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* The fact that [[VillainousHarlequin Spinel]], originally a LaughablyEvil foe in the source material, more akin to a TragicVillain and a JerkassWoobie [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds Destroyer of Worlds]] at the very worst, [[AdaptationalVillainy is shown to be even more evil in this fancomic]], as she crosses the MoralEventHorizon by '''''[[TheBadGuyWins successfully killing Steven]]''''', turning from a sympathetic and redeemable WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds into a despicable and abominable CompleteMonster, already sets a pretty damn grim picture!
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* The fact that [[VillainousHarlequin Spinel]], originally a LaughablyEvil foe in the source material, more akin to a TragicVillain and a JerkassWoobie [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds Destroyer of Worlds]] at the very worst, [[AdaptationalVillainy is shown to be even more evil in this fancomic]], as she crosses the MoralEventHorizon by '''''[[TheBadGuyWins successfully killing Steven]]''''', turning from a sympathetic and redeemable WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds into a despicable and abominable CompleteMonster, monster, already sets a pretty damn grim picture!
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* After Greg grieves over his son's dead body, he turns around to Spinel's bubbled gem, picks up a bat and tries to '''''shatter''''' his sons's murderer. Greg, a normally cheerful and easygoing person, is so broken that he's willing to ''kill'' the one who took his child away from him. This shows how far grief-stricken parents can go to avenge their dead progeniture.
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* After Greg grieves over his son's dead body, he turns around to Spinel's bubbled gem, picks up a bat and tries to '''''shatter''''' his sons's murderer. Greg, a normally cheerful and easygoing person, is so broken that he's willing to ''kill'' the one who took his child away from him. This shows how far grief-stricken parents much grief can go cause people to avenge their dead progeniture.take a darker path.
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** The brief flashback showing Steven getting ''horribly maimed'' by Spinel, [[AnArmAndALeg slashing his arm off]] and [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice impaling him with her Rejuvenator]], all while bearing a SlasherSmile, only helps to further cement her status as purely evil bastard!
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** The brief flashback showing Steven getting ''horribly maimed'' by Spinel, [[AnArmAndALeg slashing his arm off]] and [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice impaling him with her Rejuvenator]], all while bearing a SlasherSmile, only helps to further cement her status as purely evil bastard!sociopath!
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* The fact that [[MonsterClown Spinel]], originally a LaughablyEvil foe in the source material, more akin to a TragicVillain and a JerkassWoobie at the very worst, [[AdaptationalVillainy is shown to be even more evil in this fancomic]], as she crosses the MoralEventHorizon by '''''[[TheBadGuyWins successfully killing Steven]]''''', turning from a sympathetic and redeemable WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds into a despicable and abominable CompleteMonster, already sets a pretty damn grim picture!
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* The fact that [[MonsterClown [[VillainousHarlequin Spinel]], originally a LaughablyEvil foe in the source material, more akin to a TragicVillain and a JerkassWoobie [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds Destroyer of Worlds]] at the very worst, [[AdaptationalVillainy is shown to be even more evil in this fancomic]], as she crosses the MoralEventHorizon by '''''[[TheBadGuyWins successfully killing Steven]]''''', turning from a sympathetic and redeemable WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds into a despicable and abominable CompleteMonster, already sets a pretty damn grim picture!
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* All the [[Gorn blood and gore]], this is especially jarring not only in comparison to the FamilyFriendly nature of the original show, but also for people who can't stand the sight of extreme violence and blood, especially if you're a fan of ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse''.
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* All the [[Gorn [[{{Gorn}} blood and gore]], this is especially jarring not only in comparison to the FamilyFriendly nature of the original show, but also for people who can't stand the sight of extreme violence and blood, especially if you're a fan of ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse''.
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* The fact that [[MonsterClown Spinel]], originally a LaughablyEvil foe in the source material, more akin to a TragicVillain, crosses the MoralEventHorizon by '''''[[TheBadGuyWins successfully killing Steven]]''''', turning her from a sympathetic and redeemable JerkassWoobie into a despicable and abominable CompleteMonster, already sets a pretty damn grim picture!
* It starts with Pink Steven checking on the status of Steven's body, using purely technical terminology, and when he concludes that he's gone, we're treated to Pink Steven giving a ThousandYardStare, holding Steven's lifeless body covered in blood and his arm trounced off. Remember, this is only ''the first two pages''.
* All the [[BloodierAndGorier blood and gore]], this is especially jarring not only in comparison to the FamilyFriendly nature of the original show, but also for people who can't stand the sight of extreme violence and blood, especially if you're a fan of ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse''.
