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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler:Jonah blows up himself and six Special Ops Elites along with any other surviving Covenant for a mile.]]
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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler:Jonah blows up himself and six Special Ops Silent Shadow Elites along with any other surviving Covenant for a mile.]]
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-->It's okay... because... '''[[DyingAsYourself I-I won't come ba-ack...]]'''
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* FromBadToWorse: It ''starts'' with an extremely bloodied and dying man falling out of an escape pod... [[spoiler:which, harsh though it sounds, is a '''far more merciful fate''' than what happens to the later poor, unsuspecting souls yet to discover the [[TheDreaded nightmarish-terror]] that awaits them.]]
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* FromBadToWorse: It ''starts'' with an extremely bloodied and dying man falling out of an escape pod... [[spoiler:which, harsh though it sounds, is a '''far more merciful fate''' than what happens to the later poor, unsuspecting souls yet to discover the [[TheDreaded nightmarish-terror]] that awaits them.them...]]
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* FromBadToWorse: It ''starts'' with an extremely bloodied and dying man falling out of an escape pod...
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* FromBadToWorse: It ''starts'' with an extremely bloodied and dying man falling out of an escape pod... [[spoiler:which, harsh though it sounds, is a '''far more merciful fate''' than what happens to the later poor, unsuspecting souls yet to discover the [[TheDreaded nightmarish-terror]] that awaits them.]]
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* LongTitle: The full title of the book is ''Halo: Evolutions - Essential Tales of the Halo Universe''.
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** The story's author, Tobias Buckell, [[http://goingrampant.blogspot.com/2010/03/examination-of-female-characters-part-3.html admitted to doing this unintentionally]], but notes that [[KillEmAll the plot kills almost every named character in the story]].
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** The story's author, Tobias Buckell, [[http://goingrampant.blogspot.com/2010/03/examination-of-female-characters-part-3.html admitted to doing this unintentionally]], but notes that [[KillEmAll the plot kills almost every named character in the story]].story.
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* KillEmAll: Pretty much the entire named cast dies. The only survivor is the Rookie, [[SavedByCanon since he has to appear in]] ''Halo 3: ODST''.
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* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:''The Mona Lisa'' and ''Headhunters'']] end this way.
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* OhCrap: Jonah gets this when [[spoiler: Roland gets stabbed by a cloaked Elite, only to find five more, and realizes they planned this trap all along.]]
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* OhCrap: Jonah gets this when [[spoiler: Roland gets stabbed by a cloaked Elite, only to find five more, and realizes they planned this trap all along. And these are no ordinary Spec Ops Elites either, they're a squad of the '''extremely deadly''' [[RedBaron Silent Shadow]] group.]]
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-->'''Jonah:''' Says the alien shit-heel who invented active-camo.
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-->'''Jonah:''' Says the alien shit-heel who invented active-camo.[[InvisibilityCloak active-camo]].
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* BuffySpeak / MametSpeak: Jonah and Roland's banter is full of this, unusually for Spartans. They call Brutes and Elites "apes and alligators", and pepper their speech with plenty of swears.
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* BuffySpeak / MametSpeak: Jonah and Roland's banter is full of this, unusually for Spartans. They call Brutes and Elites "apes and alligators", alligators" ("gators" is the shortened term they use), and pepper their speech with plenty of swears.
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* TokenEvilTeammate: Grayer than most examples, but Soren is the Spartan with the most troubling backstory, compared to trainees who grew up in comfort like John-117. [[spoiler:He's also the only known Spartan to defect to the Insurrection.]]
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* TokenEvilTeammate: Grayer than most examples, but Soren is the Spartan with the most troubling backstory, compared to trainees who grew up in comfort like John-117. [[spoiler:He's also the only known Spartan Spartan-II to defect to the Insurrection.]]
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It received a StealthSequel in [[spoiler:''AudioPlay/HaloInfiniteMemoryAgent'', which once again features Parisa in an encounter with the Chief]].
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* NotSoDifferent: Gravemind tells Cortana that they are both alike by how they amassing information. [[ShutUpHannibal Cortana's response is that she takes after her mother]].
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: Gravemind tells Cortana that they are both alike by how they amassing information. [[ShutUpHannibal Cortana's response is that she takes after her mother]].
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* OhCrap: Black-Two gets one when she realizes that [[spoiler: the drones the Covenant had imprisoned were insane convicts, and she'd just helped freed them en-masse. Her realization complimented by a freakin' ''Hunter'' hightailing it.]]
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* OhCrap: Black-Two gets one when she realizes that [[spoiler: the drones the Covenant had imprisoned were insane convicts, and she'd just helped freed free them en-masse. Her realization complimented by a freakin' ''Hunter'' hightailing it.]]
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* BuryYourGays: [[spoiler:Alison and Felicia are both gay, and the former gets taken out by an Insurrectionist bomb, and while the latter is killed in a MexicanStandoff by rogue ODST's.]]
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* BuryYourGays: [[spoiler:Alison and Felicia are both gay, and the former gets taken out by an Insurrectionist bomb, and while the latter is killed in a MexicanStandoff by rogue ODST's.]]
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* BuryYourGays: [[spoiler:Alison gets taken out by an Insurrectionist bomb, and Felicia is killed by some rogue ODST's.]]
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* BuryYourGays: [[spoiler:Alison and Felicia are both gay, and the former gets taken out by an Insurrectionist bomb, and Felicia while the latter is killed in a MexicanStandoff by some rogue ODST's.]]
