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The sequel to the best-seller ''Literature/PleaseDontTellMyParentsImASupervillain''.
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The sequel to the best-seller ''Literature/PleaseDontTellMyParentsImASupervillain''.
''Literature/PleaseDontTellMyParentsImASupervillain'' by Creator/RichardRoberts.
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Penny and her friends are back in school, and finding themselves extremely bored without any supervillainy. While Penny distracts herself with wondering which of her classmates have powers, it's not really working. Thankfully, Spider comes up with a mission for them: She has detected a human transmission from the moons of Jupiter, farther than any human has ever gone. She wants Bad Penny to build a spaceship and investigate. The result is a red catfish bioship that carries the team to the stars.
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Penny and her friends are back in school, and finding themselves extremely bored without any supervillainy. While Penny distracts herself with wondering which of her classmates have powers, it's not really working. Thankfully, Spider comes up with a mission for them: She has detected a human transmission from the moons of Jupiter, farther than any human has ever gone. She wants Bad Penny to build a spaceship and investigate. The result is a red catfish bioship [[LivingShip bioship]] that carries the team to the stars.
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: After the BigDamnKiss of the last book, Ray and Penny's relationship remains poorly defined. They spent too much time avoiding awkward conversations. She's extremely embarrassed to find that her mother noticed before she did.
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: After the BigDamnKiss TheBigDamnKiss of the last book, Ray and Penny's relationship remains poorly defined. They spent too much time avoiding awkward conversations. She's extremely embarrassed to find that her mother noticed before she did.
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* ImportantHaircut: Remmy cuts off her braids [[spoiler: after building he mech and going on an Unstoppable Rage.]]
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* ImportantHaircut: Remmy cuts off her braids [[spoiler: after building he her mech and going on an Unstoppable Rage.UnstoppableRage.]]
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: The battery and ball of electricity left at Penny's computer, and the person who left the challenge for her, are immediately forgotten about as they soon after are sent into space. The ending of the book also wraps up in a hurry with no time to remember them, but then they serve as an opener for the third book.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: The battery and ball of electricity left at Penny's computer, and the person who left the challenge for her, are immediately forgotten about as they soon after are sent into space. The ending of the book also wraps up in a hurry with no time to remember them, but then [[ChekhovsGun they serve as an opener for the third book.book]].
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: The battery and ball of electricity left at Penny's computer, and the person who left the challenge for her, are immediately forgotten about as they soon after are sent into space. The ending of the book also wraps up in a hurry with no time to remember them, but then they serve as an opener for the third book.
* WordOfGod: Author posted some extra backstory materials on the Puppeteers [[http://frankensteinbeck.blogspot.com.by/2015/12/puppeteers.html on his blog]].
* WordOfGod: Author posted some extra backstory materials on the Puppeteers [[http://frankensteinbeck.blogspot.com.by/2015/12/puppeteers.html on his blog]].
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: The battery and ball of electricity left at Penny's computer, and the person who left the challenge for her, are immediately forgotten about as they soon after are sent into space. The ending of the book also wraps up in a hurry with no time to remember them, but then they serve as an opener for the third book.
* WordOfGod: Author posted some extra backstory materials on the Puppeteers [[http://frankensteinbeck.blogspot.com.by/2015/12/puppeteers.html on his blog]].book.
* WordOfGod: Author posted some extra backstory materials on the Puppeteers [[http://frankensteinbeck.blogspot.com.by/2015/12/puppeteers.html on his blog]].
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: The battery and ball of electricity left at Penny's computer, and the person who left the challenge for her, are immediately forgotten about as they soon after are sent into space.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: The battery and ball of electricity left at Penny's computer, and the person who left the challenge for her, are immediately forgotten about as they soon after are sent into space. The ending of the book also wraps up in a hurry with no time to remember them, but then they serve as an opener for the third book.
* WordOfGod: Author posted some extra backstory materials on the Puppeteers [[http://frankensteinbeck.blogspot.com.by/2015/12/puppeteers.html on his blog]].
