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*** A number of the events of the novel were lifted straight from ''VideoGame/XWing'', most notably the destruction of [[spoiler:Despayre]] and the planting of a bomb on one of the Star Destroyers guarding the construction site.

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*** A number of the events of the novel were lifted straight from ''VideoGame/XWing'', most notably the destruction of [[spoiler:Despayre]] and the planting of a bomb on one of the Star Destroyers guarding the construction site.[[note]]Though it should be noted that [[spoiler:on the former, in ''X-Wing'' it took only one shot to fully destroy it, whereas in ''Death Star'' it took three]]; and the Star Destroyer blown up in the game had nothing to do with the Death Star's construction.[[/note]]
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Interestingly, there is no overall villain of the book. The Rebellion is certainly out there, weighing on people's minds, but aside from the minor role that Leia Organa plays, none of them are named or given much notoriety, much less become a viewpoint character. Some characters oppose each other--Motti does not like Vader, for instance--but until the end most of them are at least somewhat civil with each other. They're all more or less on the same side, after all.

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Interestingly, there is no overall single villain of the book.book, except perhaps TheEmpire itself as a system of government. The Rebellion is certainly out there, weighing on people's minds, but aside from the minor role that Leia Organa plays, none of them are named or given much notoriety, much less become a viewpoint character. Some characters oppose each other--Motti does not like Vader, for instance--but until the end most of them are at least somewhat civil with each other. They're all more or less on the same side, after all.
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''Death Star''[[note]][[http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Death_Star_%28novel%29 Wookieepedia]][[/note]] is a novel in the Franchise/StarWarsLegends continuity, written by Michael Reaves and Creator/StevePerry and published in 2007. Perry also wrote ''Literature/ShadowsOfTheEmpire''. Reaves wrote a few episodes of the old ''WesternAnimation/{{Droids}}'' and ''WesternAnimation/{{Ewoks}}'' television shows, as well as ''Literature/DarthMaulShadowHunter'' and the ''Literature/CoruscantNights'' trilogy. Prior to ''Death Star'', the two authors worked together to write the ''[=MedStar=]'' books, ''Battle Surgeons'' and ''Jedi Healer''. They re-use characters and details from their previous works with some regularity.

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''Death Star''[[note]][[http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Death_Star_%28novel%29 Wookieepedia]][[/note]] is a novel in the Franchise/StarWarsLegends continuity, written by Michael Reaves and Creator/StevePerry and published in 2007. Perry also wrote ''Literature/ShadowsOfTheEmpire''. Reaves wrote a few episodes of the old ''WesternAnimation/{{Droids}}'' and ''WesternAnimation/{{Ewoks}}'' television shows, as well as ''Literature/DarthMaulShadowHunter'' and the ''Literature/CoruscantNights'' trilogy. Prior to ''Death Star'', the two authors worked together to write the ''[=MedStar=]'' ''Literature/{{MedStar|Duology}}'' books, ''Battle Surgeons'' and ''Jedi Healer''. They re-use characters and details from their previous works with some regularity.
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* {{Conscription}}: Uli was conscripted back during the Clone Wars and has had his term of service extended indefinitely, much to his dismay. Teela is also pressed into service, though she's so happy to be off Despayre and in a relatively safe environment actually getting to work as an architect again that she mainly manages not to be bothered by it until things come crashing down.
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* ClosetSublet: While the residential areas of the Death Star are under construction, architech Teela is presented with a serious problem: the space allotted for personal quarters is only technically adequate given the number of people expected to require them. There's only space to set up not even capsule hotels, just tiny spaces that people wouldn't even be able to sit up in. This is not going to work, she exclaims, but she's forced to try to sort it out and apparently does, though the readers aren't shown just how.
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* EvilIsPetty: To maintain operational security, most of the people serving or working on the Death Star aren't permitted to leave it for years, but it's such a large installation that plenty of space and money is available to provide off duty leisure services. Instead of just hiring people to staff those, some Imperial or another decided to burn down a bunch of functioning bars and so on on Coruscant and offer jobs to their newly unemployed owners and workers.
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* DodgeByBraking: [[spoiler:How the escapees manage to survive their shuttle being blown away by Darth Vader. It was a pure desperation move on Vil Dance's part, and as a result Vader DidntSeeThatComing and barely missed them. And then before Vader could pull back around to take another shot at them, his attention was drawn away by a certain Rebel pilot with a strong presence in the Force.]]

