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* '''Zig Zagged''': Everybody has different tastes: as the story is told from the first-person POV and by different people, Alice's attractiveness varies on the narrator.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Zagged''':
** Everybody has different tastes: as the story is told from the first-person POV and by different people, Alice's attractiveness varies on thenarrator.narrator.
** The only one to have seen her post surgery face and believe it to have gone wrong is Alice herself.
** Everybody has different tastes: as the story is told from the first-person POV and by different people, Alice's attractiveness varies on the
** The only one to have seen her post surgery face and believe it to have gone wrong is Alice herself.
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* '''Enforced''': The creators want to pull a BaitAndSwitch ForTheLulz.
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* '''Enforced''': '''Enforced''':
** The creators want to pull a BaitAndSwitchForTheLulz.ForTheLulz.
** [[AbilityOverAppearance Beatrix Utterface was the most skilled actress to audition for Alice]].
** The creators want to pull a BaitAndSwitch
** [[AbilityOverAppearance Beatrix Utterface was the most skilled actress to audition for Alice]].
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** [[LethalChef Alice]] was looking in the soup pan when the ... ''concoction'' exploded.
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* '''Gender Inverted''': Bob has the best male physique in the series, but his face is {{gonk}}y.
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* '''Gender Inverted''': Inverted''':
** Bob has the best male physique in the series, but his face is{{gonk}}y.{{gonk}}y.
** Bob is a PrettyBoy, but while he's still a BigBeautifulMan, many think that losing the pot belly would be a great improvement.
** Bob has the best male physique in the series, but his face is
** Bob is a PrettyBoy, but while he's still a BigBeautifulMan, many think that losing the pot belly would be a great improvement.
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** Alice's face is frequently made unattractive by her frequent {{Wild Take}}s.
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** Alice is a female with a pleasant body, [[NonHumanHead but her head is literally a block of butter.]]
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** Alice is a female with a pleasant body, [[NonHumanHead but her head is literally is]] [[VisualPun literally]] [[NonHumanHead a block of butter.]]
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* '''Invoked''': Alice, [[SoBeautifulItsACurse tired of being hit on and even nearly raped,]] intentionally disfigures her own face so guys will stop pursuing her once they get a good look at it.
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* '''Invoked''': Alice, [[SoBeautifulItsACurse tired of being hit on and even nearly raped,]] intentionally disfigures her own face or puts on a horrific mask so guys will stop pursuing her once they get a good look at it.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice has a body that would easily make her a [[MsFanservice lust object to the male]] ([[EvenTheGirlsWantHer and female!]]) audience, but as soon as they see [[NightmareFace her... um, front]], [[BrainBleach they have a hard time sleeping]].
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice has a body that would easily make her a [[MsFanservice lust object to the any male]] ([[EvenTheGirlsWantHer and female!]]) audience, onlookers, but as soon as they see [[NightmareFace her... um, front]], [[BrainBleach they have a hard time sleeping]].
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** Alice is a female with a pleasant body, but her head is literally a block of butter.
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** Alice is a female with a pleasant body, [[NonHumanHead but her head is literally a block of butter.]]
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** Alice's face is moderately conventionally attractive but with major flaws (huge teeth/small mouth combination, for example), paired with a completely attractive body.
** Alice actually does have an attractive face, making the Butter Face trope just a rumor.
** ....paired with a turkey neck, hence she wears sleeveless turtlenecks all the time. To flaunt her arms, hide her neck.
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** Alice's face looks okay from a distance, but up close you can see her extremely weak chin/turkey neck, overbite, huge teeth, and tiny mouth (causing her to talk with a very wet lisp because she can't close her mouth all the way). However, in this universe, that's considered not only attractive, but the ideal and everyone lusts after her. But the narrator has "strange tastes" and thinks she has a ButterFace anyway and is ridiculed endlessly for it. But he ends up changing his mind after getting to know her better. But they later move somewhere that has beauty standards more in line with our ideals, and when people comment on Alice's butter face, she assumes they're just trying to keep her humble about being "blessed with good looks", leaving them confused when she blushes and tells them they're so sweet when they mention her overbite and turkey neck.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice’s body is conventionally attractive while her face is either “ugly hot” or “ugly cute” or just plain.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** Alice’s body is conventionally attractive while her face is either “ugly hot” or “ugly cute” or justplain.plain.
** Alice has a "strong jaw" that gives her a vaguely masculine appearance.
** Alice’s body is conventionally attractive while her face is either “ugly hot” or “ugly cute” or just
** Alice has a "strong jaw" that gives her a vaguely masculine appearance.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice’s body is conventionally attractive while her face is either “ugly hot” or “ugly cute”.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice’s body is conventionally attractive while her face is either “ugly hot” or “ugly cute”.cute” or just plain.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice has a body that would easily make her a [[MsFanservice lust object to the male]] ([[EvenTheGirlsWantHer and female!]]) audience, but as soon as they see [[NightmareFace her... um, front]], [[NightmareFuel they have a hard time sleeping]].
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice has a body that would easily make her a [[MsFanservice lust object to the male]] ([[EvenTheGirlsWantHer and female!]]) audience, but as soon as they see [[NightmareFace her... um, front]], [[NightmareFuel [[BrainBleach they have a hard time sleeping]].
