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* HumansByAnyOtherName: Cloaked humans are seen several times in the stories, but are never referred to by their species name, but the more general term ''Aunera''. They're generally portrayed as either ignorant or outright disruptive to the smoothly running Ai-Naidar society.
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* NotUsingTheZWord: Not Using the H Word: Cloaked aliens [[spoiler:who turn out to be humans]] are seen several times in the stories, but are never referred to by their species name, but the more general term ''Aunera''. They're generally portrayed as either ignorant or outright disruptive to the smoothly running Ai-Naidar society.
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* WhipItGood: A common tool for Correction, with truly heinous offences followed by being "Bathed in wine" (ie: Alcohol poured immediately onto the open wounds.)
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* BabiesMakeEverythingBetter: Bitterly subverted when one Noble goes into deep depression after [[spoiler: his cheerful suggestion that one couple should have children at their marriage ceremony leads to the wife dying in childbirth and the husband wasting away shortly thereafter.]] Shame literally has to [[ArmorPiercingSlap knock some sense into him.]]
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* BabiesMakeEverythingBetter: Bitterly subverted when one Noble goes into deep depression after [[spoiler: his cheerful suggestion that one couple should have children at their marriage ceremony leads to the wife dying in childbirth and the husband wasting away shortly thereafter.]] Shame literally has to [[ArmorPiercingSlap knock some sense into him.]]
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* AngstComa: Kor falls into this during the events of ''Black Blossom'' when he realizes the Noble he and the noble he's investigating are NotSoDifferent.
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* AngstComa: Kor falls into this during the events of ''Black Blossom'' when he realizes the Noble he and the noble he's investigating are NotSoDifferent.aren't so different.
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* HeroicBSOD: Shame experiences this in ''Black Blossom'' when he realizes he and the noble he was assigned to investigate are NotSoDifferent.
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* HeroicBSOD: Shame experiences this in ''Black Blossom'' when he realizes he and the noble he was assigned to investigate are NotSoDifferent.[[NotSoDifferentRemark aren't so different.]]
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A series of short stories and one completed serialized web novel, all written by [[Creator/MCAHogarth M.C.A. Hogarth]], ''Kherishdar'' is a five planet alien empire whose people, the Ai-Naidar, are tall, feline aliens which have an insular, [[AliensNeverInventedDemocracy caste based society]] that emphasizes the good of the community over the individual. Hogarth explores the implications of this in a series of short "incense" stories, starting with the definition of a single word or concept, which leads into an illustration of a single aspect of life among the Ai-Naidar. These stories may be found at her website and [[http://www.mcahogarth.org/the-books-of-kherishdar/ three printed collections]], The Aphorisms of Kherishdar, written from the point of view of [[EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep The Calligrapher]], which concentrates (mostly) on the positives of the Ai-Naidar civilization, while The Admonishments of Kherishdar focuses on the criminals and malcontents, who all give their impressions of Shame, the embodiment of justice in Ai-Naidar society and charged personally by TheEmperor with Correcting individual behavior so it comes in line with Society, and the novel ''Black Blossom'', in which Shame is dispatched to correct an entire major house, and The Calligrapher follows to keep him sane.
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A series of short stories and one completed serialized web novel, all written by [[Creator/MCAHogarth M.C.A. Hogarth]], ''Kherishdar'' is a five planet alien empire whose people, the Ai-Naidar, are tall, feline aliens which have an insular, [[AliensNeverInventedDemocracy caste based society]] that emphasizes the good of the community over the individual. Hogarth explores the implications of this in a series of short "incense" stories, starting with the definition of a single word or concept, which leads into an illustration of a single aspect of life among the Ai-Naidar. These stories may be found at her website and [[http://www.mcahogarth.org/the-books-of-kherishdar/ three four printed collections]], The Aphorisms of Kherishdar, written from the point of view of [[EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep The Calligrapher]], which concentrates (mostly) on the positives of the Ai-Naidar civilization, civilization; while The Admonishments of Kherishdar focuses on the criminals and malcontents, who all give their impressions of Shame, the embodiment of justice in Ai-Naidar society and charged personally by TheEmperor with Correcting individual behavior so it comes in line with Society, Society; and the novel ''Black Blossom'', in which Shame is dispatched to correct an entire major house, and The Calligrapher follows to keep him sane.
sane; ''Kherishdar's Exception'' follows with a new character, Haraa, who has been tasked to study the strange and dangerous "aunera" aliens (whom we would know as humans).