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* CriticalHesitationBlunder: Tenn Graneet is mid-breakdown over Yavin, feeling sick and hopeless and knowing that even if he refuses, they'll have another gunner in his chair within a minute to push the button and annihilate another inhabited world, so he's stalling. Here his "Stand by..." comes when the superlaser is well and truly ready, and the crew with him notices. Honestly, he would have been very relieved to know that Luke Skywalker had launched torpedos and that his few seconds of stalling actually came to something.



* FelonyMisdemeanor: Dr. Uli ends up the target of a criminal probe when he requests medical information on midi-chlorians while treating Nova Stihl for mysterious injuries after Alderaan is blown up, after noticing the stormtrooper has a higher-than-normal number of them. It's an act of pure medical desperation that could end up getting doctor and patient both executed. [[spoiler:Nothing comes of it because Uli escapes with the other defectors during the Battle of Yavin, before the investigation can conclude, and Nova dies covering their escape.]]

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* FelonyMisdemeanor: Dr. Uli ends up the target of a criminal probe when he requests medical information on midi-chlorians while treating Nova Stihl for mysterious injuries after Alderaan is blown up, weird dreams, after noticing the stormtrooper has a higher-than-normal number of them. It's an act of pure medical desperation that could end up getting doctor and patient both executed. [[spoiler:Nothing comes of it because Uli escapes with the other defectors during the Battle of Yavin, before the investigation can conclude, and Nova dies covering their escape. Uli's probably not going to be able to practice medicine in Imperial space ever again but that'd be the case already, given that he defected.]]



* JustFollowingOrders: Averted. All the Imperial characters with a talking part are either [[ColonelKilgore ruthless tyrants]] or morally sensitive people who [[DefectorFromDecadence join the Rebels]] after they see the Death Star in action.

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* JustFollowingOrders: Averted. All Averted by all the Imperial characters with a talking part in the dramatis personae, who are either [[ColonelKilgore ruthless tyrants]] or morally sensitive people who [[DefectorFromDecadence join the Rebels]] after they see the Death Star in action.action. Less important characters sometimes meet this trope better.
* JustInTime: At the climax of the book, [[spoiler: Uli is arrested for "illegal medical research" but as he's being led away the Rebels start their attack. As they're right under the trench at the time, there are local fluctuations in power and a small explosion in the hall that separates Uli from the officers, letting him escape. Not long after, the stolen medical shuttle he and his surviving friends escape in has a close encounter with Darth Vader before he veers off after Luke Skywalker. Immediately after ''that'' someone on the Death Star gets a tractor beam on the shuttle and starts to reel them back. Just as the shuttle's occupants decide to [[BetterToDieThanBeKilled overload their engines]], the Death Star blows up, and they're ''just'' out of range where that would have killed them too.]]



* MenAreTheExpendableGender: Thirteen characters in the dramatis personae (ten male, three female). [[spoiler:Three males and three females]] survive. Admittedly, some characters are DoomedByCanon--or saved by it in the case of Darth Vader and Admiral Daala--but even among the 'new' characters the male death rate is [[spoiler: 60%]].

