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* FamilyUnfriendlyViolence: Quill's surgery scene.
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* FamilyUnfriendlyViolence: Again, Quill's surgery scene.
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* LawOfInverseFertility: Ballon and Quill sleeping together once impregnates Quill.
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* LawOfInverseFertility: Ballon and Quill sleeping together once the former impregnates Quill.the latter.
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* NonHumanHumanoidHybrid: Ms Quill (a Quill) and Ballon (a Lorr) conceive a child. Although how humanoid it will be is an open question.
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* NonHumanHumanoidHybrid: Ms Ms. Quill (a Quill) and Ballon (a Lorr) conceive a child. Although how humanoid it will be is an open question.
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* ArtificialOutdoorsDisplay: Subverted, when Quill and Ballon are in the Cabinet of Souls a hologram of Coal Hill makes them think they are inside.
* BackwardsFiringGun: The gun that is sent to Quill is one, meaning when Ballon tries to kill her he dies instead.
* BackwardsFiringGun: The gun that is sent to Quill is one, meaning when Ballon tries to kill her he dies instead.
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* ArtificialOutdoorsDisplay: Subverted, when Quill and Ballon are in the Cabinet of Souls Souls, a hologram of Coal Hill makes them think they are inside.
* BackwardsFiringGun: The gun that is sent to Quill is one, meaningwhen Ballon dies instead when he tries to kill her he dies instead.her.
* BackwardsFiringGun: The gun that is sent to Quill is one, meaning
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* HolographicDisguise: A variation. Ballon and Quill think they are back at Coal Hill, but it turns out to be a hologram, they are really in the Cabinet of Souls.
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* HolographicDisguise: A variation. Ballon and Quill think they are back at Coal Hill, but it turns out to be a hologram, hologram; they are really in the Cabinet of Souls.
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* OutgrownSuchSillySuperstitions: Quill emphasizes this about the Quill.
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* OutgrownSuchSillySuperstitions: Quill emphasizes this about the Quill.Quill Goddess.
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* SadisticChoice: There is only enough power for one person to make it out of the Cabinet of Souls, meaning Ballon and Quill have to fight.
* SceneryPorn: The Arn 'heaven'. Probably to make up for the fact that the previous episode took place entirely inside a classroom.
* SceneryPorn: The Arn 'heaven'. Probably to make up for the fact that the previous episode took place entirely inside a classroom.
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* SadisticChoice: There is only enough power for one person to make it out of the Cabinet of Souls, meaning Ballon and Quill have to fight.
fight to the death.
* SceneryPorn: The Arn'heaven'. Probably to make up for the fact that the previous episode took place entirely inside a classroom.heaven.
* SceneryPorn: The Arn
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* SurprisePregnancy: At the end of the episode it turns out Quill is heavily pregnant.
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* SurprisePregnancy: At the end of the episode episode, it turns out Quill is heavily pregnant.
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* ToHellAndBack: One of the locations the group go to is Lorr ap Thriss or Lorr Hell, to get blood from the Lorr God.
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* ToHellAndBack: One of the locations the group go to is Lorr ap Thriss or Lorr Hell, to get blood from the Lorr God.
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* YearInsideHourOutside: They were in the metaphysical engine for a day, but on Earth Quill was only gone 45 minutes. The [[YearOutsideHourInside reverse]] also applies, as while in the cabinet of souls, Quill aged by several months, as shown by her longer hair and ...increased pregnancy.
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* YearInsideHourOutside: They were in the metaphysical engine for a day, but on Earth Quill was only gone 45 minutes. minutes on Earth. The [[YearOutsideHourInside reverse]] also applies, as while in the cabinet of souls, Quill aged by several months, as shown by her longer hair and ...and increased pregnancy.
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It's not fun for most people, either.
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* AndIMustScream: Those in Lorr Hell are statues, which to the shapeshifting Lorr is a terrifying concept.
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* AndIMustScream: Those in Lorr Hell are statues, which to the shapeshifting Lorr is a particularly terrifying concept.
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* NonHumanHumanoidHybrid: Ms Quill (a Quill) and Ballon (a Lore) conceive a child. Although how humanoid it will be is an open question.
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* NonHumanHumanoidHybrid: Ms Quill (a Quill) and Ballon (a Lore) Lorr) conceive a child. Although how humanoid it will be is an open question.
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* HardLight: The Headmistress says the school in the Cabinet was just a hologram, but Ballon could tear down music-stands, put things on tables, etc.
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* HardLight: The Headmistress says the school in the Cabinet was just a hologram, but Ballon could tear down music-stands, music stands, put things on tables, etc.
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* DistinctionWithoutADifference: Quill asks incredulously if they're in Arn Heaven; Dorthea says that they're inside the ''idea'' of Arn Heaven.
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* MetaphysicalPlace: The Metaphysical Engine takes the characters to these places, including Arn Heaven, Lorr Hell, the Quill creation myth and the Rhodian Cabinet of Souls.
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* MetaphysicalPlace: The Metaphysical Engine takes the characters to these places, including Arn Heaven, Lorr Hell, the Quill creation myth myth, and the Rhodian Cabinet of Souls.Souls.
* NonHumanHumanoidHybrid: Ms Quill (a Quill) and Ballon (a Lore) conceive a child. Although how humanoid it will be is an open question.
* NonHumanHumanoidHybrid: Ms Quill (a Quill) and Ballon (a Lore) conceive a child. Although how humanoid it will be is an open question.
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* SadisticChoice: Their is only enough power for one person to make it out of the Cabinet of Souls, meaning Ballon and Quill have to fight.
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* SadisticChoice: Their There is only enough power for one person to make it out of the Cabinet of Souls, meaning Ballon and Quill have to fight.
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* MetaphysicalPlace: The Metaphysical Engine takes the characters to these places, including Arn Heaven, Lore Hell, Quill creation myth and the Rhodian Cabinet of Souls.
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* MetaphysicalPlace: The Metaphysical Engine takes the characters to these places, including Arn Heaven, Lore Lorr Hell, the Quill creation myth and the Rhodian Cabinet of Souls.
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* SurprisePregnancy: At the end of the episode it turns out Quill is heavily pregnant.
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* ArtificialOutdoorsDisplay: Subverted, when Quill and Ballon are in the Cabinet of Souls a hologram of Coal Hill makes them think they are inside.
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* HolographicDisguise: A variation. Ballon and Quill think they are back at Coal Hill, but it turns out to be a hologram, they are really in the Cabinet of Souls.
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* PlotCoupon: The Pheromones of Arns, the blood of the Lorr god, and a Quill brain are needed to enable the Arn's removal.
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* HealingHands: A variation. Ballon is able to use the flesh of the Lorr God to heal Quill's face after he's removed the Arn.
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* DueToTheDead: Quill buries Ballon in the cabinet under a Cairn of stones.
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* MentalWorld: The places the Metaphysical Engine takes people are technically this.
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* OutgrownSuchSillySuperstitions: Quill emphasizes this about the Quill.
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* AndIMustScream: Those in Lorr Hell are statues, which to the shapeshifting Lorr is a terrifying concept.
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* KillTheGod: The Quill Goddess is killed so her brain can be used.
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* ToHellAndBack: One of the locations the group go to is Lorr Hell, to get blood from the Lorr God.
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* ToHellAndBack: One of the locations the group go to is Lorr ap Thriss or Lorr Hell, to get blood from the Lorr God.
