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* FiveRaces: The gods created Huanin, Kyrinin, Anain, Saolin and Whreinin, although they don't fit the standard five races mold.
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The titular world was abandoned by its gods long ago, after the Huanin (humans) and Kyrinin (elves, but [[OurElvesAreBetter notably different]]) rose up to destroy the Whreinin (wolf people).
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The titular world was abandoned by its gods long ago, after the Huanin (humans) and Kyrinin (elves, but [[OurElvesAreBetter [[OurElvesAreDIfferent notably different]]) rose up to destroy the Whreinin (wolf people).
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* [[OurElvesAreBetter Our Elves Are Different]]: The Kyrinin are somewhat similar in appearance to Tolkienesque elves, but during the events of the story, live tribal lives, and can be quite savage. Nevertheless, they are described as graceful, and beautiful, though the tattoos they wear and their primitive dress can take away from that.
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* [[OurElvesAreBetter Our Elves Are Different]]: OurElvesAreDifferent: The Kyrinin are somewhat similar in appearance to Tolkienesque elves, but during the events of the story, live tribal lives, and can be quite savage. Nevertheless, they are described as graceful, and beautiful, though the tattoos they wear and their primitive dress can take away from that.
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'''The Godless World''' is a fantasy trilogy written by Scottish author Brian Ruckley. It consists of: ''Winterbirth'', ''Bloodheir'' and ''Fall of Thanes''.
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* AllDeathsFinal
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* AnyoneCanDie: And how!
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* BadassArmy: The Battle Inkallim
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* EmotionlessGirl: Shraeve
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* TheLifestream: The Shared.
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* MilesGloriosus: Temegrin the Eagle
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* TheNeidermeyer: Aewult
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* OneManArmy: Kanin, Taim Narran, Shraeve
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* PraetorianGuard: A Thane's Shield.
* ProfessionalKiller: The Hunt Inkallim.
* ProfessionalKiller: The Hunt Inkallim.
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* PraetorianGuard: A Thane's Shield.
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* SmallNameBigEgo: Aewult, Temegrin
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* TheSpymaster: Torquentine
* TheStoic: Fiallic, Shraeve... well, all the Battle Inkallim, really.
* TheStoic: Fiallic, Shraeve... well, all the Battle Inkallim, really.
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* VeryPunchableMan: Kale, Temegrin, Aewult
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The trilogy features some excellent world-building, realistic characters and a dark yet very gripping narrative. Though relatively unknown, it is highly recommended.
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The trilogy features some excellent elaborate world-building, realistic characters and a dark yet very gripping narrative. Though relatively unknown, it is highly recommended.but multifaceted narrative.
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* {{Badass}}: Kanin, Rothe, Taim, Coinach, Igris, Varryn, Shraeve, Fiallic
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* WouldHurtAChild: Wain kills an infant during the attack of the Lannis castle.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Wain kills an infant during the attack of the Lannis castle.on Anduran.
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* LackOfEmpathy: Aeglyss tries, but he really cannot sympathise with others, which it what causes so many of his problems.
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* LackOfEmpathy: Aeglyss tries, but he really cannot sympathise with others, which it is what causes so many of his problems.
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* EldritchAbomination: The Anain are inscrutable, formless beings who live within The Shared and use plantlife to to form bodies when they need them.
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* EldritchAbomination: The Anain are inscrutable, formless beings who live within The Shared and use plantlife to plant life to form bodies when they need them.
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* DarkMessiah: [[spoiler:Aeglyss]] in the second and third books. Many of the Inkallim are convinced he is their savior, and he does nothing to disuade them of that notion.
* DeathSeeker: By ''Fall of Thanes'' [[spoiler:Aeglyss]] wants to die, but he's become too powerful to actual do it.
* DeathSeeker: By ''Fall of Thanes'' [[spoiler:Aeglyss]] wants to die, but he's become too powerful to actual do it.
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* DarkMessiah: [[spoiler:Aeglyss]] in the second and third books. Many of the Inkallim are convinced he is their savior, and he does nothing to disuade dissuade them of that notion.
* DeathSeeker: By ''Fall of Thanes'' [[spoiler:Aeglyss]] wants to die, but he's become too powerful toactual actually do it.
* DeathSeeker: By ''Fall of Thanes'' [[spoiler:Aeglyss]] wants to die, but he's become too powerful to
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* BigBad: [[spoiler:Aeglyss]], who's need for acceptance and psychological damage more or less destroy the world.
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* BigBad: [[spoiler:Aeglyss]], who's whose need for acceptance and psychological damage more or less destroy the world.
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* HalfBreedDiscrimination: The na'kyrim have it rough, of that there is no doubt.
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* TedBaxter: Aewult, Temegrin
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* ForWantOfANail: The story is essentially kicked off because the king of the bloods decided to 'depopulate' the northern bloods of warriors (By using them as cannon fodder during a drawn out siege that could normally be ended through less violent means), as punishment for their refusal to be bootlicking sycophants ([[spoiler: and feared no reprecussions because the king was secretly negotiating with the king of the Black Road bloods to ensure that there would never be another war between the two]]). The fact that there are nowhere near enough warriors left in the north present to hold back the Black Road (Which had been the sole purpose for the existence of these northern bloods since the exile of the Black Road) is what emboldens the Black Road to attack.
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* ForWantOfANail: The story is essentially kicked off because the king High Thane of the bloods Bloods decided to 'depopulate' the northern bloods Bloods of warriors (By using them as cannon fodder during a drawn out siege that could normally be ended through less violent means), as punishment for their refusal to be bootlicking sycophants ([[spoiler: and ([[spoiler:and feared no reprecussions because the king High Thane was secretly negotiating with the king High Thane of the Black Road bloods Bloods to ensure that there would never be another war between the two]]). The fact that there are nowhere near enough warriors left in the north present to hold back the Black Road (Which had been the sole purpose for the existence of these northern bloods Bloods since the exile of the Black Road) is what emboldens the Black Road to attack.
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* ForWantOfANail: The story is essentially kicked off because the king of the bloods decided to 'depopulate' the northern bloods of warriors (By using them as cannon fodder during a drawn out siege that could normally be ended through less violent means), as punishment for their refusal to be bootlicking sycophants ([[spoiler: and feared no reprecussions because the king was secretly negotiating with the king of the Black Road bloods to ensure that there would never be another war between the two]]). The fact that there are nowhere near enough warriors left in the north present to hold back the Black Road (Which had been the sole purpose for the existence of these northern bloods since the exile of the Black Road) is what emboldens the Black Road to attack.
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