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* MenAreTheExpendableGender: Thirteen characters in the dramatis personae (ten male, three female). [[spoiler:Three [[spoiler:Four males and three females]] survive. Admittedly, some characters are DoomedByCanon--or saved by it in the case of Darth Vader and Admiral Daala--but even among the 'new' characters the male death rate is [[spoiler: 60%]].
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** After her cantina on Coruscant is burned down in suspicious circumstances--she assumes insurance fraud but it's very heavily implied to be the work of Imperials--Memah is given the opportunity to start a new one on a "military installation" and accepts the job, thinking that it's probably going to be safer. On approach to the half-built Death Star she remembers this thought and says the trope name to herself--surely something this big is going to be safe from attack. It's a ForegoneConclusion that her new bar will be destroyed too, along with the rest of the Death Star, but by then Memah does not mind in the least.

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** After her cantina on Coruscant is burned down in suspicious circumstances--she assumes insurance fraud InsuranceFraud but it's very heavily implied to be the work of Imperials--Memah is given the opportunity to start a new one on a "military installation" and accepts the job, thinking that it's probably going to be safer. On approach to the half-built Death Star she remembers this thought and says the trope name to herself--surely something this big is going to be safe from attack. It's a ForegoneConclusion that her new bar will be destroyed too, along with the rest of the Death Star, but by then Memah does not mind in the least.
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** After the destruction of Alderaan, Tenn Graneet ruefully compares himself to famous mass-murderers, including [[Film/RevengeOfTheSith General Grievous]] and [[Literature/TalesFromTheMosEisleyCantina the Butcher of Montellian Serat]]. None of ''them'' ever killed over a billion people with one pull of a lever.

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** After the destruction of Alderaan, Tenn Graneet ruefully compares himself to famous mass-murderers, including [[Film/RevengeOfTheSith General Grievous]] and Grievous]], [[Literature/TalesFromTheMosEisleyCantina the Butcher of Montellian Serat]].Serat]], and [[Magazine/StarWarsInsider Grand Admiral Il-Raz]]. None of ''them'' ever killed over a billion people with one pull of a lever.
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** Atour, after Despayre, becomes depressed and unsettled and thinks "Build a blaster that could destroy a planet, and some bigger fool would build one that could extinguish a star. It would go on, insanity without end, because there's always a bigger blaster." The ''Literature/JediAcademyTrilogy'' does in fact involve a superweapon that forces suns to go nova, and parts of the StarWarsLegends canon ''are'' infamous for superweapon escalation.

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** Atour, after Despayre, becomes depressed and unsettled and thinks "Build a blaster that could destroy a planet, and some bigger fool would build one that could extinguish a star. It would go on, insanity without end, because there's always a bigger blaster." The ''Literature/JediAcademyTrilogy'' does in fact involve a superweapon that forces suns to go nova, and parts of the StarWarsLegends Franchise/StarWarsLegends canon ''are'' infamous for superweapon escalation.
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** Atour, after Despayre, becomes depressed and unsettled and thinks "Build a blaster that could destroy a planet, and some bigger fool would build one that could extinguish a star. It would go on, insanity without end, because there's always a bigger blaster." The ''Literature/JediAcademyTrilogy'' does in fact involve a superweapon that forces suns to go nova, and parts of the StarWarsLegends canon ''are'' infamous for superweapon escalation.
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* AnnoyingPatient: Several of Uli's patients clearly don't want to be there, an ill Wookiee and a healthy Memah included. Uli himself also doesn't want to be there and is pretty burned out. He takes the Wookiee's sarcasm as a positive, a sign of a will to live, and finds Memah's complaint that her examination is "two hours of my life I'll never get back" funny.

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* AnnoyingPatient: Several of Uli's patients clearly don't want to be there, an ill Wookiee and a healthy Memah included. Uli himself also doesn't want to be there and is pretty burned out. He takes the Wookiee's sarcasm as a positive, a sign of a will to live, and finds Memah's complaint that her examination is "two hours of my life I'll never get back" funny. Later he tends to Leia Organa after she's captured and tortured and is impressed by her continued defiance and ability to snark while in considerable pain. The only thing he objects to is her calling him an Imperial officer, which just opens him up to her talking about the necessity of resisting evil and leaves him considerably closer to a HeelFaceTurn.
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* MoralEventHorizon: InUniverse. Tenn Graneet, the main Death Star gunner, sees his involvement in the destruction of Alderaan as this, and he realizes that the rest of the Galaxy will also see it like that.

