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* KnifeNut : Ethan carries two dozen knives
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[[https://venavis.blog/category/mature-writing/soulstorm/ Storm of Souls]] is a web serial novel originally presented on [[http://venavis.deviantart.com/gallery/60857522/SoulStorm deviantART.]] It is high fantasy, featuring sorcerers, dragons, and various types of magic.
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* ActOfTrueLove
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* ActOfTrueLoveActOfTrueLove: Ethan and Samet's bond has them performing superhuman feats for each other
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* AssholeVictim : Brelith
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* AssholeVictim : BrelithNobody really minded when Brelith caught a face full of molten metal.
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* DontMakeMeDestroyYou
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* DontMakeMeDestroyYouDontMakeMeDestroyYou: Samet doesn't like to kill
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* GoodIsNotSoft
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* GoodIsNotSoftGoodIsNotSoft: Samet doesn't like to kill, but if pushed he doesn't feel a lot of remorse over it.
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* RescueRomance
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* RescueRomanceRescueRomance: Both Samet and Ethan rescue each other multiple times. Sarah and Sir Vincent get in on the act as well
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* SafeSaneAndConsensual
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* SafeSaneAndConsensualSafeSaneAndConsensual : Samet and Ethan establish safe words very early. [[spoiler: Ethan then gets a second, in the form of Samet's truename]]
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes : Perhaps the only thing keeping Vadin from slipping into CompleteMonster territory is he really does love his son.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes : Perhaps the only thing keeping Vadin from slipping into CompleteMonster territory is he really does love his son.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes : Perhaps the only thing keeping Vadin from slipping into CompleteMonster territory is he really does love his son.
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Prince Ethan is captured, enslaved, and tortured by an enemy warlord. He reaches the breaking point, then ends up in the hands of the warlord's son. Rather than mistreat his new acquisition, Samet treats him kindly and begins the slow process of helping him heal. As Ethan recovers, he and Samet befriend each other enough that Samet eventually trusts Ethan with his secret. Rather than aiding his father, Samet is the one trying to stop the warlord's real plan to set himself up as tyrant over the entire land.
To save the world, the two will even brave the dangers of hell itself.
To save the world, the two will even brave the dangers of hell itself.
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade : Some of Ethan's enchanted knives qualify.
* AffablyEvil : Vadin can go from brutally torturing a broken young man to nagging his son about giving him grandchildren without pausing for breath in between.
* AgonyOfTheFeet : Not played for laughs.
* AssholeVictim : Brelith
* ArchnemesisDad : Samet really doesn't want to be his father's enemy, he just wants his father to not employ a doomsday weapon and make bargains with dark powers.
* BadassFamily : A tendency of royalty
* BattleAmongstTheFlames : Happens a lot when Samet is around. He can freeze things or use electricity, he just happens to be at his best with fire.
* AffablyEvil : Vadin can go from brutally torturing a broken young man to nagging his son about giving him grandchildren without pausing for breath in between.
* AgonyOfTheFeet : Not played for laughs.
* AssholeVictim : Brelith
* ArchnemesisDad : Samet really doesn't want to be his father's enemy, he just wants his father to not employ a doomsday weapon and make bargains with dark powers.
* BadassFamily : A tendency of royalty
* BattleAmongstTheFlames : Happens a lot when Samet is around. He can freeze things or use electricity, he just happens to be at his best with fire.
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe : Robert eventually befriends Samet. Samet takes a sword for Robert's children [[spoiler: and later cuts off his own hand to get to them in time for a RoaringRampageofRescue]]
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe : Robert eventually befriends Samet. [[spoiler: Samet takes a sword for Robert's children [[spoiler: and later cuts off his own hand to get to them in time for a RoaringRampageofRescue]]RoaringRampageofRescue]]
* BenevolentBoss : Whether he's actually benevolent or simply knows the power of loyalty, Vadin is generous and polite to his soldiers. He's known to keep his word, though he is prone to reminding people that also holds true for threats. It's a trait he shares with his son Samet.
* BenevolentBoss : Whether he's actually benevolent or simply knows the power of loyalty, Vadin is generous and polite to his soldiers. He's known to keep his word, though he is prone to reminding people that also holds true for threats. It's a trait he shares with his son Samet.
