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Uncanny Valley is IUEO now and the subjective version has been split; cleaning up misuse and ZCE in the process
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* UncannyValley: The Gentleman's cats, in-universe.
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Varjak Paw is a noble Mesopotamian Blue kitten, who lives in an old house high on the hill with his family and their owner, the Contessa. Varjak loves to hear from his grandfather stories of the family's earliest ancestor, Jalal, and his Way. It's said Jalal traveled all the way from Mesopotamia, fighting mighty warrior cats, and that he was a great hunter, who travelled to the ends of the earth, before settling in the house. But Varjak is the only one; his family, except his grandfather, are all content to stay behind the high walls, where they are fed and looked after.
Then the Gentleman arrives, accompanied by two strange cats who do not talk and have strange, blank, black eyes, and their arrival, along with the Contessa's death, throws the house into turmoil. Both Varjak and his grandfather sense something strange and wrong about the Gentleman, although the rest of the family refuse to see it. Varjak attempts to escape, and succeeds, but in the process the two black cats tear Varjak's grandfather apart.
Then the Gentleman arrives, accompanied by two strange cats who do not talk and have strange, blank, black eyes, and their arrival, along with the Contessa's death, throws the house into turmoil. Both Varjak and his grandfather sense something strange and wrong about the Gentleman, although the rest of the family refuse to see it. Varjak attempts to escape, and succeeds, but in the process the two black cats tear Varjak's grandfather apart.
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Varjak Paw is a noble Mesopotamian Blue kitten, who lives in an old house high on the hill with his family and their owner, the Contessa. Varjak loves to hear from his grandfather stories of the family's earliest ancestor, Jalal, and his Way. It's said Jalal traveled all the way from Mesopotamia, fighting mighty warrior cats, and that he was a great hunter, hunter who travelled to the ends of the earth, earth before settling in the house. But Varjak is the only one; one interested in adventure; his family, except his grandfather, are all content to stay behind the high walls, where they are fed and looked after.
Then the Gentleman arrives, accompanied by two strange cats who do not talk and have strange, blank, black eyes, and their arrival, along with the Contessa's death, throws the house into turmoil. Both Varjak and his grandfather sense something strange and wrong about the Gentleman, although the rest of the family refuse to see it. Spurred on by his grandfather, Varjakattempts escapes from the house into the outside world in order to escape, find and succeeds, but in the process the two black cats tear Varjak's grandfather apart.
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Then the Gentleman arrives, accompanied by two strange cats who do not talk and have strange, blank, black eyes, and their arrival, along with the Contessa's death, throws the house into turmoil. Both Varjak and his grandfather sense something strange and wrong about the Gentleman, although the rest of the family refuse to see it. Spurred on by his grandfather, Varjak
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Then the Gentleman arrives, accompanied by two strange cats who do not talk and have strange, blank, black eyes, and their arrival, along with the Contessa's death, throws the house into turmoil. Both Varjak and his grandfather sense something strange and wrong about the Gentleman, although the rest of the family refuse to see it. Varjak attempts to escape, and suceeds, but in the process the two black cats tear Varjak's grandfather apart.
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Then the Gentleman arrives, accompanied by two strange cats who do not talk and have strange, blank, black eyes, and their arrival, along with the Contessa's death, throws the house into turmoil. Both Varjak and his grandfather sense something strange and wrong about the Gentleman, although the rest of the family refuse to see it. Varjak attempts to escape, and suceeds, succeeds, but in the process the two black cats tear Varjak's grandfather apart.
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* BlackSheep: Varjack. Outside of Elder Paw, the rest of his family are either vain bullies or dismissive jerks that are obsessed with perfection.
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* BlackSheep: Varjack.Varjak. Outside of Elder Paw, the rest of his family are either vain bullies or dismissive jerks that are obsessed with perfection.
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* BlackSheep: Varjack. Outside of Elder Paw, the rest of his family are either vain bullies or dismissive jerks that are obsessed with perfection.