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* Cazalla just in general. A character, whose driving force in his life is his desire to inflict as much torment and agony on others as possible, and does so completely without hesitating. Even his OffscreenVillainy is pretty scary, and the fact that he is actually on the side of law, makes it even worse.
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* Cazalla just in general. A character, whose driving force in his life is his desire to inflict as much torment and agony on others as possible, and does so completely without hesitating. Even his OffscreenVillainy OffstageVillainy is pretty scary, and the fact that he is actually on the side of law, makes it even worse.
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** His OffscreenVillainy as well. He tortured and murdered Don Diego's son, for a crime the latter wasn't even ''guilty'' of. Don Diego's description of the torture his son was put through paints Cazalla as a frightening figure long before we meet him.
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** His OffscreenVillainy OffstageVillainy as well. He tortured and murdered Don Diego's son, for a crime the latter wasn't even ''guilty'' of. Don Diego's description of the torture his son was put through paints Cazalla as a frightening figure long before we meet him.
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** His OffscreenVillainy as well. He tortured and murdered Don Diegos son, just for standing in his way. He is a very frightining villain.
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** His OffscreenVillainy as well. He tortured and murdered Don Diegos Diego's son, just for standing in a crime the latter wasn't even ''guilty'' of. Don Diego's description of the torture his way. He is son was put through paints Cazalla as a very frightining villain.frightening figure long before we meet him.
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* Some of the experiences at Matamceros. ClimbingTheCliffsOfInsanity, during a vast thunder storm, stands out, along with the coral snake crawling in the trousers of Lazue. That is especially unnerving for ophidophobes.
* The Kraken. The NothingIsScarier implication of its behavior, and the fact that it is bioluminiscent, and its CombatTentacles. Even Hunters defeat of ti using an EyeScream is {{Squick}} at the very least, and NightmareFuel at worst.
* The CannibalTribe at Boca del Dragon. The islands they land at, is described as excessively weird, and you and the characters know something is awry, they [[NothingIsScarier just don't know quite what.]] They even visit what must be considered a ghost town, and finds the [[NeverSmileAtACrocodile crocodile hide]] in the church, and realizes that it is the Caribs. And then Layd Almont is kidnapped by them.....
* The Kraken. The NothingIsScarier implication of its behavior, and the fact that it is bioluminiscent, and its CombatTentacles. Even Hunters defeat of ti using an EyeScream is {{Squick}} at the very least, and NightmareFuel at worst.
* The CannibalTribe at Boca del Dragon. The islands they land at, is described as excessively weird, and you and the characters know something is awry, they [[NothingIsScarier just don't know quite what.]] They even visit what must be considered a ghost town, and finds the [[NeverSmileAtACrocodile crocodile hide]] in the church, and realizes that it is the Caribs. And then Layd Almont is kidnapped by them.....
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* Some of the experiences at Matamceros.Matanceros. ClimbingTheCliffsOfInsanity, during a vast thunder storm, stands out, along with the coral snake crawling in the trousers of Lazue. That is especially unnerving for ophidophobes.
* The Kraken. The NothingIsScarier implication of its behavior, and the fact that it is bioluminiscent, and its CombatTentacles. EvenHunters Hunter's defeat of ti using an EyeScream is {{Squick}} it [[EyeScream by destroying its eye]] is, at the very least, and NightmareFuel at worst.
an example of {{Squick}}. At worst, it's raw NightmareFuel.
* The CannibalTribe at Boca del Dragon. The islands they land at, is described as excessively weird, and you and the characters know something is awry, they [[NothingIsScarier just don't know quite what.]] They even visit what must be considered a ghost town, and finds the [[NeverSmileAtACrocodile crocodile hide]] in the church, and realizes that it is the Caribs. And thenLayd Lady Almont is kidnapped by them.....
* The Kraken. The NothingIsScarier implication of its behavior, and the fact that it is bioluminiscent, and its CombatTentacles. Even
* The CannibalTribe at Boca del Dragon. The islands they land at, is described as excessively weird, and you and the characters know something is awry, they [[NothingIsScarier just don't know quite what.]] They even visit what must be considered a ghost town, and finds the [[NeverSmileAtACrocodile crocodile hide]] in the church, and realizes that it is the Caribs. And then
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** The torture of a crewmember, using rats. Really, he allows him to be tortued to death, ''by having rats eat his face.'' And he even told him what he wanted.