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* MoralEventHorizon: InUniverse. InUniverse, the destruction of Alderaan drives most of the cast into turning on the Empire. Tenn Graneet, the main Death Star gunner, sees his involvement in gunner who pulled the destruction of Alderaan as this, trigger, is sickened and he ashamed and realizes that the rest of the Galaxy will also see it like that.him as having crossed this.



* NeutralNoLonger: Most of the cast to some extent, but especially the historian. Atour's long life has been spent politically neutral, until the horror of Alderaan jars him into opposition. He immediately goes to work researching blueprints looking for weak points, and later devises a plan to allow himself and some other like-minded characters to desert the Death Star.

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* NeutralNoLonger: Most Much of the cast starts out vaguely uneasy about the Empire to some extent, but especially they shrug and [[BigBrotherIsEmployingYou have to get by somehow]]. Anyone with a functioning conscience finds they can't ignore it anymore after the destruction of Alderaan, and while most of these characters had had little to no involvement with each other before then, they find themselves [[DrowningMySorrows in a cantina]] sharing a moral imperative to, even if they can't stop the Imperial machine, at least ''not help it'' anymore. Special mention goes to the historian. Atour's long life has been spent politically neutral, until the horror of Alderaan jars but this event sees him into opposition. He immediately goes going to work researching blueprints looking for weak points, and later points. Later he devises a plan to allow himself and some other the like-minded characters people he'd met in the cantina to desert find a way off the Death Star.



* ResignationsNotAccepted: Doctor Kornell "Uli" Divini has been in Imperial service since before Palpatine's New Order, due to the Imperial Military Stop Loss Order, or IMSLO. He's too valuable to the war effort to have any say in when he gets discharged.

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* ResignationsNotAccepted: Doctor Kornell "Uli" Divini has been in Imperial service since before Palpatine's New Order, due to the Imperial Military Stop Loss Order, or IMSLO. He's too valuable to the war effort to have any say in when he gets discharged. Resentment over this has him hating the Empire more than any of the rest of the cast and often while plying his trade he thinks that a patient is going back to being worked to death, or committing atrocities. As he tells Leia, though, his options are to serve or be shot.



* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: A sort of odd example. Uli often thinks back to the young Jedi he knew twenty years ago during the Clone Wars, who died in Order 66, Barris Offee. He's not sure if he loved her, but her death left him badly shaken, and he tries not to think of her too often. When Princess Leia is taken on board the Death Star and tortured, he's summoned to tend to her and is struck by the various ways in which she's like Barris. Later his friends refer to Leia as Uli's girlfriend, and he tiredly says the trope name.

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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: A sort of odd example. Uli often thinks back to the young Jedi he knew twenty years ago during the Clone Wars, who died in Order 66, Barris Offee. He's not sure if he loved her, but her death left him badly shaken, and he tries not to think of her too often. often but she never seems to be far from his thoughts. When Princess Leia is taken on board the Death Star and tortured, he's summoned to tend to her and is struck by the various ways in which she's like her moral conviction, comparing her to Barris. Later his friends refer to Leia as Uli's girlfriend, and he tiredly says the trope name.
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* DelayedDiagnosis: Uli's asked if he can help with Nova's intense and terrible dreams but scans and an examination prove that the only physical abnormality he has is a higher than average midichlorian count. Data on midichlorians is heavily restricted under the Empire but Uli makes a request anyway... and gets in trouble for it later, at the exact worst moment.

