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** Evulz's enemies, on either side of the law, make clear that it does not matters what they do to their master to try to appease them or if they try to run, there won't be [[HangingJudge any deals]], [[TakeNoPrisoners nor quarter]] or [[InescapableHorror hiding place]]. Loyalty to Evulz, and falling beside him, is all that Mook #13 has left.
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** Evulz's enemies, on either side of the law, make clear to his minions that it does not matters what they do to their master to try to appease them or if they try to run, there won't be [[HangingJudge any deals]], [[TakeNoPrisoners nor quarter]] or [[InescapableHorror hiding place]]. Loyalty to Evulz, and falling beside him, is all that Mook #13 has left.
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** Evulz's enemies, on either side of the law, make clear that it does not matters what they do to their master to try to appease them or if they try to run, there won't be [[HangingJudge any deals]], [[TakeNoPrisoners nor quarter]] or [[InescapableHorror hiding place]]. Loyalty to Evulz, and falling beside him, is all that Mook #13 has left.
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** As his evil lair falls apart, Emperor Evulz is killed by Mook #13 for [[DisproportionateRetribution adding too much salt to the mook rations]].
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** As Emperor Evulz is subdued and captured by Mook #13, who then gets revenge by forcing Evulz to experience every single bad thing he's ever put one his evil lair falls apart, minions through.
** Emperor Evulz is killed by Mook #13. He reappars as a ghost, and Mook #13for [[DisproportionateRetribution adding too much salt to the mook rations]].[[DeaderThanDead kills it, too.]]
** Emperor Evulz is killed by Mook #13. He reappars as a ghost, and Mook #13
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** Alternatively, Evulz did something so horrible to Mook #13 it caused Mook #13 to snap and kill Evulz.
** Mook #13 GrewASpine, plain and simple.
** Mook #13 GrewASpine, plain and simple.
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** Alternatively, Evulz did something so horrible to Mook #13 it caused Mook #13 to snap and kill Evulz.
** Mook #13GrewASpine, plain and simple.had CharacterDevelopment in which he GrewASpine.
** Mook #13
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* '''Parodied''': Emperor Evulz is a [[LargeAndInCharge massive]] TinTyrant, and Mook #13 is a pathetic little goblin who [[CurbStompBattle curb stomps Evulz]] anyways.
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** Emperor Evulz is a [[LargeAndInCharge massive]] TinTyrant, and Mook #13 is a pathetic little goblin who [[CurbStompBattle curb stomps Evulz]]anyways.anyways.
** Mook #13 dramatically declares he's getting revenge against Evulz for [[DisproportionateRetribution adding too much salt to the mook rations]] before killing him.
** Emperor Evulz is a [[LargeAndInCharge massive]] TinTyrant, and Mook #13 is a pathetic little goblin who [[CurbStompBattle curb stomps Evulz]]
** Mook #13 dramatically declares he's getting revenge against Evulz for [[DisproportionateRetribution adding too much salt to the mook rations]] before killing him.
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** GrewASpine
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** GrewASpineMook #13 GrewASpine, plain and simple.
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** Mook #13 did not do anything directly towards Emperor Evulz and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere ran away before things gets much worse,]] But he secretly tipped the heroes about Evulz's plans to get back at him.
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** Mook #13 did not do anything directly towards Emperor Evulz and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere ran away before things gets much worse,]] But but he secretly tipped the heroes about Evulz's plans to get back at him.
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* '''Played For Horror''': Mook #13 [[IAmAHumanitarian tries to cannibalize]] Evulz.
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* '''Played For Horror''': Drama''': Mook #13 [[IAmAHumanitarian [[EtTuBrute tries to cannibalize]] betray]] Evulz.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Mook #13 gives Emperor Evulz the most bombastic TakeThisJobAndShoveIt speech ever and runs off like Daffy Duck.
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** As his evil lair falls apart, Mook #13 tries to kill Emperor Evulz, who simply {{Offhand Backhand}}s him and carries on.
