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* The Torchwood team sharing the happy thoughts they use to create their Patronuses, ranging from Tosh creating an artificial intelligence program as a teenager that called her 'Mommy' and Jack recalling how the Doctor and Rose saved his life (back when it still mattered if he died rather than it just being an inconvenience) even after he caused the problem.
* The Torchwood team sharing the happy thoughts they use to create their Patronuses, ranging from Tosh creating an artificial intelligence program as a teenager that called her 'Mommy' and Jack recalling how the Doctor and Rose saved his life (back when it still mattered if he died rather than it just being an inconvenience) even after he caused the problem.
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* Jack's pseudo-sibling, even borderline ParentalSubstitute bond with Harry is ultimately displayed when, in one ultimately nullified timeline, Harry and Ginny name their firstborn son after Jack: 'Jack James Potter' - [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments though Draco dubbed him Jamie, because Jack is a terrible role model, and it stuck.]]
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* Jack's pseudo-sibling, even borderline ParentalSubstitute bond with Harry is ultimately displayed when, in one ultimately nullified timeline, Harry and Ginny name their firstborn son after Jack: 'Jack James Potter' - [[CrowningMomentOfFunny though Draco dubbed him Jamie, because Jack is a terrible role model, and it stuck.]]
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* Jack's GenreSavvy fatherly advice to Ginny who was planning to use Jack to make Harry jealous. Jack sees through this and explains she should just ask him out. She does, and it is adorable.adorable.
* Jack seems to be the eternal big brother in this fic, always with a kind word or a hug for someone.
* Jack seems to be the eternal big brother in this fic, always with a kind word or a hug for someone.
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