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* '''Straight''': Alice is a very fat, attractive woman and she knows it.
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* '''Straight''': Alice is a very fat, plump, yet attractive woman and she knows it.
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* '''Conversed''': Alice is a thin woman with a crush on Bob. When she mentions this to Charlie, she finds out that Bob is only attracted to very fat women. Charlie suggests that if Alice puts on a lot of weight, she would look very sexy and become more confident, and Bob wouldn't be able to resist her.
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* '''Conversed''': Alice is a thin woman with a crush on Bob. When she mentions this to Charlie, she finds out that Bob is only attracted to very fat chubby women. Charlie suggests that if Alice puts on a lot of some weight, she would look very sexy and become more confident, and Bob wouldn't be able to resist her.
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** Alice is a very fat, very sexy, very confident woman. However, the adoration of her weight is making her [[FatBastard self-absorbed and vain]], and also somewhat unhealthy.
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** Alice is a very fat, plump, very sexy, very confident woman. However, the adoration of her weight is making her [[FatBastard self-absorbed and vain]], and also somewhat unhealthy.
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* '''Inverted''': Alice is a skinny woman, who happens to be ugly and hates herself for being so thin.
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** Alice is a skinny woman, who happens to be ugly and hates herself for being sothin.thin.
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** Alice is a skinny woman, who happens to be ugly and hates herself for being so
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* '''Reconstructed''': Alice calms down about her adoring fans, like Bob, and starts to help other women, like her girlfriend Charlie, to put on more weight so they can be sexy and feel confident, and get admirers.
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** Alice calms down about her adoring fans, like Bob, and starts to help other women, like her girlfriend Charlie, to put on more weight so they can be sexy and feel confident, and getadmirers.admirers.
** After a few health complications, Alice and her loved ones decide her well-being is more important than the attention she receives from her weight. So she strives for a middle ground where she still looks [[RealWomenHaveCurves curvy]] ''and'' maintain a reasonable diet.
** Alice calms down about her adoring fans, like Bob, and starts to help other women, like her girlfriend Charlie, to put on more weight so they can be sexy and feel confident, and get
** After a few health complications, Alice and her loved ones decide her well-being is more important than the attention she receives from her weight. So she strives for a middle ground where she still looks [[RealWomenHaveCurves curvy]] ''and'' maintain a reasonable diet.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice is so very beautiful she melts the hearts of anyone who sees her regardless of gender or sexuality, while also being the size of a house and perfectly happy with both.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice is so very beautiful she melts the hearts of anyone who sees her regardless of gender or sexuality, sexuality while also being the size of a house and perfectly happy with both.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice is moderately chubby, gets a couple of compliments, and feels good about herself.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** Alice is moderately chubby, gets a couple of compliments, and feels good about herself.
** Alice is moderately chubby, gets a couple of compliments, and feels good about herself.
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* '''Zig-Zagged''': Alice is an overweight and attractive woman, who feels self-conscious about her weight. She loses weight only to find that, not only does she feel no less self-conscious, she also seems to get less interest from other people. She tries to put the weight back on and ends up putting on more weight than she had lost. When she gets even fatter than she used to be, and learns to love her big beautiful self, she gets even more interest than ever before.
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* '''Zig-Zagged''': '''Zig-Zagged''':
** Alice is an overweight and attractive woman, who feels self-conscious about her weight. She loses weight only to find that, not only does she feel no less self-conscious, she also seems to get less interest from other people. She tries to put the weight back on and ends up putting on more weight than she had lost. When she gets even fatter than she used to be, and learns to love her big beautiful self, she gets even more interest than ever before.
** Alice is an overweight and attractive woman, who feels self-conscious about her weight. She loses weight only to find that, not only does she feel no less self-conscious, she also seems to get less interest from other people. She tries to put the weight back on and ends up putting on more weight than she had lost. When she gets even fatter than she used to be, and learns to love her big beautiful self, she gets even more interest than ever before.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Alice is a very fat, very sexy, very confident woman. However, the adoration of her weight is making her [[FatBastard self-absorbed and vain]], and also somewhat unhealthy.
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* '''Deconstructed''': '''Deconstructed''':
** Alice is a very fat, very sexy, very confident woman. However, the adoration of her weight is making her [[FatBastard self-absorbed and vain]], and also somewhat unhealthy.
** Alice is a very fat, very sexy, very confident woman. However, the adoration of her weight is making her [[FatBastard self-absorbed and vain]], and also somewhat unhealthy.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice is very chubby, and she also gets a lot of compliments, and feels very sexy.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice is very moderately chubby, and she also gets a lot couple of compliments, and feels very sexy.good about herself.
** Alice [[StoutStrength combines fat with muscle]] and has a [[AmazonianBeauty stocky but well-built body type]]. [[AmazonChaser People love her regardless]].
** Alice [[StoutStrength combines fat with muscle]] and has a [[AmazonianBeauty stocky but well-built body type]]. [[AmazonChaser People love her regardless]].
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** Alice is already extremely obese and the other characters, who consider her to be the most attractive person they know, want to fatten her up even more so they have ''even more'' of her to love...
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** Alice is already extremely morbidly obese and the other characters, who consider her to be the most attractive person they know, want to fatten her up even more so they have ''even more'' of her to love...
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** Being both [[BrainlessBeauty beautiful]] ''and'' [[FatIdiot overweight]], Alice is unbelievably stupid.
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* '''Parodied''': Alice is already extremely obese and the other characters, who consider her to be the most attractive person they know, want to fatten her up even more so they have ''even more'' of her to love... and then [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome she dies because morbid obesity is very damaging to physical health]]... and then [[CrossingTheLineTwice her admirers find her even more attractive]].
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** Alice is already extremely obese and the other characters, who consider her to be the most attractive person they know, want to fatten her up even more so they have ''even more'' of her tolove... and then love...
** [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcomeshe She dies because morbid obesity is very damaging to physical health]]... and then [[CrossingTheLineTwice her admirers find her even more attractive]].
** Alice is already extremely obese and the other characters, who consider her to be the most attractive person they know, want to fatten her up even more so they have ''even more'' of her to
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