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* BabiesEverAfter: Bitterly subverted when one Noble goes into deep depression after [[spoiler: his cheerful suggestion that one couple should have children at their marriage ceremony leads to the wife dying in childbirth and the husband wasting away shortly thereafter.]] Shame literally has to [[ArmorPiercingSlap knock some sense into him.]]
* BigGood: The Emperor, who also functions as a very literal GodEmperor, given his apparent ability to remember his past lives.
* BigGood: The Emperor, who also functions as a very literal GodEmperor, given his apparent ability to remember his past lives.
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* BabiesEverAfter: BabiesMakeEverythingBetter: Bitterly subverted when one Noble goes into deep depression after [[spoiler: his cheerful suggestion that one couple should have children at their marriage ceremony leads to the wife dying in childbirth and the husband wasting away shortly thereafter.]] Shame literally has to [[ArmorPiercingSlap knock some sense into him.]]
** Played with in ''Kherishdar's Exception'' as Haraa's decision to have a child marks her letting go of her old ''fathrikedi'' caste (who aren't allowed to procreate) and fully embracing her role as ''osulkedi''.
* BigGood: The Emperor, who also functions as a very literalGodEmperor, given his apparent ability to remember his past lives.GodEmperor.
** Played with in ''Kherishdar's Exception'' as Haraa's decision to have a child marks her letting go of her old ''fathrikedi'' caste (who aren't allowed to procreate) and fully embracing her role as ''osulkedi''.
* BigGood: The Emperor, who also functions as a very literal
* TheChainsOfCommanding: Much of The Calligrapher and Shame's work involves reinforcing noble caste leaders who become stressed as they try to balance the needs of the people under them with the demands of society in general.
* TheEmperor: A near divine being who despite the nominally science-fictional nature of the setting is said to be the reincarnation of the previous Emperors. [[spoiler: ''Kherishdar's Exception'' retcons him to be an immortal EmperorScientist who invented the Gates and can use them to rejuvenate himself.]]
* EveryoneIsBi: While Ai-Naidar have completely different terms for heterosexual and homosexual relationships most of them seem open to forming either variety.
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* FantasticCasteSystem: Regals, Nobles, Public Servants, Guardians, Merchants, Land-Workers, and Servants, in order of status, with several sub-castes to each. Ai-Naidar are born into their parents' caste but they are evaluated twice in childhood to determine the caste they hold in adulthood. Though the Noble and Regal castes lie above "the Wall of Birth" and lower caste Ai-Naidar can only rise above it through extremely rare marriages that have to be approved by the Emperor.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Ai-Naidar Houses are not necessarily composed of blood relatives and their spouses. As seen with the House [[spoiler: Shame and the Calligrapher found at the end of ''Black Blossom'' with several other characters they met before.]]
* FantasticCasteSystem: Regals, Nobles, PublicServants, Servants (''osulked'', the caste of all the books' protagonists thus far), Guardians, Merchants, Land-Workers, and Servants, and a sort of concubine or living decoration known as ''fathriked'' in order of status, with several sub-castes to each. Ai-Naidar are born into their parents' caste but they are evaluated twice in childhood to determine the caste they hold in adulthood. Though the Noble and Regal castes lie above "the Wall of Birth" and lower caste Ai-Naidar can only rise above it through extremely rare marriages that have to be approved by the Emperor.Emperor.
** It is also not unknown for an adult to be reassigned when their caste no longer suits them, [[spoiler: as seen when House Qenain's ''fathrikedi'' is reassigned as ''osulkedi''.]]
* FantasticNamingConvention: Ai-Naidar names are [given name] Nai'[House]-[caste], except ''fathriked'' who lose their names when selected for the caste. These may change as they join or found a new House or change castes, as Farren Nai'Sheviet-''osulkedi'' became Farren Nai'Qevellen-''osulkedi'' when he [[spoiler: founded House Qevellen with Kor]], and [[spoiler: House Qenain's]] ''fathrikedi'' became Haraa Nai'Qevallen-''osulkedi'' after her re-evaluation.
