Luke:''' You've been watching ''Toy Story'' again!
--> ''Sky grins''
--> ''Sky makes Serf talk like a cowboy''
--> '''Luke:''' You've been watching ''Toy Story'' again!
--> ''Sky grins''
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'''Luke:''' You've been watching ''Toy Story''
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-->'''Harrison'''': Sarah Jane Smith. Step away from them.
-->'''Sarah Jane''': You're too late. I said I'd stop you.
-->'''Harrison''': You and whose army?
-->''(A massive spaceship pops into existence above the building.)''
-->'''Sarah Jane''': That army.
-->'''Sarah Jane''': You're too late. I said I'd stop you.
-->'''Harrison''': You and whose army?
-->''(A massive spaceship pops into existence above the building.)''
-->'''Sarah Jane''': That army.
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-->'''Sarah Jane''':
'''Sarah Jane:''' You're too late. I said I'd stop
-->'''Harrison''':
'''Harrison:''' You and whose
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''(A massive spaceship pops into existence above the building.
-->'''Sarah Jane''':
'''Sarah Jane:''' That army.
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->'''Sarah Jane:''' "I've seen amazing things out there in space. But strange things can happen wherever you are. I've learned that life on earth can be an adventure, too. But, in all the universe, I never expected to find a family."
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->''"I've seen amazing things out there in space. But strange things can happen wherever you are. I've learned that life on earth can be an adventure, too. But, in all the universe, I never expected to find a family.
-->-- '''Sarah Jane'''
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** Also oddly given the MoralMyopia treatment by Luke, as he hopes Mr. Harrison is put to work by the Skullions on the spaceship.
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** The Skullions, like [[Franchise/StarWars the Jawas]], are short aliens with high, chittering voices who wear long brown hooded robes. They also act a lot like [[WesternAnimation/DespicableMe the Minions]] or [[Literature/CharlieAndTheChocolateFactory the Oompa-Loompas]].
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** The Skullions, like [[Franchise/StarWars the Jawas]], are short aliens with high, chittering voices who wear long brown hooded robes. They also act a lot like [[WesternAnimation/DespicableMe [[Franchise/DespicableMe the Minions]] or [[Literature/CharlieAndTheChocolateFactory the Oompa-Loompas]].
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* ThePollyanna: Harrison refers to Sky as such when she tries to condemn him.
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%% * GettingCrapPastThe Radar: Due to overwhelming and persistent misuse, GCPTR is on-page examples only until 01 June 2021. If you are reading this in the future, please check the trope page to make sure your example fits the current definition.
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** To ''WesternAnimation/ToyStory'':
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** To ''WesternAnimation/ToyStory'':''Franchise/ToyStory'':
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** Ironically, this is one of the only stories to actually focus on Sarah Jane's job as a reporter beyond being a way to get in the door. When the kids express amazement that she's considered one of the top journalists in the country, she snarks right back at them.
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** Ironically, this is one of the only stories to actually focus on Sarah Jane's job as a reporter beyond it being a way to get in the door. When the kids express amazement that she's considered one of the top journalists in the country, she snarks right back at them.
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* MassHypnosis: How Serf convinces people to support his computer. Does not work on Sarah Jane Smith.
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* MassHypnosis: How Serf convinces people to support his computer.computer despite it being completely unremarkable. Does not work on Sarah Jane Smith.
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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: Serf is obviously an {{Expy}} of Creator/SteveJobs, combined with Howard Hughes (reclusive, autocratic, refuses to deal with people). The fact Serf is [[spoiler: actually dead and Jobs died not long before the episode aired]] is purely coincidence.
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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: Serf is obviously an {{Expy}} of Creator/SteveJobs, combined with Howard Hughes (reclusive, autocratic, refuses to deal with people). The fact Serf is [[spoiler: actually [[spoiler:actually dead and Jobs died not long before the episode aired]] is purely coincidence.
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** "I'm an old hand at hypnotism," Sarah Jane says while resisting Serf's influence. This is from the companion who holds the record for being subjected to hypnotism/mind control in ''Series/Doctor Who''.
