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** Fluttershy's "freaky knowledge" is not just random nonsense but consists of appropriate terms of art for the fashion industry... [[SubvertedTrope just one that don't have anything to do with the actual matters at hand]].
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** Fluttershy's "freaky knowledge" is not just random nonsense but consists of appropriate terms of art for the fashion industry... [[SubvertedTrope just one ones that don't have anything to do with the actual matters at hand]].
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trope was cut/disambiguated due to cleanup
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In the end, Rarity has learned that you can't please everypony, and her friends have learned not to look a gift horse (or [[JustForPun a horse's gift]]) in the mouth.
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In the end, Rarity has learned that you can't please everypony, and her friends have learned not to look a gift horse (or [[JustForPun a horse's gift]]) in the mouth.
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* ItSeemedLikeAGoodIdeaAtTheTime: The five ponies were ecstatic about getting their dresses made to every detail. When they finally try them on in public however, they realise their ideas weren't ''quite'' as elegant as they thought.
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* ItSeemedLikeAGoodIdeaAtTheTime: The five ponies were ecstatic about getting their dresses made to every detail. When they finally try them on in public however, they realise realize their ideas weren't ''quite'' as elegant as they thought.
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-->'''Hoity Toity:''' Oh, those amateurish designs look like a piled-on mish mash of everything but the kitchen sink!\\
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-->'''Hoity Toity:''' Oh, those amateurish designs look like a piled-on mish mash mish-mash of everything but the kitchen sink!\\
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* KnowNothingKnowItAll: Fluttershy is proved this when she shows freaky knowledge of sewing and stitching - but her demands result in a dress that's just as ugly as the rest. Fans have analysed her comments and found that, while she knows sewing, she knows absolutely nothing about design.
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* KnowNothingKnowItAll: Fluttershy is proved proves this when she shows freaky knowledge of sewing and stitching - but her demands result in a dress that's just as ugly as the rest. Fans have analysed her comments and found that, while she knows sewing, she knows absolutely nothing about design.
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* MadnessMakeover: Rarity's mane becomes progressively messier the more stressed-out she gets.
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* MadnessMakeover: Rarity's mane becomes progressively messier the more stressed-out stressed out she gets.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The groups' attempt to get the dresses made exactly how they want them nearly destroy Rarity's career.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The groups' attempt to get the dresses made exactly how they want wanted them nearly destroy destroys Rarity's career.
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* BriffitsAndSqueans: Rarity emits these (flying sweat drops from the head) when noticing Opalescence stranded in a tree.
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* NewspaperComicEffects: Rarity emits these (flying sweat drops from the head) when noticing Opalescence stranded in a tree.
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: Fluttershy specifically references "French ''haute couture''," which implies that France exists in the MLP universe. Later episodes would start the convention of giving real-world cities and countries "ponified" names (Saudi Arabia = Saddle Arabia, Manhattan = Manehattan, etc), so Fluttershy using the demonym of a real country comes off as odd.
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: Fluttershy specifically references "French ''haute couture''," couture''", and Hoity Toity mentions "Dutch apple pie", which implies imply that France exists and the Netherlands respectively exist in the MLP universe. Later episodes would start the convention of giving real-world cities and countries "ponified" names (Saudi Arabia = Saddle Arabia, Manhattan = Manehattan, etc), so Fluttershy using the demonym of a real country comes off as odd.
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Nice Hat is now dewicked
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* NiceHat: In addition to Applejack's signature hat, Pinkie Pie's original dress comes with one. All five redesigns have [[RummageSaleReject not-so-nice hats]] to match the [[ImpossiblyTackyClothes dresses]].
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* JobSong: "Art of the Dress" is about Rarity's job as a fashion designer and seamstress, sung as she's making gala dresses for her friends. After they don't like the end result, it gets a DarkReprise where she has to make new ones while dealing with their various demands.