* FantasticCasteSystem: Regals, Nobles, Public
** It is also not unknown for an adult to be reassigned when their caste no longer suits them, [[spoiler: as seen when House Qenain's ''fathrikedi'' is reassigned as ''osulkedi''.]]
* FantasticNamingConvention: Ai-Naidar names are [given name] Nai'[House]-[caste], except ''fathriked'' who lose their names when selected for the caste. These may change as they join or found a new House or change castes, as Farren Nai'Sheviet-''osulkedi'' became Farren Nai'Qevellen-''osulkedi'' when he [[spoiler: founded House Qevellen with Kor]], and [[spoiler: House Qenain's]] ''fathrikedi'' became Haraa Nai'Qevallen-''osulkedi'' after her re-evaluation.
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* LonersAreFreaks: Goes double among the AI-Naidar, given its emphasis on community and family.
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* LonersAreFreaks: Goes double among the AI-Naidar, Ai-Naidar, given its emphasis on community and family.
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* PortalNetwork: The three main planets and two colonies of the Kherishdar Empire are connected by gates. Said to be much faster than the ships used by the Aunera.
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* APartyAlsoKnownAsAnOrgy: One amusing passage in ''Kherishdar's Exception'' has poor Haraa trying to explain that the Winter Tryst, a masquerade festival where the Ai-Naidar have anonymous sex with strangers as a safeguard against [[RoyalInbreeding caste inbreeding]], is not an "orgy" as we aunera would understand it.
* PortalNetwork: The three main planets and two colonies of the Kherishdar Empire are connected by gates. Said to be much faster than the ships used by theAunera.aunera.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: The default nature of the Noble Caste. When they don't live up to it, that's when the Emperor [[OhCrap calls Shame in.]]
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: The default nature of the Noble Caste.and Regal Castes. When they don't live up to it, that's when the Emperor [[OhCrap calls Shame in.]]
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* TheChainsOfCommanding: Much of The Calligrapher and Shame's work involves reinforcing noble caste leaders who become stressed as they try to balance the needs of the people under them with the demands of society in general.
* TheEmperor: A near divine being who despite the nominally science-fictional nature of the setting is said to be the reincarnation of the previous Emperors.
* TheEmperor: A near divine being who despite the nominally science-fictional nature of the setting is said to be the reincarnation of the previous Emperors.
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A series of short stories and one completed serialized web novel, all written by [[Creator/MCAHogarth M.C.A. Hogarth]], ''Kherishdar'' is a five planet alien empire whose people, the Ai-Naidar, are tall, feline aliens which have an insular, caste based society that emphasizes the good of the community over the individual. Hogarth explores the implications of this in a series of short "incense" stories, starting with the definition of a single word or concept, which leads into an illustration of a single aspect of life among the Ai-Naidar. These stories may be found at her website and [[http://www.mcahogarth.org/the-books-of-kherishdar/ three printed collections]], The Aphorisms of Kherishdar, written from the point of view of [[EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep The Calligrapher]], which concentrates (mostly) on the positives of the Ai-Naidar civilization, while The Admonishments of Kherishdar focuses on the criminals and malcontents, who all give their impressions of Shame, the embodiment of justice in Ai-Naidar society and charged personally by TheEmperor with Correcting individual behavior so it comes in line with Society, and the novel ''Black Blossom'', in which Shame is dispatched to correct an entire major house, and The Calligrapher follows to keep him sane.
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A series of short stories and one completed serialized web novel, all written by [[Creator/MCAHogarth M.C.A. Hogarth]], ''Kherishdar'' is a five planet alien empire whose people, the Ai-Naidar, are tall, feline aliens which have an insular, [[AliensNeverInventedDemocracy caste based society society]] that emphasizes the good of the community over the individual. Hogarth explores the implications of this in a series of short "incense" stories, starting with the definition of a single word or concept, which leads into an illustration of a single aspect of life among the Ai-Naidar. These stories may be found at her website and [[http://www.mcahogarth.org/the-books-of-kherishdar/ three printed collections]], The Aphorisms of Kherishdar, written from the point of view of [[EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep The Calligrapher]], which concentrates (mostly) on the positives of the Ai-Naidar civilization, while The Admonishments of Kherishdar focuses on the criminals and malcontents, who all give their impressions of Shame, the embodiment of justice in Ai-Naidar society and charged personally by TheEmperor with Correcting individual behavior so it comes in line with Society, and the novel ''Black Blossom'', in which Shame is dispatched to correct an entire major house, and The Calligrapher follows to keep him sane.