* The brief flashback showing Steven getting ''horribly maimed'' by Spinel, slashing his arm off and impaling him with her Rejuvenator, all while bearing a SlasherSmile.
* It starts with Pink Steven checking on the status of Steven's body, using purely technical terminology, and when he concludes that he's gone, we're treated to Pink Steven giving a ThousandYardStare, holding Steven's lifeless body covered in blood and his arm trounced off. Remember, this is only ''the first two pages''.
* All the [[BloodierAndGorier blood and gore]], this is especially jarring not only in comparison to the FamilyFriendly nature of the original show, but also for people who can't stand the sight of extreme violence and blood, especially if you're a fan of ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse''.
* The brief flashback showing Steven getting ''horribly maimed'' by Spinel, slashing his arm off and impaling him with her Rejuvenator, all while bearing a SlasherSmile.
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* The fact that [[MonsterClown Spinel]], originally a LaughablyEvil foe in the source material, more akin to a TragicVillain, TragicVillain and a JerkassWoobie at the very worst, [[AdaptationalVillainy is shown to be even more evil in this fancomic]], as she crosses the MoralEventHorizon by '''''[[TheBadGuyWins successfully killing Steven]]''''', turning her from a sympathetic and redeemable JerkassWoobie WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds into a despicable and abominable CompleteMonster, already sets a pretty damn grim picture!
** The brief flashback showing Steven getting ''horribly maimed'' by Spinel, [[AnArmAndALeg slashing his arm off]] and [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice impaling him with her Rejuvenator]], all while bearing a SlasherSmile, only helps to further cement her status as purely evil bastard!
*It The comic starts with Pink Steven checking on the status of Steven's body, using purely technical terminology, and when he concludes that he's gone, we're treated to Pink Steven giving a ThousandYardStare, holding Steven's lifeless body covered in blood and his arm trounced off. Remember, this is only ''the first two pages''.
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* All the[[BloodierAndGorier [[Gorn blood and gore]], this is especially jarring not only in comparison to the FamilyFriendly nature of the original show, but also for people who can't stand the sight of extreme violence and blood, especially if you're a fan of ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse''.
* The brief flashback showing Steven getting ''horribly maimed'' by Spinel, slashing his arm off and impaling him with her Rejuvenator, all while bearing a SlasherSmile.''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse''.
** The brief flashback showing Steven getting ''horribly maimed'' by Spinel, [[AnArmAndALeg slashing his arm off]] and [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice impaling him with her Rejuvenator]], all while bearing a SlasherSmile, only helps to further cement her status as purely evil bastard!
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* Hell! [[HumanoidAbomination Pink Steven himself]] comes off as [[UncannyValley uncanny]] and out of place due to his [[TheStoic inability to express his feelings]], his robotic behavior and his raw, unfiltered power and calm but violent outburst only limited by Spinel's rejuvenator negating most of his powers and the remaining Crystal Gems having to keep him in check.
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* Hell! [[HumanoidAbomination Pink Steven himself]] comes off as [[UncannyValley uncanny]] and out of place due to his [[TheStoic inability to express his feelings]], his robotic behavior and his raw, unfiltered power and calm but violent outburst outbursts only limited by Spinel's rejuvenator negating most of his powers and the remaining Crystal Gems having to keep him in check.
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* Hell! [[HumanoidAbomination Pink Steven himself]] comes off as [[UncannyValley uncanny]] and out of place due to his [[TheStoic inability to express his feelings]], his robotic behavior and his raw, unfiltered power and calm but violent outburst only limited by Spinel's rejuvenator negating most of his powers and the remaining Crystal Gems having to keep him in check.
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* After Greg grieves over his son's dead body, he turns around Spinel's bubbled gem, picks up a bat and tries to '''''shatter''''' his sons's murderer. Greg, a normally cheerful and easygoing person, is so broken that he's willing to ''kill'' the one who took his child away from him. This shows how far grief-stricken parents are willing to go to avenge their dead progeniture.
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* After Greg grieves over his son's dead body, he turns around to Spinel's bubbled gem, picks up a bat and tries to '''''shatter''''' his sons's murderer. Greg, a normally cheerful and easygoing person, is so broken that he's willing to ''kill'' the one who took his child away from him. This shows how far grief-stricken parents are willing to can go to avenge their dead progeniture.