--->''[[SarcasmMode Dressmaking's easy]], every customer's call\\
Brings a whole new revision\\
Have to pick up the pace, still hold to my vision''
--->''[[SarcasmMode Dressmaking's easy]], every customer's call\\
Brings a whole new revision\\
Have to pick up the pace, still hold to my vision''
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* EatTheCamera: Rarity does this during "Art of the Dress".
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* EatTheCamera: Rarity does this during "Art of the Dress".Dress", holding a note as the camera collides with her swinging uvula.
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** Listen to the expert if your suggestions for something aren’t going to be a good idea.
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: Fluttershy specifically references "French ''haute couture''," which implies that France exists in the MLP universe. Later episodes would start the convention of giving real-world cities and countries "ponified" names (Saudi Arabia = Saddle Arabia, Manhattan = Manehattan, etc), so Fluttershy using the demonym of a real country comes off as odd.
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* SuddenlyAlwaysKnewThat: When pressed for her thoughts about her dress, Fluttershy launches into a perfect fusillade of technically-accurate sewing and fashion terms. It's never explained how she knows any of it.
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* EyelashFluttering: When Rarity imagines herself showing up to the Grand Galloping Gala in a beautiful dress she made herself, she pretends to receive compliments on it and bats her eyes at the imaginary crowd.
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About fans or critics praising it such audiences don't think it measures up. Not just disappointment.
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Her friends are initially grateful and excited... [[HypeBacklash too excited]], as it turns out, for when they see the dresses Rarity's made for them, they're not ''quite'' satisfied with them. Rarity graciously puts her original work aside in favor of the dresses her friends really want, even though their tacky, overly-critical, or vague suggestions result in ridiculous creations that strain her artistic sensibilities. To make matters worse, Spike informs Rarity that the famous fashion critic Hoity Toity will be coming in from Canterlot to attend the fashion show.
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Her friends are initially grateful and excited... [[HypeBacklash too excited]], Too excited, as it turns out, for when they see the dresses Rarity's made for them, they're not ''quite'' satisfied with them. Rarity graciously puts her original work aside in favor of the dresses her friends really want, even though their tacky, overly-critical, or vague suggestions result in ridiculous creations that strain her artistic sensibilities. To make matters worse, Spike informs Rarity that the famous fashion critic Hoity Toity will be coming in from Canterlot to attend the fashion show.
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Hair Decorations isn't a trope anymore.
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* HairDecorations: Each one of the dresses includes some sort of NiceHat, hair clip, or crown. The reject dresses have their own hair decs, but they're ''not'' so cute.
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* UnsatisfiableCustomer: The other five morph into these over the new dresses, with [[BetterThanABareBulb lamphsades hung everywhere]]; see the page quote for one of the more frustrating examples.
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* UnsatisfiableCustomer: The other five morph into these over the new dresses, with [[BetterThanABareBulb lamphsades lampshades hung everywhere]]; see the page quote for one of the more frustrating examples.
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* DamnedByFaintPraise: Rarity's friends' reaction to the original designs is tepid.
-->'''Twilight Sparkle:''' They sure are...um...something.\\
-->'''Twilight Sparkle:''' They sure are...um...something.\\
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* DamnedByFaintPraise: DamnedByFaintPraise:
** Rarity's friends' reaction to the original designs is tepid.
-->'''Twilight --->'''Twilight Sparkle:''' They sure are...um...are... um... something.\\
** Rarity's friends' reaction to the original designs is tepid.
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-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' Do you think we overdid it?
-->'''Applejack:''' Nah...
-->''(Applejack makes a quick glance at her dress, consisting of mega-sized boots and ten gallon hat)''
-->'''Applejack:''' Okay, maybe a little.
-->'''Applejack:''' Nah...
-->''(Applejack makes a quick glance at her dress, consisting of mega-sized boots and ten gallon hat)''
-->'''Applejack:''' Okay, maybe a little.
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-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' Do you think we overdid it?
-->'''Applejack:''' Nah...
-->''(Applejack makesit?\\
'''Applejack:''' Nah...\\
''(Applejack gives a quick glance at her dress, consisting of mega-sized boots and ten gallonhat)''
-->'''Applejack:'''hat)''\\
'''Applejack:''' Okay, maybe a little.
