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->''Dog carcass in alley this morning, tire tread on burst stomach. This city is afraid of me. I've seen its true face. The streets are extended gutters and the gutters are full of blood and when the drains finally scab over all the vermin will drown. The accumulated filth of all their sex and murder will foam up about their waists and all the whores and politicians will look up and shout "Save us!"''...''[[LittleNo and I'll look down, and whisper "No."]]''\\
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->''Dog carcass in alley this morning, tire tread on burst stomach. This city is afraid of me. I've seen its true face. The streets are extended gutters and the gutters are full of blood and when the drains finally scab over all the vermin will drown. The accumulated filth of all their sex and murder will foam up about their waists and all the whores and politicians will look up and shout "Save us!"''...us!"'' ...''[[LittleNo and I'll look down, and whisper "No."]]''\\
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''Now the whole world stands on the brink, staring down into bloody hell, all those liberals, and intellectuals and smooth-talkers...and all of a sudden, nobody can think of anything to say.''
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''Now the whole world stands on the brink, staring down into bloody hell, all those liberals, liberals and intellectuals and smooth-talkers...and all of a sudden, nobody can think of anything to say.''
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''Now the whole world stands on the brink, staring down into bloody hell, all those liberals, and intellectuals and smooth talkers...and all of a sudden, nobody can think of anything to say.''
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''Now the whole world stands on the brink, staring down into bloody hell, all those liberals, and intellectuals and smooth talkers...smooth-talkers...and all of a sudden, nobody can think of anything to say.''
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''Now the whole world stands on the brink, staring into bloody hell. All those liberals, and intellectuals and smooth talkers, and suddenly no one can think of anything to say.''
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''Now the whole world stands on the brink, staring down into bloody hell. All hell, all those liberals, and intellectuals and smooth talkers, talkers...and suddenly no one all of a sudden, nobody can think of anything to say.''
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''The dusk reeks of fornication and bad consciences. I believe I shall take my exercise.''\\
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''The dusk reeks of fornication and bad consciences. I believe I shall take my exercise.''\\''
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->''Slept all day. Awoken at 4:37. Landlady complaining about smell. She has five children by five different fathers. I am sure she cheats on welfare. Soon it will be dark.''\\
''Beneath me, this awful city, it screams like an abattoir of retarded children. New York.''\\
''On Friday night, a comedian died in New York. Somebody knows why. Down there...somebody knows.''\\
''The dusk reeks of fornication and bad consciences. I believe I shall take my exercise.''\\
-->-- '''Rorschach's journal, October 13th, 1985'''
''Beneath me, this awful city, it screams like an abattoir of retarded children. New York.''\\
''On Friday night, a comedian died in New York. Somebody knows why. Down there...somebody knows.''\\
''The dusk reeks of fornication and bad consciences. I believe I shall take my exercise.''\\
-->-- '''Rorschach's journal, October 13th, 1985'''
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''Now the whole world stands on the brink, staring into bloody hell. All those liberals, and intellectuals and smooth talkers, and suddenly no one can think of anything to say. Beneath me, this awful city, it screams like an abattoir of retarded children, and the night reeks of fornication and bad consciences.''\\
''Tonight, a comedian died in New York, somebody knows why. Somebody knows...''
''Tonight, a comedian died in New York, somebody knows why. Somebody knows...''
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''Now the whole world stands on the brink, staring into bloody hell. All those liberals, and intellectuals and smooth talkers, and suddenly no one can think of anything to say. Beneath me, this awful city, it screams like an abattoir of retarded children, and the night reeks of fornication and bad consciences.''\\\n''Tonight, a comedian died in New York, somebody knows why. Somebody knows...''
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''...now the whole world stands on the brink, staring into bloody hell. All those liberals, and intellectuals and smooth talkers, and suddenly no one can think of anything to say. Beneath me, this awful city, it screams like an abattoir of retarded children, and the night reeks of fornication and bad consciences.''\\
''...now the whole world stands on the brink, staring into bloody hell. All those liberals, and intellectuals and smooth talkers, and suddenly no one can think of anything to say. Beneath me, this awful city, it screams like an abattoir of retarded children, and the night reeks of fornication and bad consciences.''\\
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''...now
''Now the whole world stands on the brink, staring into bloody hell. All those liberals, and intellectuals and smooth talkers, and suddenly no one can think of anything to say. Beneath me, this awful city, it screams like an abattoir of retarded children, and the night reeks of fornication and bad consciences.''\\
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-->-- [[spoiler: '''Dr. Manhattan''']]
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-->-- [[spoiler: '''Dr. Manhattan''']]
Manhattan'''
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->''Dan, I'm not some comic book villain. [[spoiler: Do you seriously think I'd explain my master-stroke if there remained the slightest chance of you affecting its outcome? I did it thirty-five minutes ago.]]''
-->-- [[spoiler: '''Adrian Veidt''']]
-->-- [[spoiler: '''Adrian Veidt''']]
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->''Dog carcass in alley this morning, tire tread on burst stomach. This city is afraid of me. I've seen its true face. The streets are extended gutters and the gutters are full of blood and when the drains finally scab over all the vermin will drown. The accumulated filth of all their sex and murder will foam up about their waists and all the whores and politicians will look up and shout "Save us!"... and I'll look down, and whisper "No."''\\
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->''Dog carcass in alley this morning, tire tread on burst stomach. This city is afraid of me. I've seen its true face. The streets are extended gutters and the gutters are full of blood and when the drains finally scab over all the vermin will drown. The accumulated filth of all their sex and murder will foam up about their waists and all the whores and politicians will look up and shout "Save us!"... us!"''...''[[LittleNo and I'll look down, and whisper "No."''\\"]]''\\
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-> ''I have walked across the surface of the sun. I have witnessed events so tiny and so fast that they could hardly be said to have occurred at all. But you, Adrain, you're just a man. '''The world's smartest man poses no more threat to me then does its smartest termite.'''''
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->''I'm not a Republic serial villain. [[spoiler: Do you seriously think I'd explain my master-stroke if there remained the slightest chance of you affecting its outcome? I did it thirty-five minutes ago.]]''
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-> ''I have walked across the surface of the sun. I have witnessed events so tiny and so fast that they could hardly be said to have occurred at all. but you, Adrain, you're just a man. '''The world's smartest man poses no more threat to me then does its smartest termite.'''''
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-> ''I have walked across the surface of the sun. I have witnessed events so tiny and so fast that they could hardly be said to have occurred at all. but But you, Adrain, you're just a man. '''The world's smartest man poses no more threat to me then does its smartest termite.'''''
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->'''Dan Dreiberg''': What the hell happened to us? What happened to the American dream?
->'''Edward Blake''': What happened to the American dream? It came true! You're looking at it.
->'''Edward Blake''': What happened to the American dream? It came true! You're looking at it.
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->'''Dan Dreiberg''': What the hell happened to us? What happened to the American dream?
Dream?
->'''Edward Blake''': What happened to the Americandream? Dream? It came true! You're looking at it.
->'''Edward Blake''': What happened to the American
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->'''Dan Dreiberg''': What the hell happened to us? What happened to the American Dream?
->'''CG''': "What happened to the American Dream?" It came true! You're looking at it.
->'''CG''': "What happened to the American Dream?" It came true! You're looking at it.
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->'''Dan Dreiberg''': What the hell happened to us? What happened to the American Dream?
->'''CG''': "Whatdream?
->'''Edward Blake''': What happened to the AmericanDream?" dream? It came true! You're looking at it.
->'''CG''': "What
->'''Edward Blake''': What happened to the American
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