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* ScareEmStraight: Gramma's story ends with her protagonist, BrattyTeenageDaughter Grace, being EatenAlive by a beast in the forest, and lamenting she hadn't listened to her mother, [[FromBadToWorse who to top it off died of disappointment]]. All in order to deliver AnAesop on "listening to your mother".
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* ScareEmStraight: Gramma's story ends with her protagonist, BrattyTeenageDaughter Grace, being EatenAlive by a beast in the forest, and lamenting she hadn't listened to her mother, [[FromBadToWorse who to top it off died of disappointment]]. All in order to deliver AnAesop on a lesson about "listening to your mother".
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* AnAesop: It's important to tell someone that you're afraid of something, otherwise it could get worse.
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* AnAesop: You can use your imagination any time; don't be afraid to use it.
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* VoiceChangeling: Everyone in the Greens' stories speak in the voices of whoever is the narrator and anyone who gives comments on such.
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* VoiceChangeling: Everyone in the Greens' stories speak in the voices of whoever is the narrator and anyone who gives comments on such.such.
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* MassOhCrap: Pretty much ''everyone'' in the audience when they see Cricket destroy Henry onstage, with Tilly having the biggest.
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* MassOhCrap: Pretty much ''everyone'' in the audience when they see Cricket destroy Henry onstage, with Tilly having the biggest. Even ''Remy'' looks horrified at what his best friend is doing to his sister's act.
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* ScareEmStraight: Gramma's story ends with her protagonist, BrattyTeenageDaughter Grace, being EatenAlive by a beast in the forest, and lamenting she hadn't listened to her mother, [[FromBadToWorse who to top it off died of disappointment]]. All in order to deliver AnAesop on "listening to your mother".
--> '''Bill:''' Mom, that was pretty heavy.
--> '''Gramma Alice:''' Of course it was! that's what makes it good. You know what you call a story without a moral? ''[[TakeThat A POEM]]!''
--> '''Bill:''' Mom, that was pretty heavy.
--> '''Gramma Alice:''' Of course it was! that's what makes it good. You know what you call a story without a moral? ''[[TakeThat A POEM]]!''
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Having enough of Henry when Tilly has him sleep with him, Cricket violently buries Henry in the garden outside...the only downfall is he didn't know someone would dig him up, in this case Phoenix.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: DidntSeeThatComing: Having enough of Henry when Tilly has him sleep with him, Cricket violently buries Henry in the garden outside...the only downfall is he didn't know someone would dig him up, in this case Phoenix.