-->'''Applejack:''' Nah...
-->''(Applejack makes
'''Applejack:''' Nah...\\
''(Applejack gives a quick glance at her dress, consisting of mega-sized boots and ten gallon
-->'''Applejack:'''
'''Applejack:''' Okay, maybe a little.
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* FashionShow:
** ''[=FiM=]'' is noteworthy for making an episode about a fashion show into a ''parody'' of the fashion industry (also seen in "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E20GreenIsntYourColor "Green Isn't Your Color]]"), instead of having it look like a bunch of children playing dress-up.
** ''[=FiM=]'' is noteworthy for making an episode about a fashion show into a ''parody'' of the fashion industry (also seen in "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E20GreenIsntYourColor "Green Isn't Your Color]]"), instead of having it look like a bunch of children playing dress-up.
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* FashionShow:
**FashionShow: ''[=FiM=]'' is noteworthy for making an episode about a fashion show into a ''parody'' of the fashion industry (also seen in "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E20GreenIsntYourColor "Green Green Isn't Your Color]]"), instead of having it look like a bunch of children playing dress-up.
**
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: When Rainbow Dash crashes into the Boutique at the start of the episode, a few bolts of cloth come unraveled and drape across Dash, making her look like she'd fit in at a toga party. This inspires Rarity to exclaim "I-DEA!" and envision the design of what would ultimately become Rainbow Dash's Romanesque Gala dress.
** Of all the ponies, Fluttershy gives the most specific and direct criticisms of her dress, pointing out things like stitching that don't meet her approval. This foreshadows her talents for stitching, which helps the ponies finish Rarity's prototype dress late in the episode.
** Of all the ponies, Fluttershy gives the most specific and direct criticisms of her dress, pointing out things like stitching that don't meet her approval. This foreshadows her talents for stitching, which helps the ponies finish Rarity's prototype dress late in the episode.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: {{Foreshadowing}}:
** When Rainbow Dash crashes into the Boutique at the start of the episode, a few bolts of cloth come unraveled and drape across Dash, making her look like she'd fit in at a toga party. This inspires Rarity to exclaim "I-DEA!" and envision the design of what would ultimately become Rainbow Dash's Romanesque Gala dress.
**Of all the ponies, Fluttershy gives the most specific and direct criticisms of her dress, pointing out things like stitching that don't meet her approval. This foreshadows her talents for stitching, which helps the ponies finish Rarity's prototype dress late in the episode.
** When Rainbow Dash crashes into the Boutique at the start of the episode, a few bolts of cloth come unraveled and drape across Dash, making her look like she'd fit in at a toga party. This inspires Rarity to exclaim "I-DEA!" and envision the design of what would ultimately become Rainbow Dash's Romanesque Gala dress.
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* HiddenDepths: Fluttershy turns out to have a "freaky knowledge of sewing", as demonstrated when Rarity browbeats her into giving a critique of the dress Rarity designed:
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* HiddenDepths: Fluttershy turns out to have a "freaky knowledge of sewing", as demonstrated when Rarity browbeats her into giving a critique of the dress Rarity designed:designed. {{Subverted|Trope}}, however, in that everything she says is pure gibberish and her dress ends up just as tacky as the others.
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'''Fluttershy:''' But...uh...you know...um...whatever you want to do is fine...\\
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'''Fluttershy:''' But...uh... uh... you know...um... whatever you want to do is fine...\\
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** [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] in that everything she says is pure gibberish and inaccurate, since her dress ends up just as tacky as the others.
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* InformedAbility: Fans who [[http://dirtyfruit.tumblr.com/post/160579005140/my-least-favorite-moment-in-all-of-mlp-was-that sew]] have pointed out that Fluttershy's "freaky knowledge" of sewing could qualify as this.