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* The way Pink Steven poofs Spinel, by having his shield shards thrown directly into her body, the way her body contorts and the blood makes it look like she got [[BackStab stabbed in the back]] in a particularly brutal way. Then Pink Steven nearly shatts Spinel. He has no emotions to prevent him from doing morally reprehensible acts. It's only thanks to Bismuth's intervention that he doesn't go through.
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* The way Pink Steven poofs Spinel, by having his shield shards thrown directly into her body, the way her body contorts and the blood makes it look like she got [[BackStab stabbed in the back]] in a particularly brutal way. Then Pink Steven nearly shatts shatters Spinel. He has no emotions to prevent him from doing morally reprehensible acts. It's only thanks to Bismuth's intervention that he doesn't go through.
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* All the blood and gore, this is especially jarring not only in comparison to the FamilyFriendly nature of the original show, but also for people who can't stand the sight of extreme violence and blood, especially if you're a fan of ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse''.
* Pink Steven nearly shattering Spinel. He has no emotions to prevent him from doing morally reprehensible acts. It's only thanks to Bismuth's intervention that he doesn't go through.
* Pink Steven nearly shattering Spinel. He has no emotions to prevent him from doing morally reprehensible acts. It's only thanks to Bismuth's intervention that he doesn't go through.
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* All the [[BloodierAndGorier blood and gore, gore]], this is especially jarring not only in comparison to the FamilyFriendly nature of the original show, but also for people who can't stand the sight of extreme violence and blood, especially if you're a fan of ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse''.
* The way Pink Steven poofs Spinel, by having his shield shards thrown directly into her body, the way her body contorts and the blood makes it look like she got [[BackStab stabbed in the back]] in a particularly brutal way. Then Pink Steven nearlyshattering shatts Spinel. He has no emotions to prevent him from doing morally reprehensible acts. It's only thanks to Bismuth's intervention that he doesn't go through.
* The way Pink Steven poofs Spinel, by having his shield shards thrown directly into her body, the way her body contorts and the blood makes it look like she got [[BackStab stabbed in the back]] in a particularly brutal way. Then Pink Steven nearly
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* After Greg grieves over his son's dead body, he turns around Spinel's bubbled gem, picks up a bat and tries to '''''shatter''''' his sons's murderer. Greg, a normally cheerful and easygoing person, is so broken that he's willing to ''kill'' the one who took his child away from him. This goes to show shows how far grief-stricken parents are willing to go to avenge their dead progeniture.
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* All the blood and gore, this is especially jarring not only in comparison to the FamilyFriendly nature of the original show, but also for people who can't stand the sight of extreme violence and blood, especially if you're a fan of ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse''.
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* All the blood and gore, this is especially jarring not only in comparison to the FamilyFriendly nature of the original show, but also for people who can't stand the sight of extreme violence and blood, especially if you're a fan of ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse''.''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse''.
* Pink Steven nearly shattering Spinel. He has no emotions to prevent him from doing morally reprehensible acts. It's only thanks to Bismuth's intervention that he doesn't go through.
* The various {{hallucinations}} of Pink Steven, especially the ones where Steven's organic body raises, with blood spilling out of his eyes and reaching out to Pink Steven like a zombie.
* After Greg grieves over his son's dead body, he turns around Spinel's bubbled gem, picks up a bat and tries to '''''shatter''''' his sons's murderer. Greg, a normally cheerful and easygoing person, is so broken that he's willing to ''kill'' the one who took his child away from him. This goes to show how far grief-stricken parents are willing to go to avenge their dead progeniture.
* Pink Steven nearly shattering Spinel. He has no emotions to prevent him from doing morally reprehensible acts. It's only thanks to Bismuth's intervention that he doesn't go through.
* The various {{hallucinations}} of Pink Steven, especially the ones where Steven's organic body raises, with blood spilling out of his eyes and reaching out to Pink Steven like a zombie.
* After Greg grieves over his son's dead body, he turns around Spinel's bubbled gem, picks up a bat and tries to '''''shatter''''' his sons's murderer. Greg, a normally cheerful and easygoing person, is so broken that he's willing to ''kill'' the one who took his child away from him. This goes to show how far grief-stricken parents are willing to go to avenge their dead progeniture.
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* It starts with Pink Steven checking on the status of Steven's body, using purely technical terminology, and when he concludes that he's gone, we're treated to Pink Steven giving a ThousandYardStare, holding Steven's lifeless body covered in blood and his arm trounced off. Remember, this is only ''the first two pages''.
* All the blood and gore, this is especially jarring not only in comparison to the FamilyFriendly nature of the original show, but also for people who can't stand the sight of extreme violence and blood, especially if you're a fan of ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse''.
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