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* TattooSharpie: Ai-naidar nobles mark their subjects with a dye that lasts roughly a year in an annual ceremony. The emperor marks his personal servants with a more concentrated permanent version of the dye which is also mildly toxic.
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* [[WhatMeasureIsANonHuman What Measure is a Human?]]: "People" in the Ai-Naidar language refers strictly to their own species and culture. ''Aunera'' refers to anything not Ai-Naidar, on the level of animals or ''furniture''.
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* [[WhatMeasureIsANonHuman What Measure is a Human?]]: WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: "People" in the Ai-Naidar language refers strictly to their own species and culture. ''Aunera'' refers to anything not Ai-Naidar, on the level of animals or ''furniture''.
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* [[NotUsingTheZWord Not Using the H Word]]: Cloaked aliens [[spoiler: who turn out to be humans]] are seen several times in the stories, but are never referred to by their species name, but the more general term ''Aunera''. They're generally portrayed as either ignorant or outright disruptive to the smoothly running Ai-Naidar society.
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* [[NotUsingTheZWord NotUsingTheZWord: Not Using the H Word]]: Word: Cloaked aliens [[spoiler: who [[spoiler:who turn out to be humans]] are seen several times in the stories, but are never referred to by their species name, but the more general term ''Aunera''. They're generally portrayed as either ignorant or outright disruptive to the smoothly running Ai-Naidar society.society.
* OneWordTitle: The series is named after the Empire that the stories take place in.
* OneWordTitle: The series is named after the Empire that the stories take place in.
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: A mild example can be found in Hogarth's LiveJournal, where The Calligrapher and Shame sometimes appear in Hogarth's world for a moment to help her understand the definition of a particular Ai-Naidar word or aspect their culture.
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: A mild example can be found in Hogarth's LiveJournal, Website/LiveJournal, where The Calligrapher and Shame sometimes appear in Hogarth's world for a moment to help her understand the definition of a particular Ai-Naidar word or aspect their culture.
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* AngstComa: Kor falls into this during the events of ''Black Blossom'' when he realizes the Noble he and the noble he's investigating are NotSoDifferent.
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* LanguageEqualsThought: A major theme. The narrators frequently comment on the difficulty of translating Ai-Naidar concepts into Aunera words. One of the easier concepts to get across is that they think of the community first and the individual last, hence why the basic forms of their nouns are plural (i.e. those Ai-Naidar, that Ai-Naidari).
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* PortalNetwork: The three main planets and two colonies of the Kherishdar Empire are connected by gates. Said to be much faster than the ships used by the Aunera.
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* SchizoTech: The Ai-Naidar tend to prefer doing things the old-fashioned way. Practically the only places you even see electronics are research labs and the Gates. They communicate with hand-written letters carried by beasts of burden through stargates.
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A series of short stories and one on-going completed serialized web novel, all written by [[Creator/MCAHogarth M.C.A. Hogarth]], ''Kherishdar'' is a five planet alien empire whose people, the Ai-Naidar, are tall, feline aliens which have an insular, caste based society that emphasizes the good of the community over the individual. Hogarth explores the implications of this in a series of short "incense" stories, starting with the definition of a single word or concept, which leads into an illustration of a single aspect of life among the Ai-Naidar. These stories may be found at her website and two [[http://www.mcahogarth.org/the-books-of-kherishdar/ three printed collections, [[https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/12539 collections]], The Aphorisms of Kherishdar]], Kherishdar, written from the point of view of [[EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep The Calligrapher]], which concentrates (mostly) on the positives of the Ai-Naidar civilization, while [[https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/49547 The Admonishments of Kherishdar]] Kherishdar focuses on the criminals and malcontents, who all give their impressions of Shame, the embodiment of justice in Ai-Naidar society and charged personally by TheEmperor with Correcting individual behavior so it comes in line with Society.