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* DelayedDiagnosis: Uli's asked if he can help with Nova's intense and terrible dreams but scans and an examination prove that the only physical abnormality he has is a higher than average midichlorian count. Data on midichlorians Most midichlorian research was performed by Jedi and related organizations and now that information is heavily restricted under the Empire but Uli Uli, being a good doctor who looks into all avenues, makes a request for more information anyway... and gets in trouble for it later, at the exact worst moment.

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* AnnoyingPatient: Several of Uli's patients clearly don't want to be there, an ill Wookie and a healthy Memah included. Uli himself also doesn't want to be there and is pretty burned out. He takes the Wookie's sarcasm as a positive, a sign of a will to live, and finds Memah's complaint that her examination is "two hours of my life I'll never get back" funny.

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* AnnoyingPatient: Several of Uli's patients clearly don't want to be there, an ill Wookie Wookiee and a healthy Memah included. Uli himself also doesn't want to be there and is pretty burned out. He takes the Wookie's Wookiee's sarcasm as a positive, a sign of a will to live, and finds Memah's complaint that her examination is "two hours of my life I'll never get back" funny.



* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Tenn Graneet calls it by name.

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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor:
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** After her cantina on Coruscant is burned down in suspicious circumstances - she assumes insurance fraud but it's very heavily implied to be the work of Imperials - Memah is given the opportunity to start a new one on a "military installation" and accepts the job, thinking that it's probably going to be safer. On approach to the half-built Death Star she remembers this thought and says the trope name to herself - surely something this big is going to be safe from attack. It's a ForegoneConclusion that her new bar will be destroyed too, along with the rest of the Death Star, but by then Memah does not mind in the least.

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** After her cantina on Coruscant is burned down in suspicious circumstances - she circumstances--she assumes insurance fraud but it's very heavily implied to be the work of Imperials - Memah Imperials--Memah is given the opportunity to start a new one on a "military installation" and accepts the job, thinking that it's probably going to be safer. On approach to the half-built Death Star she remembers this thought and says the trope name to herself - surely herself--surely something this big is going to be safe from attack. It's a ForegoneConclusion that her new bar will be destroyed too, along with the rest of the Death Star, but by then Memah does not mind in the least.



* BigBrotherIsEmployingYou: Some of the cast is Imperial military, but plenty of the rest are just trying to keep themselves fed and clothed and range from indifferent to the Empire to disliking it but not seeing better options. Teela was sentenced to life on Despayre for backing a political candidate who the Empire didn't like, and facing the choice between continuing to starve and risk violence on the penal colony or to use her architecture skills to work on the Death Star in much more favorable conditions, she chose the latter. Living on the station as it's being constructed isn't bad but several characters feel twinges of conscience, which intensify dramatically as it becomes operational.

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* BigBrotherIsEmployingYou: Some of the cast is Imperial military, but plenty of the rest are just trying to keep themselves fed and clothed clothed, and range from indifferent to the Empire to disliking it but not seeing better options. Teela was sentenced to life on Despayre for backing a political candidate who whom the Empire didn't like, and facing the choice between continuing to starve and risk violence on the penal colony colony, or to use using her architecture skills to work on the Death Star in much more favorable conditions, she chose the latter. Living on the station as it's being constructed isn't bad bad, but several characters feel twinges of conscience, which intensify dramatically as it becomes operational.



* HeroOfAnotherStory: Leia really only appears a few times, and most of that is rendering events of A New Hope from Vader or Tarkin's perspective, but she makes a very strong impression on Uli Divini, whose cynical, defeatist neutrality is [[NeutralNoLonger rattled and overturned]] in two short conversations with her. Her defiance as a captured daughter of Alderaan, of course, also results in her homeworld being chosen for mundicide, which horrifies every character with a functioning conscience.

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* HeroOfAnotherStory: Leia really only appears a few times, and most of that is rendering events of A New Hope ''Film/ANewHope'' from Vader or Tarkin's perspective, but she makes a very strong impression on Uli Divini, whose cynical, defeatist neutrality is [[NeutralNoLonger rattled and overturned]] in two short conversations with her. Her defiance as a captured daughter of Alderaan, of course, also results in her homeworld being chosen for mundicide, which horrifies every character with a functioning conscience.



