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* LoopholeAbuse: Noted by Radcliffe when he explains that Aida betrayed and murdered him in the real world despite protocols which should have prevented exactly that. [[GracefulLoser He admits he'd actually be quite impressed by it]], if it wasn't accomplished by killing him.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Noted by Radcliffe when he explains that Aida betrayed and murdered him in the real world despite protocols which should have prevented exactly that. [[GracefulLoser He admits he'd actually be quite impressed by it]], if it wasn't hadn't been accomplished by killing him.
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** Fitz's devotion to Aida is clearly driving his worst instincts. He ends up killing Agnes to prove his love, even though Agnes did nothing wrong.
** Ward has a bit of this as well, it's just that his obsession is driving him away from HYDRA instead of towards it. When he says he would die for Skye, Jemma looks disgusted and has to step away, since she remembers where his love led last time.
** Ward has a bit of this as well, it's just that his obsession is driving him away from HYDRA instead of towards it. When he says he would die for Skye, Jemma looks disgusted and has to step away, since she remembers where his love led last time.
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** Fitz's devotion to Aida is clearly driving his worst instincts. He ends up killing Agnes to prove his love, even though Agnes did nothing wrong.
to him.
** Ward has a bit of this as well, it's just that this time around his obsession is driving him away from HYDRA instead of towards it. When he says he would die for Skye, Jemma looks disgusted and has to step away, since she remembers where his love led last time.
** Ward has a bit of this as well, it's just that this time around his obsession is driving him away from HYDRA instead of towards it. When he says he would die for Skye, Jemma looks disgusted and has to step away, since she remembers where his love led last time.
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* AdaptationSpeciesChange: InUniverse. Inside the Framework, Jeffrey Mace actually ''is'' an Inhuman, with all the same powers the Patriot serum gave him in the real world, showing that the big regret in his life that the Framework fixed for him was being a FakeUltimateHero who lied to everyone.
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* AdaptationSpeciesChange: InUniverse. Inside the Framework, Jeffrey Mace actually ''is'' an Inhuman, with all the same powers the Patriot serum gave him in the real world, showing that the big regret in his life that the Framework fixed for him was being a FakeUltimateHero who lied to everyone. This ties into his telling the Superior three episodes ago his regret was "That I don't have any superpowers of my own that I could use to kick your ass."
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* BerserkButton: Madame Hydra loses her cool with Radcliffe when he calls her Aida, the name she despises now as it denotes her artificiality.
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* BerserkButton: Madame Hydra loses her cool with Radcliffe when he calls her Aida, the name she despises now as it the first letter of the acronym denotes her artificiality.
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* MurderTheHypotenuse: It's heavily implied Aida engineered Jemma's death to have Fitz to herself, given Fitz had to look through her files to get the truth.
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* MurderTheHypotenuse: It's heavily implied Aida engineered the death of Jemma's death Framework counterpart to have Fitz to herself, given Fitz had to look through her files to get the truth.
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* TheBusCameBack: Agent Burrows, who is killed in "The Patriot", returns as a Framework's virtual character.
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* TheBusCameBack: Agent Burrows, who is killed in "The Patriot", returns as a Framework's Framework virtual character.
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* GildedCage: Radcliffe's and Agnes' fate is to live on a beautiful island in early retirement. They're forbidden to leave or interact with the outside world.
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* GildedCage: Radcliffe's Radcliffe and Agnes' fate is to live on a beautiful island in early retirement. They're forbidden to leave or interact with the outside world.
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* ExactWords: Aida influences Fitz by the use of carefully phrased explanations that are technically true because of how she worded them. She claims that she comes from another world with different versions of everyone, which is true in the sense that in that world she's trapped the cast and has deliberately altered their fates. What she doesn't elaborate is that the world they're currently in is virtual and the other one is the real world, allowing Fitz to believe that she's referring to an AlternateUniverse.
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* ExactWords: Aida influences Fitz by the use of carefully phrased explanations that are technically true because of how she worded them. She claims that she comes from another world with different versions of everyone, which is true in the sense that in that world she's trapped the cast and has deliberately altered their fates. What she doesn't elaborate is that the world they're currently in is virtual and the "the other one side" is the real world, allowing Fitz to believe that she's referring to an AlternateUniverse.a [[AlternateUniverse parallel universe]].
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* ExactWords: Aida influences Fitz by the use of carefully phrased explanations that are technically true because of how she worded them. She claims that she comes from another world with different versions of everyone, which is true in the sense that in that world she's trapped the cast and has deliberately altered their fates.
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* ExactWords: Aida influences Fitz by the use of carefully phrased explanations that are technically true because of how she worded them. She claims that she comes from another world with different versions of everyone, which is true in the sense that in that world she's trapped the cast and has deliberately altered their fates. What she doesn't elaborate is that the world they're currently in is virtual and the other one is the real world, allowing Fitz to believe that she's referring to an AlternateUniverse.
