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An Laconic/EverybodyDiesEnding where the protagonists fail to accomplish ''anything''.
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An Laconic/EverybodyDiesEnding ending where the protagonists heroes die and fail to accomplish ''anything''.
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[ShootTheShaggyDog HERE]] if you want, although [[StrawNihilist it will never get you anywhere in life, and you will die unappreciated and unvalidated]].-]
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An EverybodyDiesEnding where the protagonists fail to accomplish ''anything''.
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An EverybodyDiesEnding Laconic/EverybodyDiesEnding where the protagonists fail to accomplish ''anything''.
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A tragic ending where the protagonists fail to accomplish ''anything''.
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A tragic ending where the protagonists die AllForNothing.
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A tragic ending where the protagonists die AllForNothing.fail to accomplish ''anything''.
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A tragic ending where the protagonist's die and their efforts are AllForNothing.
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A tragic ending where the protagonist's protagonists die and their efforts are AllForNothing.
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A tragic ending where the protagonist's efforts are AllForNothing.
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A tragic ending where the protagonist's die and their efforts are AllForNothing.
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A tragic ending where all the protagonist's efforts are AllForNothing.
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A tragic ending where all the protagonist's efforts are AllForNothing.
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A tragic ending where all the protagonist's efforts are for nothing.
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A tragic ending where all the protagonist's efforts are for nothing.AllForNothing.
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[ShootTheShaggyDog HERE]] if you want, although it will never get you anywhere in life, and you will die unappreciated and unvalidated.-]
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[ShootTheShaggyDog HERE]] if you want, although [[StrawNihilist it will never get you anywhere in life, and you will die unappreciated and unvalidated.unvalidated]].-]
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A tragic ending that completely invalidates everything the protagonist has done.
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A tragic ending that completely invalidates everything where all the protagonist has done.protagonist's efforts are for nothing.
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A story in which the protagonist dies and their efforts are rendered pointless.
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A story in which tragic ending that completely invalidates everything the protagonist dies and their efforts are rendered pointless.has done.
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A story in which the protagonist dies and his efforts are rendered pointless.
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A story in which the protagonist dies and his their efforts are rendered pointless.
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requires death
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A story in which the protagonist's efforts are rendered pointless.
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A story in which the protagonist's protagonist dies and his efforts are rendered pointless.
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A story in which the protagonist dies and his or her efforts are rendered pointless.
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A story in which the protagonist dies and his or her protagonist's efforts are rendered pointless.
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A story in which the protagonist dies without accomplishing his or her goal.
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A story in which the protagonist dies without accomplishing and his or her goal.efforts are rendered pointless.
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Wow, that story was both depressing ''and'' utterly pointless.
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Not only was that story depressing, it was ''utterly pointless''.
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Wow, that story was pointless ''and'' depressing.
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[ShootTheShaggyDog HERE]]-] HERE]] if you want, although it will never get you anywhere in life, and you will die unappreciated and unvalidated.-]
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[ShootTheShaggyDog HERE]]-]HERE]]-] if you want, although it will never get you anywhere in life, and you will die unappreciated and unvalidated.
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Pointless and depressing.
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