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--->'''Coulson:''' You've devoted your entire life to a deranged narcissist who never gave a damn about anyone, and now he's dead. You've got the rest of your life to wrestle with the question -- Who are you without him?
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--->'''Coulson:''' You've devoted your entire life to a deranged narcissist who never gave a damn about anyone, and now he's dead. You've got the rest of your life to wrestle with the question -- Who are you without him?John Garrett?
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* {{Bowdlerise}}:
** Garrett using the rib of a general to kill him was removed on repeat daytime airings on Creator/{{Channel 4}} in the UK, as the watershed does not start until 6pm, so such gore cannot be shown, let-alone implied. Similarly, Mays' use of "kick some ass" was edited out in those broadcasts for much the same reason.
** Garrett using the rib of a general to kill him was removed on repeat daytime airings on Creator/{{Channel 4}} in the UK, as the watershed does not start until 6pm, so such gore cannot be shown, let-alone implied. Similarly, Mays' use of "kick some ass" was edited out in those broadcasts for much the same reason.
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* {{Bowdlerise}}:
**{{Bowdlerise}}: Garrett using the rib of a general to kill him was removed on repeat daytime airings on Creator/{{Channel 4}} in the UK, as the watershed does not start until 6pm, so such gore cannot be shown, let-alone implied. Similarly, Mays' May's use of "kick some ass" was edited out in those broadcasts for much the same reason.
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CallForward: The image that Garrett scratches onto the glass board is the same as he sent Akela to recover, the mission where Ward doubled as her. These images become incredibly important in the second season.
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* CallForward: The image that Garrett scratches onto the glass board is the same as he sent Akela to recover, the mission where Ward doubled as her. These images become incredibly important in the second season.
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* HoldingBackThePhlebotinum: May throws the Berserker Staff away. Quite literaly, taking out a large amount of HYDRA goons... but conveniently losing the staff for the rest of the series.
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* HoldingBackThePhlebotinum: May throws the Berserker Staff away. Quite literaly, litteraly, taking out a large amount of HYDRA goons... but conveniently losing the staff for the rest of the series.
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* TheUnReveal: Raina asks Garrett what she'll become in the grand scheme of things. We never get to find out what his answer was.
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callforward fix.
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CallForward:
** The image that Garrett scratches onto the glass board is the same as he sent Akela to recover, the mission where Ward doubled as her. These images become incredibly important in the second season.
** The image that Garrett scratches onto the glass board is the same as he sent Akela to recover, the mission where Ward doubled as her. These images become incredibly important in the second season.
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Yes it was, Channel 4's timeslot for the episode was 8pm, but the episode was repeated the following day at 5:30pm-ish, which cut the scene short and removed some cursing due to the timeslot being earlier.
* {{Bowdlerise}}:
** Garrett using the rib of a general to kill him was removed on repeat daytime airings on Creator/{{Channel 4}} in the UK, as the watershed does not start until 6pm, so such gore cannot be shown, let-alone implied. Similarly, Mays' use of "kick some ass" was edited out in those broadcasts for much the same reason.
** Garrett using the rib of a general to kill him was removed on repeat daytime airings on Creator/{{Channel 4}} in the UK, as the watershed does not start until 6pm, so such gore cannot be shown, let-alone implied. Similarly, Mays' use of "kick some ass" was edited out in those broadcasts for much the same reason.
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: Garrett rips a general's rib out, then stabs him with it. ([[{{Bowdlerise}} This was not shown]] in the Creator/{{Channel 4}} airings in Britain.)
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: Garrett rips a general's rib out, then stabs him with it. ([[{{Bowdlerise}} This was not shown]] in the Creator/{{Channel 4}} airings in Britain.)
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You took Garrett and Fury too literally.
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* DeadlyEuphemism: The Cybertek "incentives program". Meaning they kidnap your loved ones.