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* CulturedBadass : Samet is educated, well spoken, and polite.
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* ComesGreatResponsibility : To the point that Robert has to occasionally remind Samet that it's okay to let someone else bear some of the weight.
* ConvectionSchmonvection : Averted. Unless you are Ethan, it's best not to get near Samet when he's angry.
* CourtMage : There seems to be an entire order of these.
* CulturedBadass : Samet is educated, well spoken, and polite. He's also capable of making a dragon's head explode.
* ConvectionSchmonvection : Averted. Unless you are Ethan, it's best not to get near Samet when he's angry.
* CourtMage : There seems to be an entire order of these.
* CulturedBadass : Samet is educated, well spoken, and polite.
* DontMakeMeDestroyYou
* GoodIsNotSoft
* MayDecemberRomance : Margaret is the same age as King Sikander's daughter. He's impressed enough with her actions during the rescue to let her know he'd be very interested in discussing her hand with her father.
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* OneManArmy : Several times over the story Samet proves himself to be one of these.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething : In addition to Samet himself, King Robert also regularly proves that AuthorityEqualsAsskicking
* SafeSaneAndConsensual
* SceneryPorn : It says something about Ethan's mindset that he finds parts of hell aesthetically pleasing.
* ScrewTheRulesIHaveSupernaturalPowers : Samet is very polite when he finally gets tired of the council's crap and points out that he is very capable of invoking this troop.
* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight : Once King Sikander learns the true situation, he demonstrates that if he has to choose ToBeLawfulOrGood , he's going to take good. And that AuthorityEqualsAsskicking
* SafeSaneAndConsensual
* SceneryPorn : It says something about Ethan's mindset that he finds parts of hell aesthetically pleasing.
* ScrewTheRulesIHaveSupernaturalPowers : Samet is very polite when he finally gets tired of the council's crap and points out that he is very capable of invoking this troop.
* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight : Once King Sikander learns the true situation, he demonstrates that if he has to choose ToBeLawfulOrGood , he's going to take good. And that AuthorityEqualsAsskicking
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* WarriorPrince : Ethan is one.
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* WarriorPrince TrustPassword : Samet and Ethan is one.develop several over the course of the story to help Ethan get through his PTSD. A few times Ethan uses them on Samet. [[spoiler: Samet's truename can be considered one of these, considering the level of trust Samet had to have to share it with Ethan in the first place]]
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* CompleteMonster : Warlord Vadin. Most assume Samet is one of these due to him being a sorcerer, but he averts it hard.
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[[https://venavis.blog/category/mature-writing/soulstorm/ Storm of Souls]] is a web original originally presented on [[http://venavis.deviantart.com/gallery/60857522/SoulStorm deviantART.]] It is high fantasy, featuring sorcerers, dragons, and various types of magic.
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[[https://venavis.blog/category/mature-writing/soulstorm/ Storm of Souls]] is a web original serial novel originally presented on [[http://venavis.deviantart.com/gallery/60857522/SoulStorm deviantART.]] It is high fantasy, featuring sorcerers, dragons, and various types of magic.
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[[http://venavis.deviantart.com/gallery/60857522/SoulStorm Storm of Souls]] is a web original currently presented on deviantART. It is high fantasy, featuring sorcerers, dragons, and various types of magic.
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[[https://venavis.blog/category/mature-writing/soulstorm/ Storm of Souls]] is a web original originally presented on [[http://venavis.deviantart.com/gallery/60857522/SoulStorm Storm of Souls]] is a web original currently presented on deviantART. deviantART.]] It is high fantasy, featuring sorcerers, dragons, and various types of magic.
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe : Robert eventually befriends Samet. Samet takes a sword for Robert's children and later cuts off his own hand to get to them in time for a RoaringRampageofRescue
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe : Robert eventually befriends Samet. Samet takes a sword for Robert's children [[spoiler: and later cuts off his own hand to get to them in time for a RoaringRampageofRescueRoaringRampageofRescue]]
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* DarkIsNotEvil : Samet is a sorcerer and considered to be hellspawn. He's a good and honorable man trying to save the world
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* DarkIsNotEvil : Samet is a sorcerer and considered to be hellspawn. He's a good and honorable man trying to save the worldworld. Varorgirin seems to be this as well.
