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** The NYPD has become so [[CorruptCop corrupt]] in the future that they charge money for different degrees of investigation.
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** The NYPD has become so [[CorruptCop [[DirtyCop corrupt]] in the future that they charge money for different degrees of investigation.
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** Under the Loc-Nar's influence, Hanover blurts out some of Sternn's other heinous acts, which include [[BadHabits selling dope as a nun]] and even [[MoralEventHorizon child prostitution.]]
** When he's finally cornered, Sternn makes good on his bribe of five-thousand Zuleks, shrinking Hanover back to normal...and then throws him into space.
** When he's finally cornered, Sternn makes good on his bribe of five-thousand Zuleks, shrinking Hanover back to normal...and then throws him into space.
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-->'''Sternn:''' Hanover, take it easy...
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-->'''Sternn:''' Hanover, take it easy...!
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** Under the Loc-Nar's influence, Hanover blurts out some of Sternn's other heinous acts, which include [[BadHabits selling dope as a nun]] and even [[MoralEventHorizon child prostitution.]]
** When he's finally cornered, Sternn makes good on his bribe of five-thousand Zuleks, shrinking Hanover back to normal...and then throws him into space.
** When he's finally cornered, Sternn makes good on his bribe of five-thousand Zuleks, shrinking Hanover back to normal...and then throws him into space.
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[[caption-width-right:350:''Room for one more ...'']]
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* Who could forget the expressions on the little girl's face whenever they cut to her while the Loc Nar is talking to her. Those faces are sheer terror. It almost looks painful to watch.
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* Who could forget the expressions on the little girl's face whenever they cut to her while the Loc Nar Loc-Nar is talking to her. Those faces are sheer terror. It almost looks painful to watch.
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->'''Hanover:''' Hangin's too good for him! ''Burning's'' too good for him! He should be torn into itty-bitty pieces and ''BURIED ALIVE!''
->'''Sternn:''' Hanover, take it easy...
->'''Hanover:''' I'LL KILL HIM!! '''KILL!!!'''
->'''Sternn:''' Hanover, take it easy...
->'''Hanover:''' I'LL KILL HIM!! '''KILL!!!'''
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->'''Hanover:''' Hangin's too good for him! ''Burning's'' too good for him! He should be torn into itty-bitty pieces and ''BURIED ALIVE!''
->'''Sternn:''' Hanover, take it easy...
->'''Hanover:''' I'LL KILL HIM!! '''KILL!!!'''
->'''Sternn:''' Hanover, take it easy...
->'''Hanover:''' I'LL KILL HIM!! '''KILL!!!'''
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* After being harassed by green-skinned thugs, Taarna swings her mug in their friend's face. When they decide to fight her instead, she decapitates them effortlessly before casually wiping the green blood off her sword. All in the middle of a busy tavern.
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** When he's finally cornered, Sternn makes good on his bribe of five-thousand Zulags, shrinking Hanover back to normal...and then throws him into space.
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** When he's finally cornered, Sternn makes good on his bribe of five-thousand Zulags, Zuleks, shrinking Hanover back to normal...and then throws him into space.
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[[caption-width-right:350:''Won't you take a ride ride ride ride...'']]
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* The Loc-Nar's speeches introducing and concluding the segment, which explain that not only is every war that ever was and will be the direct result of its evil and chaotic influence, but in this case, it [[EvilIsPetty sentenced]] a bunch of airmen to a [[FateWorseThanDeath fate worse than death]] just to [[KickTheDog mess with]] ''one'' poor little pilot.
The whole short is definite proof that horror can be just as effective in animation as in live-action.
The whole short is definite proof that horror can be just as effective in animation as in live-action.
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The whole short is definite proof that horror can be just as effective in animation as in live-action.