Society, and the novel ''Black Blossom'', in which Shame is dispatched to correct an entire major house, and The Calligrapher follows to keep him sane.
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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: While The Calligrapher and Shame do have names that are mentioned in their stories, they're easy to miss until ''Black Blossom''. Given the very stratified nature of Ai-Naidar society, almost everyone goes by their title first, using their name only among close associates.
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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: While The Calligrapher and Shame do have names names[[note]]Farren Nai'Sheviet-''osulkedi'' and Kor Nai'Nerillin-''osulkedi'', respectively[[/note]] that are mentioned in their stories, they're easy to miss until ''Black Blossom''. Given the very stratified nature of Ai-Naidar society, almost everyone goes by their title first, using their name only among close associates.
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* BigGood: The Emperor, who also functions as a LivingGod.
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-->We Know you as ''aunera''-aliens-and have always had peace and good congress with you. One day, several of you asked: How is it that your empire works so well for you, when it would work so poorly for us? And so I found a translator, an ''aunerai'' scribe. Together we make available there ''fil ekain'', these incense stories, short but lingering...an attempt to explain what it is to have an Ai-Naidari soul.
--->'''The Aphorisms of Kherishdar, Introduction'''
-->I am the altar upon which society sacrifices its murderers, its thieves, its wayward spirits. I am their Correction... or their destruction. I serve Shame. Without me, there is no Civilization.
--->'''The Admonishments of Kherisdar, Introduction'''
A series of short stories and one on-going serialized web novel, all written by [[Creator/MCAHogarth M.C.A. Hogarth]], ''Kherishdar'' is a five planet alien empire whose people, the Ai-Naidar, are tall, feline aliens which have an insular, caste based society that emphasizes the good of the community over the individual. Hogarth explores the implications of this in a series of short "incense" stories, starting with the definition of a single word or concept, which leads into an illustration of a single aspect of life among the Ai-Naidar. These stories may be found at her website and two printed collections, [[https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/12539 The Aphorisms of Kherishdar]], written from the point of view of [[EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep The Calligrapher]], which concentrates (mostly) on the positives of the Ai-Naidar civilization, while [[https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/49547 The Admonishments of Kherishdar]] focuses on the criminals and malcontents, who all give their impressions of Shame, the embodiment of justice in Ai-Naidar society and charged personally by TheEmperor with Correcting individual behavior so it comes in line with Society.
Though Kherishadar is generally portrayed in a positive manner, it's definitely a BlueAndOrangeMorality, with the emphasis on Society over Individual striking a sometimes disturbing chord. What it mostly is, however, is logical but ''different'' from human cultures.
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* ArcWords: "Thank you for the grace of my Correction."
* AuthorAppeal: Hogarth loves long hair that goes "Fwoosh!" To the point that the Ai-Naidar have a ''specific word'' for the effect.
* BabiesEverAfter: Bitterly subverted when one Noble goes into deep depression after [[spoiler: his cheerful suggestion that one couple should have children at their marriage ceremony leads to the wife dying in childbirth and the husband wasting away shortly thereafter.]] Shame literally has to [[ArmorPiercingSlap knock some sense into him.]]
* BigGood: The Emperor, who also functions as a LivingGod.
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: As noted above.
* BreakingTheFourthWall: A mild example can be found in Hogarth's LiveJournal, where The Calligrapher and Shame sometimes appear in Hogarth's world for a moment to help her understand the definition of a particular Ai-Naidar word or aspect their culture.
* ColdBloodedTorture: Though it's certainly part of Shame's arsenal, Corrections generally don't involve this. The more usual method involves...
* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: ...finding a way of pointing out to the individual the damage they're doing to others or themselves. Such as having someone who wants to stop harming themselves wear bandages signed by their friends and family.
* EpiphanyTherapy: Shame's default method of Correcting individuals. The Calligrapher often manages the same thing through providing a notably appropriate aphorism.
* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: While The Calligrapher and Shame do have names that are mentioned in their stories, they're easy to miss until ''Black Blossom''. Given the very stratified nature of Ai-Naidar society, almost everyone goes by their title first, using their name only among close associates.