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** As his evil lair falls apart, Mook #13 tries to kill Emperor Evulz, who simply unintentionally {{Offhand Backhand}}s him and carries on.
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* '''Justified''': Evulz forced Mook #13 to work for him through fear and intimidation. Now that Evulz is powerless, Mook #13 is no longer afraid of him and takes the opportunity to exact his revenge for all the abuse.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Evulz forced Mook #13 to work for him through fear and intimidation. Now that Evulz is powerless, Mook #13 is no longer afraid of him and takes the opportunity to exact his revenge for all the abuse.
** Evulz forced Mook #13 to work for him through fear and intimidation. Now that Evulz is powerless, Mook #13 is no longer afraid of him and takes the opportunity to exact his revenge for all the abuse.
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-->'''Evulz''': [[TranquilFury Do you know what happens to dogs that bite their master?]]
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** Mook #13 did not do anything directly towards Emperor Evulz and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere ran away before things gets much worse,]] But he secretly tips the heroes about Evulz's plans to get back at him.
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** Mook #13 did not do anything directly towards Emperor Evulz and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere ran away before things gets much worse,]] But he secretly tips tipped the heroes about Evulz's plans to get back at him.
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** Alternatively, Evulz did something so horrible to Mook #13 it caused Mook #13 to snap and kill Evulz.
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* '''Played for horror''':
** #13 [[IAmAHumanitarian goes 'humanitarian']] on Evulz.
** #13 [[IAmAHumanitarian goes 'humanitarian']] on Evulz.
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* '''Played for horror''':
**For Horror''': Mook #13 [[IAmAHumanitarian goes 'humanitarian']] on tries to cannibalize]] Evulz.
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* '''Played for horror''':
** #13 [[IAmAHumanitarian goes 'humanitarian']] on Evulz.
** #13 [[IAmAHumanitarian goes 'humanitarian']] on Evulz.
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** Mook #13 did not direct attacks against Emperor Evulz and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere ran away before things could get worse.]] But he secretly gave tips to the heroes about Evulz's plans to get back at him.
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** Mook #13 did not direct attacks against do anything directly towards Emperor Evulz and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere ran away before things could get worse.]] gets much worse,]] But he secretly gave tips to the heroes about Evulz's plans to get back at him.
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** Mook #13 did not direct attacks against Emperor Evulz and [[ScrewThisIAmOuttaHere ran away before things could get worse.]] But he secretly gave tips to the heroes about Evulz's plans to get back at him.
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** Mook #13 did not direct attacks against Emperor Evulz and [[ScrewThisIAmOuttaHere [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere ran away before things could get worse.]] But he secretly gave tips to the heroes about Evulz's plans to get back at him.
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** Mook #13 did not direct attacks against Emperor Evulz and [[ScrewThisIAmOutOfHere ran away before things could get worse.]] But he secretly gave tips to the heroes about Evulz's plans to get back at him.
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** Mook #13 did not direct attacks against Emperor Evulz and [[ScrewThisIAmOutOfHere [[ScrewThisIAmOuttaHere ran away before things could get worse.]] But he secretly gave tips to the heroes about Evulz's plans to get back at him.
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* '''Downplayed''': Mook #13 gets revenge on Emperor Evulz, but he doesn't kill him.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** Mook #13 gets revenge on Emperor Evulz, but he doesn't killhim. him.
** Mook #13 did not direct attacks against Emperor Evulz and [[ScrewThisIAmOutOfHere ran away before things could get worse.]] But he secretly gave tips to the heroes about Evulz's plans to get back at him.
** Mook #13 gets revenge on Emperor Evulz, but he doesn't kill
** Mook #13 did not direct attacks against Emperor Evulz and [[ScrewThisIAmOutOfHere ran away before things could get worse.]] But he secretly gave tips to the heroes about Evulz's plans to get back at him.