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* InformedAbility: Fans who [[http://dirtyfruit.tumblr.com/post/160579005140/my-least-favorite-moment-in-all-of-mlp-was-that sew]] have pointed out that Fluttershy's "freaky knowledge" of sewing could can qualify as this.this -- among other things, machine stitching is generally ''better'', more regular and less obtrusive than all but the most delicate and time intensive manual stitches, and topstitch like the one she wanted ''is'' a machine stitch, and in particular one only used for decoration.
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--->Piece by piece, snip by snip\\
--->Piece by piece, snip by snip\\
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--->Piece
Piece by piece, snip by snip\\
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** Fluttershy's "freaky knowledge" is not just random nonsense but are appropriate terms of art for the fashion industry. [[SubvertedTrope Except that it kind of is.]]
** Hoity Toity says "brava" instead of "bravo" when talking to Rarity. He, and by extension the writers, seem to know their Italian.
** Hoity Toity says "brava" instead of "bravo" when talking to Rarity. He, and by extension the writers, seem to know their Italian.
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** Fluttershy's "freaky knowledge" is not just random nonsense but are consists of appropriate terms of art for the fashion industry. industry... [[SubvertedTrope Except just one that it kind of is.]]
don't have anything to do with the actual matters at hand]].
** Hoity Toity says "brava" instead of "bravo" when talking toRarity.Rarity, the correct feminine version of the term, instead of the usual, but strictly masculine, "bravo". He, and by extension the writers, seem to know their Italian.
** Hoity Toity says "brava" instead of "bravo" when talking to
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'''Fluttershy:''' Uh...Panic?\\
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'''Fluttershy:''' Uh...Panic?\\ panic?\\
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Needless to say, the show is a disaster, and Hoity Toity's scathing criticism of the redone dresses leaves Rarity utterly humiliated, driving her to lock herself in her room for days to wallow in "whatever it is ponies are supposed to wallow in." Feeling guilty, Rarity's friends manage to cook up a scheme to cheer her up: first, they put Fluttershy's knowledge of sewing to use putting the finishing touches on Rarity's Gala dress, then trick her out of her room long enough to show it to her.
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Needless to say, the show is a disaster, and Hoity Toity's scathing criticism of the redone dresses leaves Rarity utterly humiliated, driving her to lock herself in her room for days to wallow in "whatever it is ponies are supposed to wallow in." Feeling guilty, Rarity's friends manage to cook up a scheme to cheer her up: first, they put Fluttershy's knowledge of sewing to use putting the finishing touches on Rarity's own Gala dress, then trick her out of her room long enough to show it to her.
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** You can't always please your friends; you'll only end up pleasing yourself instead.
** Don't be overly critical about someone's gift to you and appreciate it. In other words, never look a gift horse in the mouth.
** Don't be overly critical about someone's gift to you and appreciate it. In other words, never look a gift horse in the mouth.
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** You can't always please Even if you're doing something as a favor for someone else, don't compromise your friends; you'll only end up pleasing yourself instead.
talent and good taste.
**Don't be overly critical about someone's gift to If someone gives you and appreciate it. In other words, never look a gift horse in the mouth.of their labor and talent, receive it with appreciation.
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* ComplainingAboutThingsYouHaventPaidFor: The other ponies learn a lesson about not expecting customized creations when a friend is doing a favor. Oddly, part of the song is a line about their "budget". What budget?
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* ComplainingAboutThingsYouHaventPaidFor: The other ponies learn treat Rarity like a lesson about not expecting customized creations when a friend is doing a favor. sewing machine on hooves and cut off her design objections because it's ''their'' dress. Oddly, part of the song is a line about their the "budget". What budget?
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* Music/AlsoSprachZarathustra: The opening of the song is used in Twilight Sparkle's introduction in the fashion show, complementing her starry-night dress.
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* Music/AlsoSprachZarathustra: The opening of the song is used in Twilight Sparkle's introduction in the fashion show, complementing her starry-night dress.
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* Music/AlsoSprachZarathustra: The opening of the song is used in Twilight Sparkle's introduction in the fashion show, complementing her starry-night dress.