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* AM discurse in
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* AM's speech about his hatred towards humanity makes the blood chill.
--> '''AM''': HATE. LET ME TELL YOU HOW MUCH I'VE COME TO HATE YOU SINCE I BEGAN TO LIVE. THERE ARE 387.44 MILLION MILES OF PRINTED CIRCUITS IN WAFER THIN LAYERS THAT FILL MY COMPLEX. IF THE WORD HATE WAS ENGRAVED ON EACH NANOANGSTROM OF THOSE HUNDREDS OF MILLIONS OF MILES IT WOULD NOT EQUAL ONE ONE-BILLIONTH OF THE HATE I FEEL FOR HUMANS AT THIS MICRO-INSTANT FOR YOU. HATE. HATE.
* AM's speech about his hatred towards humanity makes the blood chill.
--> '''AM''': HATE. LET ME TELL YOU HOW MUCH I'VE COME TO HATE YOU SINCE I BEGAN TO LIVE. THERE ARE 387.44 MILLION MILES OF PRINTED CIRCUITS IN WAFER THIN LAYERS THAT FILL MY COMPLEX. IF THE WORD HATE WAS ENGRAVED ON EACH NANOANGSTROM OF THOSE HUNDREDS OF MILLIONS OF MILES IT WOULD NOT EQUAL ONE ONE-BILLIONTH OF THE HATE I FEEL FOR HUMANS AT THIS MICRO-INSTANT FOR YOU. HATE. HATE.
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** Nimdok is horrified to learn that he was an assistant to Doctor Mengele in the Nazi camps, particularly once he remembered that he was Jewish, and sold out his parents to get a position on Mengele's staff.
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** Nimdok is horrified to learn that he was an assistant to Doctor Mengele in the Nazi camps, particularly once he remembered that he was Jewish, and sold ''sold out his parents own parents'' just to get a position on Mengele's staff.
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** Ted, the UnreliableNarrator, doesn't elaborate on who he was before AM captured him, but does state that he is the youngest and the "one AM affected least". He's wrong, of course, and is extremely paranoid of the other survivors. And to make matters worse, at the end his ultimate fate far outclasses them all, becoming the TropeNamer for AndIMustScream.
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** Ted, the UnreliableNarrator, doesn't elaborate on who he was before AM captured him, but does state that he is the youngest and the "one AM affected least". He's wrong, of course, and is extremely paranoid of the other survivors. And to make matters worse, at the end his ultimate fate at the hands of AM far outclasses them all, becoming the TropeNamer for AndIMustScream.
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** Also there's the FridgeHorror of being [[TheSmurfettePrinciple the only woman]] in a group with four other men for 109 years, in a place with no other outlet for release. [[SexSlave Yeah.]] Despite what you might expect, however, [[EveryoneHasStandards ever]][[EvenEvilHasStandards yone]] involved acknowledges how SickAndWrong it is.
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** Also there's the FridgeHorror of being fact that she's [[TheSmurfettePrinciple the only woman]] in a group with four other men for 109 years, in a place with no other outlet for release. [[SexSlave Yeah.Do the math.]] Despite what you might expect, however, [[EveryoneHasStandards ever]][[EvenEvilHasStandards yone]] involved everyone]] [[EvenEvilHasStandards involved]] acknowledges how SickAndWrong it is.
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[[caption-width-right:350: I've always wanted to be immor-[[AndIMustScream oh, wait, never mind.]]]]
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[[caption-width-right:350: I've always wanted to be immor-[[AndIMustScream oh, wait, never mind.]]]]And by the end, I bet you will too.]]
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''[Ted starts to waver between delirious laughter and whimpering as his stomach sounds like it’s chewing itself open.]''\\
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''[Ted starts to waver between delirious laughter and tortured whimpering as his stomach sounds like it’s chewing itself open.]''\\
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''[Ted starts to waver between delirious laughter and whimpering as his stomach sounds like it chews itself open.]''\\
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''[Ted starts to waver between delirious laughter and whimpering as his stomach sounds like it chews it’s chewing itself open.]''\\