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** "I'm an old hand at hypnotism," Sarah Jane says while resisting Serf's influence. This is from the companion who holds the record for being subjected to hypnotism/mind control in ''Series/Doctor Who''.''Series/DoctorWho''.
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** "I'm an old hand at hypnotism." This from the companion who holds the record for hypnotism/mind control.
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** "I'm an old hand at hypnotism." hypnotism," Sarah Jane says while resisting Serf's influence. This is from the companion who holds the record for being subjected to hypnotism/mind control.control in ''Series/Doctor Who''.
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** The Skullions, like [[StarWars the Jawas]], are short aliens with high, chittering voices who wear long brown hooded robes. They also act a lot like [[WesternAnimation/DespicableMe the Minions]] or [[Literature/CharlieAndTheChocolateFactory the Oompa-Loompas]].
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** The Skullions, like [[StarWars [[Franchise/StarWars the Jawas]], are short aliens with high, chittering voices who wear long brown hooded robes. They also act a lot like [[WesternAnimation/DespicableMe the Minions]] or [[Literature/CharlieAndTheChocolateFactory the Oompa-Loompas]].
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar:
** Luke sends a Morse code message to Mr Smith. "G-R-A-B H-A-R-R-I-S-O-N-S P-E-N-full stop." Clyde remarks [[TheProblemWithPenIsland "I've never been so glad to see a full stop before."]]
** The idea of having two seventeen-year-old students posing as a married couple probably qualifies.
** Luke sends a Morse code message to Mr Smith. "G-R-A-B H-A-R-R-I-S-O-N-S P-E-N-full stop." Clyde remarks [[TheProblemWithPenIsland "I've never been so glad to see a full stop before."]]
** The idea of having two seventeen-year-old students posing as a married couple probably qualifies.
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%% * GettingCrapPastTheRadar:
** Luke sends a Morse code messageGettingCrapPastThe Radar: Due to Mr Smith. "G-R-A-B H-A-R-R-I-S-O-N-S P-E-N-full stop." Clyde remarks [[TheProblemWithPenIsland "I've never been so glad overwhelming and persistent misuse, GCPTR is on-page examples only until 01 June 2021. If you are reading this in the future, please check the trope page to see a full stop before."]]
** The idea of having two seventeen-year-old students posing as a married couple probably qualifies.make sure your example fits the current definition.
** Luke sends a Morse code message
** The idea of having two seventeen-year-old students posing as a married couple probably qualifies.
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* AmericansAreCowboys: When Sky tries to make Serf sound American (though to be fair she is basing the template on her favorite movie, ''WesternAnimation/ToyStory'').
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* AmericansAreCowboys: When Sky tries to make Serf sound American (though to be fair she is basing the template on her favorite movie, ''WesternAnimation/ToyStory'').''WesternAnimation/ToyStory1'').
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* {{Cyclops}}: the Skultians.
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* {{Cyclops}}: the The Skultians.
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* DeadAllAlong: Joseph Serf.
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* DeadAllAlong: Joseph Serf.Serf was killed in a skiing accident in 2007. He is kept alive as a hologram.
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* FantasticRacism: loads from Harrison.
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* FantasticRacism: loads Loads from Harrison.
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* IKnowYouKnowIKnow
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* IKnowYouKnowIKnowIKnowYouKnowIKnow:
-->'''Clyde''': Isn't that a bit dangerous, though? They know you know.
-->'''Sarah Jane''': Oh, I know they know I know. That's the only way to get in.
-->'''Sky''': And they know you know they know you know.
-->'''Sarah Jane''': Sometimes that's the best way.
-->'''Clyde''': Isn't that a bit dangerous, though? They know you know.
-->'''Sarah Jane''': Oh, I know they know I know. That's the only way to get in.
-->'''Sky''': And they know you know they know you know.
-->'''Sarah Jane''': Sometimes that's the best way.
* ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything: Lampshaded when Sarah Jane is invited to a special gathering of only top journalists, and she notes, "What do you think pays for all of this? Taking in washing?"
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* PutOnABus: K-9 is back at Oxford backing up the Bodleian Library. (Real-life reason: The prop could not be licensed for Series 5 due to the character being used in the non-BBC ''Series/{{K9}}'' spin-off series.)
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* SeriesFinale: An unintended one due to Elisabeth Sladen's death. After a montage of clips from all five series, as well as including footage from the School Reunion episode from ''Series/DoctorWho'' series 2, a message on screen says that the adventure will continue forever.
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* SeriesFinale: An unintended one due to Elisabeth Sladen's Creator/ElisabethSladen's death. After a montage of clips from all five series, as well as including footage from the "[[Recap/DoctorWhoS28E3SchoolReunion School Reunion episode from ''Series/DoctorWho'' series 2, Reunion]]", a message on screen says that the adventure will continue forever.
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* WrittenInAbsence: K-9 is back at Oxford backing up the Bodleian Library. (Real-life reason: The prop could not be licensed for Series 5 due to the character being used in the non-BBC ''Series/{{K9}}'' spin-off series.)
* YouAndWhatArmy:
-->'''Harrison'''': Sarah Jane Smith. Step away from them.
-->'''Sarah Jane''': You're too late. I said I'd stop you.
-->'''Harrison''': You and whose army?
-->''(A massive spaceship pops into existence above the building.)''
-->'''Sarah Jane''': That army.
* YouAndWhatArmy:
-->'''Harrison'''': Sarah Jane Smith. Step away from them.
-->'''Sarah Jane''': You're too late. I said I'd stop you.
-->'''Harrison''': You and whose army?
-->''(A massive spaceship pops into existence above the building.)''
-->'''Sarah Jane''': That army.
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** Adriana was named after the character in ''Series/TheSopranos''.
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* {{Tuckerization}}: Gareth Roberts named John Harrison after a friend who was an actor.
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The unintentional final episode of the series, which unfortunately makes us bid goodbye to our beloved ensemble cast, and only made so because Elisabeth Sladen lost her fight with cancer.
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The unintentional final episode of the series, which unfortunately makes us bid goodbye to our beloved ensemble cast, and only made so because Elisabeth Sladen Creator/ElisabethSladen lost her fight with cancer.
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* AmericansAreCowboys: When Sky tries to make Serf sound American (though to be fair she is basing the template on her favorite movie, WesternAnimation/ToyStory).
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* AmericansAreCowboys: When Sky tries to make Serf sound American (though to be fair she is basing the template on her favorite movie, WesternAnimation/ToyStory).''WesternAnimation/ToyStory'').
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** To ''Series/ThePrisoner'': The pseudonym "Joseph Serf" was used by Patrick [=McGoohan=]. (Guest star Peter Bowles once appeared on that series, too.)
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** To ''Series/ThePrisoner'': ''Series/{{The Prisoner|1967}}'': The pseudonym "Joseph Serf" was used by Patrick [=McGoohan=]. (Guest star Peter Bowles once appeared on that series, too.)
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** Clyde mentions the Rakweed from "The Gift."
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** Clyde mentions the Rakweed from "The Gift.Gift" and his experiences with Ellie from "The Curse of Clyde Langer."
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** When the kids express amazement that she's one of the top journalists in the country, Sarah Jane asks, "What do you think pays for all this? Taking in washing?"
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* {{UST}}: As usual with Clani.
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* BittersweetEnding: A double-the story ends on mostly a high note, though there is the fact that the real Serf will be tainted by the hologram. And then there's the ending of the entire series, which manages to combine {{Tearjerker}} with {{Crowning Moment of Heartwarming}}.
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* BittersweetEnding: A double-the story ends on mostly a high note, though there is the fact that the real Serf will be tainted by the hologram. And then there's the ending of the entire series, which manages to combine {{Tearjerker}} with {{Crowning Moment of Heartwarming}}.series.