* ExaltedTorturer: Averted. Kor/Shame takes pleasure in easing people back onto the path of right thinking, but not in engaging in physical harm.
* GoodIsNotNice: That's Shame in a nutshell.
* HeroicBSOD: Shame experiences this in ''Black Blossom'' when he realizes he and the noble he was assigned to investigate are NotSoDifferent.
* LonersAreFreaks: Goes double among the AI-Naidar, given its emphasis on community and family.
* [[NotUsingTheZWord Not Using the H Word]]: Cloaked aliens who are turn out to be humans are seen several times in the stories, but are never referred to by their species name, but the more general term ''Aunera''. They're generally portrayed as either ignorant or outright disruptive to the smoothly running Ai-Naidar society.
* PurpleProse: Well, definitely shaded lavender with an occasional side order of SesquipedalianLoquaciousness. The Calligrapher is frequently guilty of this, given it's part of his job, but many other characters indulge in it to emphase the Ai-Naidar's formalized styles of speech.
* QuestionableConsent: It's not a very good idea to take advantage of your subordinates in this world. It attracts Shame's attention.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: The default nature of the Noble Caste. When they don't live up to it, that's when the Emperor [[OhCrap calls Shame in.]]
* RousseauWasRight: Pretty much the setting default. While there are (very rare) monsters in the Ai-Naidar world, the assumption is most people just need a gentle nudge back on the path when they end up doing wrong.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething
* SubordinateExcuse: In one story, the Calligrapher encounters a servant whose artistic skill is equal to his own, but who chooses not to pursue it to stay close to her lady.
* TheChainsOfCommanding: Much of The Calligrapher and Shame's work involves reinforcing noble caste leaders who become stressed as they try to balance the needs of the people under them with the demands of society in general.
* TheEmperor: A near divine being who despite the nominally science-fictional nature of the setting is said to be the reincarnation of the previous Emperors.
* TooKinkyToTorture: As part of his training to take the post of Shame, Kor must experience specific tortures under the hand of the Emperor before being permitted to use them on anyone else. It's several ''weeks'' before he finally breaks down.
* [[WhatMeasureIsANonHuman What Measure is a Human?]]: "People" in the Ai-Naidar language refers strictly to their own species and culture. ''Aunera'' refers to anything not Ai-Naidar, on the level of animals or ''furniture''.
* WhipItGood: A common tool for Correction, with truly heinous offences followed by being "Bathed in wine" (ie: Alcohol poured immediately onto the open wounds.)
* WhoWatchesTheWatchmen: How does the Emperor make sure he himself doesn't abuse his own power? He assigns a casteless servant to the post of The Exception, [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech whose job it is to tell him]] when his actions might be harmful to his people.
--->'''The Aphorisms of Kherishdar, Introduction'''
-->I am the altar upon which society sacrifices its murderers, its thieves, its wayward spirits. I am their Correction... or their destruction. I serve Shame. Without me, there is no Civilization.
--->'''The Admonishments of Kherisdar, Introduction'''
A series of short stories and one on-going serialized web novel, all written by [[Creator/MCAHogarth M.C.A. Hogarth]], ''Kherishdar'' is a five planet alien empire whose people, the Ai-Naidar, are tall, feline aliens which have an insular, caste based society that emphasizes the good of the community over the individual. Hogarth explores the implications of this in a series of short "incense" stories, starting with the definition of a single word or concept, which leads into an illustration of a single aspect of life among the Ai-Naidar. These stories may be found at her website and two printed collections, [[https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/12539 The Aphorisms of Kherishdar]], written from the point of view of [[EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep The Calligrapher]], which concentrates (mostly) on the positives of the Ai-Naidar civilization, while [[https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/49547 The Admonishments of Kherishdar]] focuses on the criminals and malcontents, who all give their impressions of Shame, the embodiment of justice in Ai-Naidar society and charged personally by TheEmperor with Correcting individual behavior so it comes in line with Society.
Though Kherishadar is generally portrayed in a positive manner, it's definitely a BlueAndOrangeMorality, with the emphasis on Society over Individual striking a sometimes disturbing chord. What it mostly is, however, is logical but ''different'' from human cultures.
