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* ContrivedCoincidence: Skyler goes into labor at just about the same time that Walter is told he has one hour to deliver his first shipment to Gus Fring. Walter makes the dropoff, but in doing so, misses the birth of his daughter.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Skyler goes into labor at just about the same time that Walter is told he has one hour to deliver his first shipment to Gus Fring. Walter makes chooses to make the dropoff, but in doing so, misses the birth of his daughter.dropoff.
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* JustAKid: Combo was worried about the two drug dealers eyeballing him. He definitely wasn't expecting the hit to come from the kid he told to bounce and get lost several times. He never senses the danger the kid poses, even as the kid circled him several times like a vulture. Combo running away while getting nailed several times also suggests he's in complete shock that it was a kid who's shooting him. He seems to share Jesse's belief that ChildrenAreInnocent, and as a result just can't bring himself to shoot back.
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* JustAKid: Combo was worried about the two drug dealers eyeballing him. He definitely wasn't expecting the hit to come from the kid he told to bounce and get lost several times. He never senses the danger the kid poses, even as the kid circled him several times like a vulture. Combo running away while getting nailed several times also suggests he's in complete shock that it was a kid who's shooting him. He seems to share Jesse's belief that ChildrenAreInnocent, and as a result just can't bring himself to shoot back.back or rush at the kid.
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* MushroomSamba: Jesse's first Heroin trip has him in his POV levitating off of his bed, while Jane passes out beside him.
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* MushroomSamba: Jesse's first Heroin heroin trip has him in his POV levitating off of his bed, while Jane passes out beside him.
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* OutOfCharacterAlert: When Walt is spending the day at Los Pollos Hermanos waiting for the drug buyer to show up. In the refection of the windows, Walt sees Gus looking in his direction, and he's ''scowling'' at Walt, not giving the friendly face he'd been putting on when Walt and Jesse had been there earlier. This tips Walt off that Gus is the distributor.
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* OutOfCharacterAlert: When Walt is spending the day at Los Pollos Hermanos waiting for the drug buyer to show up. In the refection of the windows, Walt sees Gus looking in his direction, and he's ''scowling'' he looks at Walt, Walt with a neutral face for 2 seconds, not giving the friendly face he'd been putting on when Walt and Jesse had been there earlier. This tips Walt off that Gus is the distributor.
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: Saul introduces the prospect of Gus Fring by saying "Let's just say, I know a guy who knows a guy... who knows another guy". Mike would later be established as the first guy, but Saul implies a middle-man between him and Gus, when in fact Mike is shown to answer to Gus directly.
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: EarlyInstallmentWeirdness:
** Saul introduces the prospect of Gus Fring by saying "Let's just say, I know a guy who knows a guy... who knows another guy". Mike would later be established as the first guy, but Saul implies a middle-man between him and Gus, when in fact Mike is shown to answer to Gus directly.
** Gus himself puts on a higher voice when speaking to customers at Los Pollos Hermanos, and speaks in his regular, deeper voice in private. In all his later appearances, Gus speaks in his regular voice at all times.
** Saul introduces the prospect of Gus Fring by saying "Let's just say, I know a guy who knows a guy... who knows another guy". Mike would later be established as the first guy, but Saul implies a middle-man between him and Gus, when in fact Mike is shown to answer to Gus directly.
** Gus himself puts on a higher voice when speaking to customers at Los Pollos Hermanos, and speaks in his regular, deeper voice in private. In all his later appearances, Gus speaks in his regular voice at all times.
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* JustAKid: Combo was worried about the two drug dealers eyeballing him. He definitely wasn't expecting the hit to come from the kid he told to bounce and get lost several times. He never senses the danger the kid poses, even as the kid circled him several times like a vulture. Combo running away while getting nailed several times also suggests he's in complete shock that it was a kid who's shooting him. His shock also indicates he seems to share Jesse's belief that ChildrenAreInnocent, and as a result just can't bring himself to shoot back.
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* JustAKid: Combo was worried about the two drug dealers eyeballing him. He definitely wasn't expecting the hit to come from the kid he told to bounce and get lost several times. He never senses the danger the kid poses, even as the kid circled him several times like a vulture. Combo running away while getting nailed several times also suggests he's in complete shock that it was a kid who's shooting him. His shock also indicates he He seems to share Jesse's belief that ChildrenAreInnocent, and as a result just can't bring himself to shoot back.
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* JustAKid: Combo was worried about the two drug dealers eyeballing him. He definitely wasn't expecting the hit to come from the kid he told to bounce and get lost several times. He never senses the danger the kid poses, even as the kid circled him several times like a vulture. Combo running away while getting nailed several times also suggests he's in complete shock that it was a kid who's shooting him. His shock also indicates he seems to share Jesse's belief that ChildrenAreInnocent, and as a result just can't bring himself to shoot back.
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* StoppedDeadInTheirTracks: The famous meeting between Walter and [[TheChessmaster Gus]] begins with Walter approaching Gus as a normal customer requesting more diet coke. As Gus turns to get this, Walter finishes with "...and a few minutes of your time", causing him to momentarily stop before turning back to the drink, and his [[HiddenInPlainSight amiable boss facade in turn.]]