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The unintentional final episode of the series, which unfortunately makes us bid goodbye to our beloved ensemble cast, and only made so because Elisabeth Sladen lost her fight with cancer.
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** This is Sarah Jane. Who ''knows'' what she actually ''does'' have in said handbag?
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* BreadEggsMilkSquick: Would you like something to drink, Sarah Jane? Coffee? Tea? Anthrax?
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* BittersweetEnding: A double-the story ends on mostly a high note, though there is the fact that the real Serf will be tainted by the hologram. And then there's the ending of the entire series, which manages to combine {{Tearjerker}} with {{Crowning Moment of Heartwarming}}.
* BreadEggsMilkSquick:Would "Would you like something to drink, Sarah Jane? Coffee? Tea? Anthrax?Anthrax?"
* BreadEggsMilkSquick:
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* DarkerAndEdgier: a series supposedly for children doing a story in which [[spoiler: industrialists buy aliens as slaves]]? Even by SJA standards, this is darker and edgier stuff than the norm.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: a A series supposedly for children doing a story in which [[spoiler: industrialists buy aliens as slaves]]? Even by SJA standards, this is darker and edgier stuff than the norm.
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* ExplosiveLeash
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* ExplosiveLeashExplosiveLeash: Harrison puts on on the Skullions to keep them controlled.
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* NoSell: Sarah Jane barely even seems to notice the hypnotism.
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* MeaningfulName: Skullion sounds like "scullion," a drudge worker. Similarly, a serf was a peasant who worked like a slave on a large estate, and not even [[TsaristRussia the formal abolition of serfdom by Tsar Alexander II]] improved their lives in any appreciable way.
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* MeaningfulName: Skullion sounds like "scullion," a drudge worker. Similarly, a serf was a peasant who worked like a slave on a large estate, and not even [[TsaristRussia [[UsefulNotes/TsaristRussia the formal abolition of serfdom by Tsar Alexander II]] improved their lives in any appreciable way.
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** [[ASpaceOdyssey Clyde and Rani try to talk out of earshot of the computer, who can still hear them]].
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** [[ASpaceOdyssey [[Film/TwoThousandOneASpaceOdyssey Clyde and Rani try to talk out of earshot of the computer, who can still hear them]].
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* BillionsOfButtons: For some reason, the Serfboard has both a conventional keyboard and a touchpad keyboard similar to an [=iPad=].
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* BillionsOfButtons: BillionsOfButtons:
** For some reason, the Serfboard has both a conventional keyboard and a touchpad keyboard similar to an [=iPad=].
** For some reason, the Serfboard has both a conventional keyboard and a touchpad keyboard similar to an [=iPad=].
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* ContinuityNod: Clyde mentions the Rakweed from "The Gift."
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* ContinuityNod: ContinuityNod:
** Clyde mentions the Rakweed from "The Gift."
** Clyde mentions the Rakweed from "The Gift."
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Luke sends a Morse code message to Mr Smith. "G-R-A-B H-A-R-R-I-S-O-N-S P-E-N-full stop." Clyde remarks [[TheProblemWithPenIsland "I've never been so glad to see a full stop before."]]
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: GettingCrapPastTheRadar:
** Luke sends a Morse code message to Mr Smith. "G-R-A-B H-A-R-R-I-S-O-N-S P-E-N-full stop." Clyde remarks [[TheProblemWithPenIsland "I've never been so glad to see a full stop before."]]
** Luke sends a Morse code message to Mr Smith. "G-R-A-B H-A-R-R-I-S-O-N-S P-E-N-full stop." Clyde remarks [[TheProblemWithPenIsland "I've never been so glad to see a full stop before."]]
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* SlaveryIsASpecialKindOfEvil: With the added sting of Luke acknowledging that it's still practiced on Earth in places.
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** Unintentional prediction: within a couple of years a number of computer companies would introduce tablets with detachable conventional keyboards.
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** Unintentional prediction: within a couple of few years a number of computer companies the story being produced, many small computers would introduce tablets with detachable have both conventional keyboards.keyboards and touchscreen interfaces.