** A couple of surgeon specific ones, "When the only tool you have is a knife, everything looks like a steak" and "You cut it, you take care of it."

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--> "That's the government - everything and everyone gets shunted through the Department of Redundancy Department."

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* BigBrotherIsEmployingYou: Some of the cast is Imperial military, but plenty of the rest are just trying to keep themselves fed and clothed and range from indifferent to the Empire to disliking it but not seeing better options. Teela was sentenced to life on Despayre for backing a political candidate who the Empire didn't like, and facing the choice between continuing to starve and risk violence on the penal colony or to use her architecture skills to work on the Death Star in much more favorable conditions, she chose the latter. Living on the station as it's being constructed isn't bad but several characters feel twinges of conscience, which intensify dramatically as it becomes operational.


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* DelayedDiagnosis: Uli's asked if he can help with Nova's intense and terrible dreams but scans and an examination prove that the only physical abnormality he has is a higher than average midichlorian count. Data on midichlorians is heavily restricted under the Empire but Uli makes a request anyway... and gets in trouble for it later, at the exact worst moment.

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* ShootTheBuilder: Palpatine and his minions do this on a ''planetary'' scale. Grand Moff Tarkin uses convict laborers from the prison planet [[MeaningfulName Despayre]] for the final stage of the Death Star's construction. Then he blows up the entire planet to test the space station's super laser. The only survivors are a few engineers deemed valuable enough to spare for additional work and a man who stows away on a supply vessel returning to the Death Star.

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* ShootTheBuilder: Palpatine and his minions do this on a ''planetary'' scale. Grand Moff Tarkin uses convict laborers from the prison planet [[MeaningfulName Despayre]] for the final stage of the Death Star's construction. Then he blows up the entire planet to test the space station's super laser. The only survivors are already on board, a few engineers deemed valuable enough to spare for additional work and a man who stows away on a supply vessel returning to the Death Star.


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* TyphoidMary: Memah is ordered to get a medical examination several days after arriving on the Death Star. Annoyed, she says that if she was a [[HoldYourHippogriffs Sangi Fever Sal]] she could have infected hundreds by now, and anyway she got an exam before departing for the station in the first place. She still has to get checked over and complains about it.
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--> There was an old proverb his grandfather had taught him when he'd been a boy: ''Take care what you wish for, Tenn--you might get it.''\\

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* HyperspaceIsAScaryPlace: Memah, not familiar with hyperspace, tries watching it on her way to her new assignment and gives herself a headache and nausea. Staring out into it for too long is said to give people "hyper-rapture", so by default the view from ship windows is opaqued. Not when Vader's flying, though, as he likes to watch it.
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** A couple of surgeon specific ones, "When the only tool you have is a knife, everything looks like a steak" and "You cut it, you take care of it."
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* HeroOfAnotherStory: Leia really only appears a few times, and most of that is rendering events of A New Hope from Vader or Tarkin's perspective, but she makes a very strong impression on Uli Divini, whose cynical, defeatist neutrality is [[NeutralNoLonger rattled and overturned]] in two short conversations with her. Her defiance as a captured daughter of Alderaan, of course, also results in her homeworld being chosen for mundicide, which horrifies every character with a functioning conscience.
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* RedBaron: Col. Vindoo "The Shooter" Barvel, hero of the Clone Wars and one of the Empire's best pilots. Vil saw Vader [[ImprobablePilotingSkills easily shoot him down]] in training once.

