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* NoPlansNoPrototypeNoBackup: Subverted ''hard.'' Crystal Caer made tons of starter remotes in the case of one being stolen or broken.
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* NoPlansNoPrototypeNoBackup: Subverted ''hard.'' as Crystal Caer made tons of starter remotes in the case of one being stolen or broken.
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Lovbird is a WebSerialNovel and AffectionateParody of the superhero genre, primarily lampooning the idea of the HypercompetentSidekick and the HeroOfAnotherStory.
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''Lovbird'' is a WebSerialNovel and AffectionateParody of the superhero genre, primarily lampooning the idea of the HypercompetentSidekick and the HeroOfAnotherStory.
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* PersonalityPowers: Played straight with all of the heroes and villains, with the sole exceptions of Midnight Crawler[[note]]Has shadow powers, but is very warm and inviting.[[/note]] and AJ [[note]]Has the power to manipulate technology, but is as far from the HollywoodNerd stereotype as anyone can be.[[/note]].
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* PersonalityPowers: Played straight with all of the heroes and villains, with the sole exceptions of Midnight Crawler[[note]]Has shadow powers, but is very warm and inviting.[[/note]] and AJ [[note]]Has the power to manipulate technology, but is as far from the HollywoodNerd nerd stereotype as anyone can be.[[/note]].
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* AdultFear: Oh, I don't know, how about your kids running off [[WouldHurtAChild to fight supervillains?]]
** It's further elaborated on when Gwen's mom is horrified when she sees her daughter with a broken arm, and Eve having an unspoken MyGodWhatHaveIDone reaction to a bedraggled Felix.
** It's further elaborated on when Gwen's mom is horrified when she sees her daughter with a broken arm, and Eve having an unspoken MyGodWhatHaveIDone reaction to a bedraggled Felix.
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* EyeScream: Quartz gets both a black eye from Lovbird kicking him in the face, and [[spoiler: cracking a few ribs when he falls out of the blimp.]]
* InjuredLimbEpisode: On their first 'night patrol', Beautyfly gets her arm broken, and the rest of the girls spend the vast majority of the battle running around in terror. This broken arm also puts her out of commission for at least a week.
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* RealityEnsues: On their first 'night patrol', Beautyfly gets her arm broken, and the rest of the girls spend the vast majority of the battle running around in terror. This broken arm also puts her out of commission for at least a week, averting SnapBack.
** Quartz suffers a similar fate when he gets both a black eye from Lovbird kicking him in the face, and [[spoiler: cracking a few ribs when he falls out of the blimp.]]
** The Mirzas are so grateful to have found someone that can actually get the mask to work that they shower Eve with compliments and praise for nothing. She immediately banks off this ego trip and tries to become a hero overnight, leading to her nearly getting caught by Crystal Caer.
** Eve and her friends nearly fall apart over the [[EpicFail absolutely horrendous battle.]] They get better, but there are still some hurt feelings among the group.
** NoPlansNoPrototypeNoBackup? No way! And being that Eve didn't discover them (or try to stop them) when they first started, they're completely finished with the project before the girls can have time to get ready.
** Quartz suffers a similar fate when he gets both a black eye from Lovbird kicking him in the face, and [[spoiler: cracking a few ribs when he falls out of the blimp.]]
** The Mirzas are so grateful to have found someone that can actually get the mask to work that they shower Eve with compliments and praise for nothing. She immediately banks off this ego trip and tries to become a hero overnight, leading to her nearly getting caught by Crystal Caer.
** Eve and her friends nearly fall apart over the [[EpicFail absolutely horrendous battle.]] They get better, but there are still some hurt feelings among the group.
** NoPlansNoPrototypeNoBackup? No way! And being that Eve didn't discover them (or try to stop them) when they first started, they're completely finished with the project before the girls can have time to get ready.
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* SmallNameBigEgo: The Mirzas are so grateful to have found someone that can actually get the mask to work that they shower Eve with compliments and praise for nothing. She immediately banks off this ego trip and tries to become a hero overnight, leading to her nearly getting caught by Crystal Caer.
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* EstablishingSeriesMoment: The opening scene involves three unnamed superheroes fighting a giant hulk of a supervillain. The female hero gets tossed through a window... and then immediately apologizes to the couple inside, asks if everyone's okay, and offers to pay for the damages as she jumps back into battle. [[CrowningMomentOfFunny The wife then gets a broom and dustpan for the husband to clean up.]]
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* EstablishingSeriesMoment: The opening scene involves three unnamed superheroes fighting a giant hulk of a supervillain. The female hero gets tossed through a window... and then immediately apologizes to the couple inside, asks if everyone's okay, and offers to pay for the damages as she jumps back into battle. [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments The wife then gets a broom and dustpan for the husband to clean up.]]
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* PersonalityPowers: Played straight with all of the heroes and villains, with the sole exceptions of Midnight Crawler[[note]]Has shadow powers, but is very warm and inviting.[[/note]] and AJ [[note]]Has the power to manipulate technology, but is as far from the HollywoodNerd stereotype as anyone can be.[[/note]].
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Bebe CannotSpitItOut that [[spoiler: Quartz's secret identity is Eve's crush, Damien out of fear that Eve would think she's just jealous. When Mercedes and AJ find out, they explain to her that Eve wouldn't care and would have believed her.]]
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Bebe CannotSpitItOut that [[spoiler: Quartz's secret identity is Eve's crush, Damien crush out of fear that Eve would she'd think she's just jealous. When Mercedes and AJ find out, they explain to her that Eve wouldn't care and would have believed her.]]
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'''--> Mercedes:''' Wait, weren't we supposed to, like, attack from the sides?
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