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* DeadlyEuphemism: DeadlyEuphemism:
** The Cybertek "incentives program". Meaning they kidnap your loved ones.
** The Cybertek "incentives program". Meaning they kidnap your loved ones.
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* MondegreenGag: The Clairvoyant's ideas came about primarily because he misheard a speech by Nick Fury about how one can accomplish anything once he realizes he can become part of something bigger and didn't catch the "a part of" segment, and built a whole transhumanist philosophy out of this mistake.
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* MondegreenGag: The Clairvoyant's ideas came about primarily because he misheard a speech by Nick Fury about how one can accomplish anything once he realizes he can become part of something bigger and didn't catch the "a part of" segment, and built a whole transhumanist philosophy out of this mistake.
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** If a HYDRA agent carrying the Asgardian berserker staff hadn't been present then the centipede soldiers would've taken out the team at the Cuba base. Instead Maye was able to grab the staff and get them out.
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** If a HYDRA agent carrying the Asgardian berserker staff hadn't been present then the centipede Centipede soldiers would've taken out the team at the Cuba base. Instead Maye was able to grab the staff and get them out.
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* AnywhereButTheirLips: Simmons' reaction to Fitz's feelings for her. Though considering it was really more like Everywhere on Their Face but Their Lips, Fitz doesn't mind in the slightest.
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* AnywhereButTheirLips: Simmons' Simmons's reaction to Fitz's feelings for her. Though considering it was really more like Everywhere on Their Face but Their Lips, Fitz doesn't mind in the slightest.
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** Fitz's defibrillator transponder. He mentions it being set to a S.H.I.E.L.D. frequency that nobody will be listening for. Turns out Nick Fury was listening, and shows up in time to save Fitz and Simmons' lives.
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** Fitz's defibrillator transponder. He mentions it being set to a S.H.I.E.L.D. frequency that nobody will be listening for. Turns out Nick Fury was listening, and shows up in time to save Fitz and Simmons' Simmons's lives.
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* MeaningfulEcho: Fitz-Simmons' conversation leading up to Fitz's DyingDeclarationOfLove is almost word-for-word the conversation they had about Skye and Miles way back in "[[Recap/AgentsOfSHIELDS1E5GirlInTheFlowerDress The Girl in the Flower Dress]]", but with the speakers reversed and themselves as the subjects:
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* MeaningfulEcho: Fitz-Simmons' Fitz-Simmons's conversation leading up to Fitz's DyingDeclarationOfLove is almost word-for-word the conversation they had about Skye and Miles way back in "[[Recap/AgentsOfSHIELDS1E5GirlInTheFlowerDress The Girl in the Flower Dress]]", but with the speakers reversed and themselves as the subjects:
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* TakeAThirdOption: Simmons' response to Fitz's above AnguishedDeclarationOfLove. Only one breathing module, to use on just her (Fitz ruling himself out as an option)? Nope. She shows him right back -- ''by saving them both.''
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* TakeAThirdOption: Simmons' Simmons's response to Fitz's above AnguishedDeclarationOfLove. Only one breathing module, to use on just her (Fitz ruling himself out as an option)? Nope. She shows him right back -- ''by saving them both.''
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* TheDogBitesBack: As soon as Mike knows his son is safe and there's no-one around to make his head explode, he shoots Garrett with a rocket, then stomps on him.
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* TheDogBitesBack: As soon as Mike knows his son is safe and there's no-one no one around to make his head explode, he shoots Garrett with a rocket, then stomps on him.
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* {{Mondegreen}}:
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* {{Mondegreen}}:MondegreenGag: The Clairvoyant's ideas came about primarily because he misheard a speech by Nick Fury about how one can accomplish anything once he realizes he can become part of something bigger and didn't catch the "a part of" segment, and built a whole transhumanist philosophy out of this mistake.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Quinn was on the cusp of selling the US military the idea of replacing all their special forces (and Secret Service protection details) with Centipede troops, which would have placed HYDRA-controlled operatives in position to seize control of the US military and government... and then Garrett wanders in, freaks out everyone, and kills one of the generals.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: NiceJobFixingItVillain:
** Quinn was on the cusp of selling the US military the idea of replacing all their special forces (and Secret Service protection details) with Centipede troops, which would have placed HYDRA-controlled operatives in position to seize control of the US military and government... and then Garrett wanders in, freaks out everyone, and kills one of the generals.