* WordOfGod: Author posted some extra backstory materials on the Puppeteers [[http://frankensteinbeck.blogspot.com.by/2015/12/puppeteers.html on his blog]].
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* NeverTrustATitle: The moon referred to in the title is not the Earth's moon, which is the only one normally referred to as [[SpellMyNameWithAThe "the moon"]]. In actuality, it is one of Jupiter's many moons, which is alluded to by the WorkingTitle ''At Least I Didn't Blow Up OUR Moon''.
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* AsteroidThicket: Averted. Penny, Ray and Claire are surprised to discover how sparsely-populated the asteroid belt actually is when they take off from Ceres.
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* AsteroidThicket: Averted.Subverted and lampshaded. Penny, Ray and Claire are surprised to discover how sparsely-populated the asteroid belt actually is when they take off from Ceres.
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* AsteroidThicket: Averted. Penny, Ray and Claire are surprised to discover how sparsely-populated the asteroid belt actually is when they take off from Ceres.
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** [[spoiler:Both the Conquerors and the Puppeteers. The Conquerors are self-replicating Von Neumann probes that destroyed their creators and now conquer worlds and then just wait for orders that never come. The Puppeteers are a group of evolved "civilized races" that consider individuality and selfishness barbaric, and see removing free will and intelligence no more notable than plucking the stem off an apple]].
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** [[spoiler:Both the Conquerors and the Puppeteers. The Conquerors are self-replicating Von Neumann probes that destroyed their creators and now conquer worlds and then just wait for orders that never come. The Puppeteers are just as automatic creations of a group of evolved "civilized races" that consider individuality and selfishness barbaric, and see removing free will and intelligence no more notable than plucking the stem off an apple]].barbaric.]]
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* AwesomeButImpractical: Penny's power. In terms of raw inventing ability, she may well be the most powerful mad scientist in human history, but she can't really understand, repair, or reproduce her works, and she only has a vague control over what she ends up building.
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* ShoutOut: Juliet's friend Theatre/{{Harvey}} is a giant rabbit that only she can see. [[spoiler: It turns out he is very real, and looks nothing like a rabbit, but that's the way he want Juliet to see him, as he is too ugly for her to love.]]
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* ShoutOut: Juliet's friend Theatre/{{Harvey}} is a giant rabbit that only she can see. [[spoiler: It turns out he is very real, and looks nothing like a rabbit, but that's the way he want Juliet to see him, as he thinks he is too ugly for her to love.]]
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Once they reach Jupiter, they quickly discover that it's nowhere near as uninhabited as they thought. There are colonies on most of the major moons, descendants of mad science refugees from World War II. They have a society built on impossible technology, asteroid mining, and complete subservience to a breed of robots called automatons. Not to mention the extremely dangerous Puppeteers, and this one moon that could really use blowing up...
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Once they reach Jupiter, they quickly discover that it's nowhere near as uninhabited as they thought. There are colonies on most of the major moons, descendants of mad science refugees from World War II. They have a society built on impossible technology, asteroid mining, trawling alien fish, and complete subservience to a breed of robots called automatons. Not to mention the extremely dangerous Puppeteers, and this one moon that could really use blowing up...
* AlternateHistory: Superpowers have been around for a long time, making the world a very different place. At least some of the Aztec gods were humans of immense power who demanded human lives be sacrificed to them, while Cortez was a BadassNormal criminal from Cuba. The Trojan war actually happened, and Troy was unearthed, with a bulletproof mummified corpse missing a foot that is assumed to be Achilles.
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* AlternateHistory: Superpowers have been around for a long time, making the world a very different place. At least some of the Aztec gods were humans of immense power who demanded human lives be sacrificed to them, while Cortez was a BadassNormal criminal from Cuba. The Trojan war actually happened, and Troy was unearthed, with a bulletproof mummified corpse missing a foot that is assumed to be Achilles.
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