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* ImmuneToFire : Ethan becomes this. It's suggested it has to do with Samet's own ties to fire.
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* ImmuneToFire FriendlyFireproof : Ethan becomes this. It's suggested it has is this to do with Samet's own ties to fire.magic
* KnifeNut : Ethan carries two dozen knives
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* WarriorPrince : Ethan is one.one.
* WorthyOpponent : Vadin seems to view King Robert as one. At least he seems pleased when King Robert brings his armies out again.
* WorthyOpponent : Vadin seems to view King Robert as one. At least he seems pleased when King Robert brings his armies out again.
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!!Provides Examples Of:
* BattleCouple : Samet and Ethan eventually become one of these
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe : Robert eventually befriends Samet. Samet takes a sword for Robert's children and later cuts off his own hand to get to them in time for a RoaringRampageofRescue
* BerserkButton : Do not mess with Ethan in front of Samet. Do not mess with Samet in front of Ethan.
* BullyingADragon : The sheer number of people stupid enough to pick a fight with Samet is a bit mindboggling.
* CombatPragmatist : Margaret is no warrior, but she'll grab whatever is at hand and beat you over the head with it
* CompleteMonster : Warlord Vadin. Most assume Samet is one of these due to him being a sorcerer, but he averts it hard.
* CulturedBadass : Samet is educated, well spoken, and polite.
* DarkIsNotEvil : Samet is a sorcerer and considered to be hellspawn. He's a good and honorable man trying to save the world
* ImmuneToFire : Ethan becomes this. It's suggested it has to do with Samet's own ties to fire.
* KillItWithFire : Samet's go to method of combat.
* LikeAnOldMarriedCouple : Whenever Samet and Ethan start bickering
* MagicKnight : Averted. Samet is terrible at physical combat and bad enough with a sword that Ethan won't even let him have one.
* NoodleIncident : Sir Vincent rescuing Sarah was apparently a series of them.
* OneManArmy : Several times over the story Samet proves himself to be one of these.
* SilkHidingSteel : Queen Tabitha is no warrior. She can make Robert and Samet both behave themselves with a single polite but firm statement
* ShipperOnDeck : Ethan and Samet are both these for Sir Vincent and Sarah.
* TranquilFury : Samet doesn't shout, but when he gets angry the stone beneath his feet starts to melt
* WarriorPrince : Ethan is one.
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!!Provides Examples Of:
* BattleCouple : Samet and Ethan eventually become one of these
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe : Robert eventually befriends Samet. Samet takes a sword for Robert's children and later cuts off his own hand to get to them in time for a RoaringRampageofRescue
* BerserkButton : Do not mess with Ethan in front of Samet. Do not mess with Samet in front of Ethan.
* BullyingADragon : The sheer number of people stupid enough to pick a fight with Samet is a bit mindboggling.
* CombatPragmatist : Margaret is no warrior, but she'll grab whatever is at hand and beat you over the head with it
* CompleteMonster : Warlord Vadin. Most assume Samet is one of these due to him being a sorcerer, but he averts it hard.
* CulturedBadass : Samet is educated, well spoken, and polite.
* DarkIsNotEvil : Samet is a sorcerer and considered to be hellspawn. He's a good and honorable man trying to save the world
* ImmuneToFire : Ethan becomes this. It's suggested it has to do with Samet's own ties to fire.
* KillItWithFire : Samet's go to method of combat.
* LikeAnOldMarriedCouple : Whenever Samet and Ethan start bickering
* MagicKnight : Averted. Samet is terrible at physical combat and bad enough with a sword that Ethan won't even let him have one.
* NoodleIncident : Sir Vincent rescuing Sarah was apparently a series of them.
* OneManArmy : Several times over the story Samet proves himself to be one of these.
* SilkHidingSteel : Queen Tabitha is no warrior. She can make Robert and Samet both behave themselves with a single polite but firm statement
* ShipperOnDeck : Ethan and Samet are both these for Sir Vincent and Sarah.
* TranquilFury : Samet doesn't shout, but when he gets angry the stone beneath his feet starts to melt
* WarriorPrince : Ethan is one.