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!!These stories provide examples of:
* ArcWords: "Thank you for the grace of my Correction."
* AuthorAppeal: Hogarth loves long hair that goes "Fwoosh!" To the point that the Ai-Naidar have a ''specific word'' for the effect.
* BabiesEverAfter: Bitterly subverted when one Noble goes into deep depression after [[spoiler: his cheerful suggestion that one couple should have children at their marriage ceremony leads to the wife dying in childbirth and the husband wasting away shortly thereafter.]] Shame literally has to [[ArmorPiercingSlap knock some sense into him.]]
* BigGood: The Emperor, who also functions as a LivingGod.
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: As noted above.
* BreakingTheFourthWall: A mild example can be found in Hogarth's LiveJournal, where The Calligrapher and Shame sometimes appear in Hogarth's world for a moment to help her understand the definition of a particular Ai-Naidar word or aspect their culture.
* ColdBloodedTorture: Though it's certainly part of Shame's arsenal, Corrections generally don't involve this. The more usual method involves...
* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: ...finding a way of pointing out to the individual the damage they're doing to others or themselves. Such as having someone who wants to stop harming themselves wear bandages signed by their friends and family.
* EpiphanyTherapy: Shame's default method of Correcting individuals. The Calligrapher often manages the same thing through providing a notably appropriate aphorism.
* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: While The Calligrapher and Shame do have names that are mentioned in their stories, they're easy to miss until ''Black Blossom''. Given the very stratified nature of Ai-Naidar society, almost everyone goes by their title first, using their name only among close associates.
* ExaltedTorturer: Averted. Kor/Shame takes pleasure in easing people back onto the path of right thinking, but not in engaging in physical harm.
* GoodIsNotNice: That's Shame in a nutshell.
* HeroicBSOD: Shame experiences this in ''Black Blossom'' when he realizes he and the noble he was assigned to investigate are NotSoDifferent.
* LonersAreFreaks: Goes double among the AI-Naidar, given its emphasis on community and family.
* [[NotUsingTheZWord Not Using the H Word]]: Cloaked aliens who are turn out to be humans are seen several times in the stories, but are never referred to by their species name, but the more general term ''Aunera''. They're generally portrayed as either ignorant or outright disruptive to the smoothly running Ai-Naidar society.
* PurpleProse: Well, definitely shaded lavender with an occasional side order of SesquipedalianLoquaciousness. The Calligrapher is frequently guilty of this, given it's part of his job, but many other characters indulge in it to emphase the Ai-Naidar's formalized styles of speech.
* QuestionableConsent: It's not a very good idea to take advantage of your subordinates in this world. It attracts Shame's attention.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: The default nature of the Noble Caste. When they don't live up to it, that's when the Emperor [[OhCrap calls Shame in.]]
* RousseauWasRight: Pretty much the setting default. While there are (very rare) monsters in the Ai-Naidar world, the assumption is most people just need a gentle nudge back on the path when they end up doing wrong.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething
* SubordinateExcuse: In one story, the Calligrapher encounters a servant whose artistic skill is equal to his own, but who chooses not to pursue it to stay close to her lady.
* TheChainsOfCommanding: Much of The Calligrapher and Shame's work involves reinforcing noble caste leaders who become stressed as they try to balance the needs of the people under them with the demands of society in general.
* TheEmperor: A near divine being who despite the nominally science-fictional nature of the setting is said to be the reincarnation of the previous Emperors.
* TooKinkyToTorture: As part of his training to take the post of Shame, Kor must experience specific tortures under the hand of the Emperor before being permitted to use them on anyone else. It's several ''weeks'' before he finally breaks down.
* [[WhatMeasureIsANonHuman What Measure is a Human?]]: "People" in the Ai-Naidar language refers strictly to their own species and culture. ''Aunera'' refers to anything not Ai-Naidar, on the level of animals or ''furniture''.
* WhipItGood: A common tool for Correction, with truly heinous offences followed by being "Bathed in wine" (ie: Alcohol poured immediately onto the open wounds.)
* WhoWatchesTheWatchmen: How does the Emperor make sure he himself doesn't abuse his own power? He assigns a casteless servant to the post of The Exception, [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech whose job it is to tell him]] when his actions might be harmful to his people.
