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removed an Up To Eleven wick
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** Irena carries Allen over her head while [[UpToEleven Natalie is lifting her over her head]].
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** Irena carries Allen over her head while [[UpToEleven Natalie is lifting her over her head]].head.
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** Irene picks up Allen at ease and [[GrievousHarmWithABody clubs the villains with him]].
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* '''Parodied''': Irena, a tiny, waifish LipstickLesbian, carries her girlfriend, who is the resident BigBeautifulWoman.
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** Irena, a tiny, waifish LipstickLesbian, carries her girlfriend, who is the residentBigBeautifulWoman.BigBeautifulWoman.
** Irene picks up Allen at ease and [[GrievousHarmWithABody clubs the villains with him]].
** Irena, a tiny, waifish LipstickLesbian, carries her girlfriend, who is the resident
** Irene picks up Allen at ease and [[GrievousHarmWithABody clubs the villains with him]].
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%%* '''Intended Audience Reaction''': ???
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** Irene picks up Allen at ease and [[GrievousHarmWithABody clubs the villains with him]].
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* '''Reconstructed''': Not only is Irena able to easily carry Allen, he's also [[AmazonChaser totally into it.]]
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* '''Reconstructed''': Not only is Irena able to easily carry Allen, he's also [[AmazonChaser totally into it.]]it]].
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* '''Enforced''': "We need to show that Irena isn't a DistressedDamsel, but she isn't mowing down orcs with her greatsword until the third act. Oh, wait! We could have her give Allen a fireman's carry."
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* '''Enforced''': "We need to show that Irena isn't a DistressedDamsel, DamselInDistress, but she isn't mowing down orcs with her greatsword until the third act. Oh, wait! We could have her give Allen a fireman's carry."
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* '''Invoked''': Irena spars Allen, giving him a hard whack on the ankle so he can't walk. This gives her justification to [[HumiliationConga carry him back to his tent for treatment, further proving her physical dominance in the process]]
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* '''Invoked''': Irena spars Allen, giving him a hard whack on the ankle so he can't walk. This gives her justification to [[HumiliationConga carry him back to his tent for treatment, further proving her physical dominance in the process]]process]].
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%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
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%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': '''Intended Audience Reaction''': ???