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** The torture of a crewmember, using rats. Really, More specifically, he allows him to be tortued to death, ''by having smears the hapless crewman's face with cheese, ''baiting the rats eat into eating his face.'' And he the frightened crewman even told him Cazalla what he wanted.wanted to know.
*** Somewhat subverted, in that while the crewman ''told'' Cazalla what Hunter was planning, but Cazalla didn't believe him. It's only after tracking the route of Hunter's departure after his escape that Cazalla realizes that yes, Hunter really ''was'' going after Mantanceros.
*** Somewhat subverted, in that while the crewman ''told'' Cazalla what Hunter was planning, but Cazalla didn't believe him. It's only after tracking the route of Hunter's departure after his escape that Cazalla realizes that yes, Hunter really ''was'' going after Mantanceros.
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* Cazalla just in general. A character, whose driving force in his life is his desire to inflict as much torment and agony on others as possible, and does so completely without hesitating. Even his OffscreenVillainy is pretty scary, and the fact that he is actually on the side of law, makes it even worse.
** Cazalla murdering a young crewmember, for not telling him where they are heading. Makes for hell of a KickTheDog moment, especially because he spiced it up with some FauxAffablyEvil behaviour as well.
** The torture of a crewmember, using rats. Really, he allows him to be tortued to death, ''by having rats eat his face.'' And he even told him what he wanted.
** His OffscreenVillainy as well. He tortured and murdered Don Diegos son, just for standing in his way. He is a very frightining villain.
** And finally, [[spoiler: His VillainousBreakdown near his death, where he jumps around like a rambcouosly insane madman, after his plans has fallen apart, before Hunter kills him.]]
* Some of the experiences at Matamceros. ClimbingTheCliffsOfInsanity, during a vast thunder storm, stands out, along with the coral snake crawling in the trousers of Lazue. That is especially unnerving for ophidophobes.
* The Kraken. The NothingIsScarier implication of its behavior, and the fact that it is bioluminiscent, and its CombatTentacles. Even Hunters defeat of ti using an EyeScream is {{Squick}} at the very least, and NightmareFuel at worst.
* The CannibalTribe at Boca del Dragon. The islands they land at, is described as excessively weird, and you and the characters know something is awry, they [[NothingIsScarier just don't know quite what.]] They even visit what must be considered a ghost town, and finds the [[NeverSmileAtACrocodile crocodile hide]] in the church, and realizes that it is the Caribs. And then Layd Almont is kidnapped by them.....
** Cazalla murdering a young crewmember, for not telling him where they are heading. Makes for hell of a KickTheDog moment, especially because he spiced it up with some FauxAffablyEvil behaviour as well.
** The torture of a crewmember, using rats. Really, he allows him to be tortued to death, ''by having rats eat his face.'' And he even told him what he wanted.
** His OffscreenVillainy as well. He tortured and murdered Don Diegos son, just for standing in his way. He is a very frightining villain.
** And finally, [[spoiler: His VillainousBreakdown near his death, where he jumps around like a rambcouosly insane madman, after his plans has fallen apart, before Hunter kills him.]]
* Some of the experiences at Matamceros. ClimbingTheCliffsOfInsanity, during a vast thunder storm, stands out, along with the coral snake crawling in the trousers of Lazue. That is especially unnerving for ophidophobes.
* The Kraken. The NothingIsScarier implication of its behavior, and the fact that it is bioluminiscent, and its CombatTentacles. Even Hunters defeat of ti using an EyeScream is {{Squick}} at the very least, and NightmareFuel at worst.
* The CannibalTribe at Boca del Dragon. The islands they land at, is described as excessively weird, and you and the characters know something is awry, they [[NothingIsScarier just don't know quite what.]] They even visit what must be considered a ghost town, and finds the [[NeverSmileAtACrocodile crocodile hide]] in the church, and realizes that it is the Caribs. And then Layd Almont is kidnapped by them.....