** Quinn was on the cusp of selling the US military the idea of replacing all their special forces (and Secret Service protection details) with Centipede troops, which would have placed HYDRA-controlled operatives in position to seize control of the US military and government... and then Garrett wanders in, freaks out everyone, and kills one of the generals.
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* ArmorPiercingResponse: How Fury ends Phil's rant.
-->'''Phil:''' That was supposed to be for the death of an Avenger!\\
'''Fury:''' Yes. It was.\\
'''Phil:''' ... Oh.
-->'''Phil:''' That was supposed to be for the death of an Avenger!\\
'''Fury:''' Yes. It was.\\
'''Phil:''' ... Oh.
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** Garrett starts displaying some of the traits Coulson mentioned in his resignation video regarding TAHITI, including mania, psychosis, and hypergraphia (compulsive writing). The writing doubles as a call-back to the mission where Ward pretended to be Akela, because that mission was to get the images that Garrett starts compulsively drawing.
CallForward:
** The image that Garrett scratches onto the glass board is the same as he sent Akela to recover, the mission where Ward doubled as her. These images become incredibly important in the second season.
CallForward:
** The image that Garrett scratches onto the glass board is the same as he sent Akela to recover, the mission where Ward doubled as her. These images become incredibly important in the second season.
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** If a HYDRA agent carrying the Asgardian berserker staff hadn't been present then the centipede soldiers would've taken out the team at the Cuba base. Instead Maye was able to grab the staff and get them out.
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Not So Different has been renamed Not So Different Remark, and requires the characters to acknowledge the similarities in-universe.
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* NotSoDifferent: Ward says this to Skye, alluding to the "darkness" Raina says is inside her.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: Ward says this to Skye, alluding to the "darkness" Raina says is inside her.
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* PunchClockVillain: Most of the Cybertek workers are there thanks to the "[[IHaveYourWife Incentives Program]]".
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* WordSaladPhilosophy: Thanks to GH.325 causing him to go completely insane, Garrett says a number of things that are supposed to be {{visionary|Villain}} but simply make no sense to anyone but him. At one point, he claims he and Coulson have "seen the big picture, the big bang, the timeless frozen ocean" and are therefore "blood brothers", which both Fury and Coulson dismiss as evidence that he's even crazier than they realized. And then there's the utterly nonsensical declarations listed under AGodAmI, which pretty much speak for themselves.
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* WordSaladPhilosophy: Thanks to GH.325 causing him to go completely insane, Garrett says a number of things that are supposed to be {{visionary|Villain}} but but, at best, only make a gnat's hair of sense to Raina and, at worst, simply make no sense to anyone but him. At one point, he claims he and Coulson have "seen the big picture, the big bang, the timeless frozen ocean" and are therefore "blood brothers", which both Fury and Coulson dismiss as evidence that he's even crazier than they realized. And then there's the utterly nonsensical declarations listed under AGodAmI, which pretty much speak for themselves.
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* WordSaladPhilosophy: Thanks to GH.325 causing him to go completely insane, Garrett says a number of things that are supposed to be {{visionary|Villain}} but simply make no sense to anyone but him. At one point, he claims he and Coulson have "seen the big picture, the big bang, the timeless frozen ocean" and are therefore "blood brothers", which both Fury and Coulson dismiss as evidence that he's even crazier than they realized.
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* WordSaladPhilosophy: Thanks to GH.325 causing him to go completely insane, Garrett says a number of things that are supposed to be {{visionary|Villain}} but simply make no sense to anyone but him. At one point, he claims he and Coulson have "seen the big picture, the big bang, the timeless frozen ocean" and are therefore "blood brothers", which both Fury and Coulson dismiss as evidence that he's even crazier than they realized. And then there's the utterly nonsensical declarations listed under AGodAmI, which pretty much speak for themselves.