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* RedBaron: Col. Vindoo "The Shooter" Barvel, hero of the Clone Wars and one of the Empire's best pilots. Vil saw Vader [[TheWorfEffect easily]] [[ImprobablePilotingSkills easily shoot him down]] in training once.
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* DrowningMySorrows: After Alderaan is destroyed, two Alderaanian contractors are seen in Memah's bar, mostly just staring into space. When a trooper loudly voices his opinion that the planet's death was a good thing, one of them, half the trooper's size, gets up and [[TalkToTheFist decks him to the floor]]. Memah not only doesn't kick the Alderaanians out, she puts their tab on the house.

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* DrowningMySorrows: After Alderaan is destroyed, two Alderaanian contractors are seen in Memah's bar, mostly just staring into space. When a an Imperial trooper loudly voices his opinion that the planet's death was a good thing, one of them, half the trooper's size, gets up and [[TalkToTheFist decks puts him to on the floor]]. Memah not only doesn't kick Memah's bouncer Rodo tells the trooper and his buddies to get lost on their own or with his "help." Rodo then tells the Alderaanians out, she how sorry he is for their loss, puts their tab on the house.house, and tells them if anyone else says something so insensitive to let him handle it because he can hit a lot harder than they could.
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* JediMindTrick: A young Imperial officer, having heard of (or perhaps witnessed) how [[YouHaveFailedMe choke happy]] Darth Vader can be, is absolutely terrified to deliver a report to Vader. While in most cases Vader doesn't mind if people are extremely afraid of him, at times the amount of fear he causes interferes with efficiency. Vader uses a mind trick to get the officer to calm down enough to deliver his report.

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* JediMindTrick: A young Imperial officer, having heard of (or perhaps witnessed) how [[YouHaveFailedMe choke happy]] Darth Vader can be, is absolutely terrified to deliver a report to Vader. While in most cases Vader doesn't mind if people are extremely afraid of him, at times Vader finds the amount of fear he causes interferes with efficiency. Vader uses a Jedi mind trick to get the officer to calm down enough to deliver his report.report. He later thinks that at least the weak minded fool is no longer shaking in his boots after the mind trick.
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* JediMindTrick: A young Imperial officer, having heard of or perhaps having witnessed how [[YouHaveFailedMe choke happy]] Darth Vader could be was absolutely terrified to deliver a report to Vader. While in most cases Vader didn't mind if people were extremely afraid of him, at times Vader thought the amount of fear he caused interfered with efficiency. Vader uses a mind trick to get the officer to calm down enough to deliver his report.

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* JediMindTrick: A young Imperial officer, having heard of or (or perhaps having witnessed witnessed) how [[YouHaveFailedMe choke happy]] Darth Vader could be was can be, is absolutely terrified to deliver a report to Vader. While in most cases Vader didn't doesn't mind if people were are extremely afraid of him, at times Vader thought the amount of fear he caused interfered causes interferes with efficiency. Vader uses a mind trick to get the officer to calm down enough to deliver his report.
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* JediMindTrick: A young Imperial officer, having heard of or perhaps having witnessed how [[YouHaveFailedMe choke happy]] Darth Vader could be was absolutely terrified to deliver a report to Vader. While in most cases Vader didn't mind if people were extremely afraid of him, at times Vader thought the amount of fear he caused interfered with efficiency. Vader uses a mind trick to get the officer to calm down enough to deliver his report.
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* WouldntHurtAChild: Nova Stihl is badly shaken after Alderaan, the deaths of billions of innocent civilians of all ages, enough so that he concludes he has to try to prevent something like that from happening again.

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* WouldntHurtAChild: Nova Stihl is badly shaken after Alderaan, the deaths of billions of innocent civilians of all ages, enough so that he concludes he's going to leave the Imperial military as soon as he can and that he has to try to prevent something like that from ever happening again.
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* FascistButInefficient: This novel offers an explanation for how the Death Star's fatal weakness escaped notice during construction: '''It didn't.''' One of the viewpoint characters, an engineer shanghaied onto the project, notices the extra exhaust port and sends a change order, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain only for the change to get buried in the Imperial bureaucracy and the exhaust port built anyway]].

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