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Play Places launched in June 2015 and usually updates monthly. It is part of a larger series that spans the world's history[[note]]or rather, its future[[/note]]. The author is M. Qotob, aka qotob.
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Play Places launched in June 2015 and usually updates monthly. It is part of a larger series that spans the world's history[[note]]or rather, its future[[/note]]. The author is M. Qotob, Alkotob, aka qotob.
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* TheMetaverse -- Everything is implied to be within a simulation except for the Kem cage[[note]] though that might well be a simulation as well[[/note]].
* MassivelyMultiplayerOnlineRolePlayingGame -- The Play Places themselves, though some characters choose [[LotusEaterMachine a different name]] for the situation.
* BeastMan -- The Animal-People called Kems.
* InterspeciesRomance -- Juri & Lowf.
* FantasticNatureReserve -- The unknown location where the Kems are kept.
* MassivelyMultiplayerOnlineRolePlayingGame -- The Play Places themselves, though some characters choose [[LotusEaterMachine a different name]] for the situation.
* BeastMan -- The Animal-People called Kems.
* InterspeciesRomance -- Juri & Lowf.
* FantasticNatureReserve -- The unknown location where the Kems are kept.
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* TheMetaverse -- TheMetaverse: Everything is implied to be within a simulation except for the Kem cage[[note]] though that might well be a simulation as well[[/note]].
*MassivelyMultiplayerOnlineRolePlayingGame -- MassivelyMultiplayerOnlineRolePlayingGame: The Play Places themselves, though some characters choose [[LotusEaterMachine a different name]] for the situation.
*BeastMan -- BeastMan: The Animal-People called Kems.
*InterspeciesRomance -- InterspeciesRomance: Juri & and Lowf.
*FantasticNatureReserve -- FantasticNatureReserve: The unknown location where the Kems are kept.
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The third world consists of the virtual games that are addicting for some reason. The first virtual game introduced in the story is ''Lotusopia!'' which is magical fantasy, though there are other genres in other virtual worlds[[note]] and the author said cyberpunk will be the next destination to be added to the subplots[[/note]].
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The third world consists of the virtual games that are addicting for some reason. The first virtual game introduced in the story is ''Lotusopia!'' which is magical fantasy, though there are other genres in other virtual worlds[[note]] and the author said cyberpunk {{Cyberpunk}} will be the next destination to be added to the subplots[[/note]].
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The third world consists of the virtual games that everyone is addicted to for some reason.
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The third world consists of the virtual games that everyone is addicted to are addicting for some reason.
reason. The first virtual game introduced in the story is ''Lotusopia!'' which is magical fantasy, though there are other genres in other virtual worlds[[note]] and the author said cyberpunk will be the next destination to be added to the subplots[[/note]].
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The third world consists of the virtual games that everyone is addicted to for some reason.
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->''You are a mouse. So Squeak!'' -- BobJOS.
[=BobJOS=].
* TheMetaverse -- Everything is implied to be within a simulation except for the Kem cage[[note]] though that might well be a simulation as well[[/note]].
* MassivelyMultiplayerOnlineRolePlayingGame -- The Play Places themselves, though some characters choose [[LotusEaterMachine a different name]] for the situation.
* MassivelyMultiplayerOnlineRolePlayingGame -- The Play Places themselves, though some characters choose [[LotusEaterMachine a different name]] for the situation.
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* TheMetaverse -- Everything is implied to be within a simulation except for the Kem cage[[note]] though that might well be a simulation as well[[/note]].
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Play Places launched in June 2015 and usually updates monthly. It is part of a larger series that spans the world's history[[note]]or rather, its future[[/note]]. The author is M. Qotob, aka qotob.
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Play Places launched in June 2015 and usually updates monthly. It is part of a larger series that spans the world's history[[note]]or rather, its future[[/note]]. The author is M. Qotob, aka qotob.qotob.
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!! This show provides examples of:
* BeastMan -- The Animal-People called Kems.
* FantasticNatureReserve -- The unknown location where the Kems are kept.
* TheMetaverse -- Everything is implied to be within a simulation except for the Kem cage[[note]] though that might well be a simulation as well[[/note]].
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!! This show provides examples of:
* BeastMan -- The Animal-People called Kems.
* FantasticNatureReserve -- The unknown location where the Kems are kept.
* TheMetaverse -- Everything is implied to be within a simulation except for the Kem cage[[note]] though that might well be a simulation as well[[/note]].
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''[[http://qotob.wordpress.com/play-places/ Play Places]]'' by M. [=Qotob=], aka qotob, is an ongoing WebSerialNovel centered around three apparently unrelated worlds [[note]]which are all set in the future[[/note]].
''[[http://qotob.wordpress.com/play-places/ Play Places]]'' by M. [=Qotob=], aka qotob, is an ongoing WebSerialNovel centered around three apparently unrelated worlds [[note]]which are all set in the future[[/note]].
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->''You are a mouse. So Squeak!''
Squeak!'' -- BobJOS.
''[[http://qotob.wordpress.com/play-places/ Play Places]]''by M. [=Qotob=], aka qotob, is an ongoing WebSerialNovel centered around three apparently unrelated different worlds [[note]]which are all set in the future[[/note]].
''[[http://qotob.wordpress.com/play-places/ Play Places]]''
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Play Places launched in June 2015 and usually updates monthly. It is part of a larger series that spans the world's history[[note]]or rather, its future[[/note]]. The author is M. Qotob, aka qotob.
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''[[http://qotob.wordpress.com/play-places/ Play Places]]'' by M. [=Qotob=], aka qotob, is an ongoing WebSerialNovel centered around the events that link three apparently unrelated worlds [[note]]which are all set in the future[[/note]].
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The second world is a [[FantasticNatureReserve cage with super-realistic nature]] where [[BeastMan Kems]] live.
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The second world is a [[FantasticNatureReserve cage with super-realistic nature]] realistic-nature cage]] where [[BeastMan Kems]] live.
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->''You are a mouse. So Squeak!''
''[[http://qotob.wordpress.com/play-places/ Play Places]]'' by M. [=Qotob=], aka qotob, is an ongoing WebSerialNovel centered around the events that link three apparently unrelated worlds [[note]]which are all set in the future[[/note]].
The first world is essentially a [[TheMetaverse digital world]], where everyone works and lives[[note]]well, except the Kems[[/note]].
The second world is a [[FantasticNatureReserve cage with super-realistic nature]] where [[BeastMan Kems]] live.
Play Places launched in June 2015 and usually updates monthly.
''[[http://qotob.wordpress.com/play-places/ Play Places]]'' by M. [=Qotob=], aka qotob, is an ongoing WebSerialNovel centered around the events that link three apparently unrelated worlds [[note]]which are all set in the future[[/note]].
The first world is essentially a [[TheMetaverse digital world]], where everyone works and lives[[note]]well, except the Kems[[/note]].
The second world is a [[FantasticNatureReserve cage with super-realistic nature]] where [[BeastMan Kems]] live.
Play Places launched in June 2015 and usually updates monthly.
