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* His comforting of Nina (Girl (the girl from Trebon who saw the [[spoiler: vase of the Chandrian]] Chandrian]]) by giving her the charm, carefully making sure that even if she loses it, she won't freak out), out, and the scenes where he says he first saw the rewards of heroism.
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* Bast taking Kvothe's injury onto his own body when a highway thug damages his jaw. [[spoiler:Downgraded as the attack was his fault in the first place, but even so.]]
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** After Kvothe cleans up, none of his former companions can even recognize him. Trapis can, and express his happiness for Kvothe getting a chance to live a better life.
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* This beautiful line: "So yes. It had flaws, but what does that matter when it comes to matters of the heart? We love what we love. Reason does not enter into it. In many ways, unwise love is the truest love. Anyone can love a thing because. That’s as easy as putting a penny in your pocket. But to love something despite. To know the flaws and love them too. That is rare and pure and perfect."
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* This beautiful line: "So yes. It had flaws, but what does that matter when it comes to matters of the heart? We love what we love. Reason does not enter into it. In many ways, unwise love is the truest love. Anyone can love a thing because. That’s as easy as putting a penny in your pocket. But to love something despite. To know the flaws and love them too. That is rare and pure and perfect.""
* When Kvothe returns to Tarbean, he makes sure to visit Trapis, the man who takes care of homeless children. He's still there, and he recognizes Kvothe immediately, even after all he's changed and is delighted to see him.
* When Kvothe returns to Tarbean, he makes sure to visit Trapis, the man who takes care of homeless children. He's still there, and he recognizes Kvothe immediately, even after all he's changed and is delighted to see him.
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** And they do end up together! SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan, indeed.
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** For bonus points, Trapis literally doesn’t notice when Kvothe cleans up, until it’s pointed out. Because Trapis doesn’t care what they’re covered in, just the child underneath.
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** Elodin mentions that he's tried to leave things out for Auri, but she won't take them. He also agrees to get some things for Kvothe to pass along to her.
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* Another with Stapes, when [[spoiler:Kvothe is kicked out of the Maer's house]], and he needs to return everyone's rings. Stapes takes the gold ring, but insists Kvothe keep the bone one.
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* Another with Stapes, when [[spoiler:Kvothe is kicked out of the Maer's house]], and he needs to return everyone's rings. Stapes takes the gold ring, but insists that Kvothe keep the bone one.
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* The Waystone Inn is possibly named for the stones that Kvothe's family habitually stopped at. Maybe as a symbol that it was okay for other traveling entertainers to stop at his inn, maybe just as an old nostalgia piece. Either way, it's incredibly sweet of Kvothe.
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What I\'ve done the entire time I\'ve been on this site: Fixing Names and Grammar.
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* Kvothe breaks into Ambroses's Ambrose's rooms, risks expulsion from the University, and almost breaks his knees, all to retrieve Denna's ring. Wilem puts it best: "You realize you have gone well over the hill concerning this Denna girl, don’t you?"
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** After Kvothe cleans up, no one of his former companions can even recognize him. Trapis can, and express his happiness for Kvothe getting a chance to live a better life.
** After Kvothe cleans up, no one of his former companions can even recognize him. Trapis can, and express his happiness for Kvothe getting a chance to live a better life.
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-->'''Auri''': You are special to me. I want you to know I will always take care of you.
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-->'''Auri:''' It's okay. I'm here. You're safe.
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* When Kvothe notices Fela start liking Simmon, the guy he constantly describes as a truly good/great person and who has been made clear to be horrible with women.
--> '''Narrator!Kvothe:''' It was worth blood and the fear of death to see her fall in love with him. Just a little. Just the first faint breathe of love, so light she probably didn't notice it herself.
--> '''Narrator!Kvothe:''' It was worth blood and the fear of death to see her fall in love with him. Just a little. Just the first faint breathe of love, so light she probably didn't notice it herself.
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* When Kvothe notices a spark between Fela start liking and Simmon, the guy he constantly describes as a truly good/great good person and who has been made clear to be horrible with women.
--> '''Narrator!Kvothe:''' It was worth blood and the fear of death to see her fall in love with him. Just a little. Just the first faintbreathe breath of love, so light she probably didn't notice it herself.
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* Kvothe breaks into Ambroses's rooms, risks expulsion from the University, and almost breaks his knees, all to retrieve Denna's ring. Wilem puts it best: "You realize you have gone well over the hill concerning this Denna girl, don’t you?"
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* Denna gets two in quick succession- instead of keeping or selling the expensive necklace and earrings given to her by an admirer, which would easily have produced enough money for her to live on for a long time, she gave the earrings to a naive young man so he could clear his debt with a dangerous loan shark and go home to see his ill parent, and then sells the necklace and uses the money to buy an extravagantly awesome case for Kvothe's lute, as a gift.
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* Denna gets two in quick succession- instead of keeping or selling the expensive necklace and earrings given to her by an admirer, which would easily have produced enough money for her to live on for a long time, she gave the earrings to a naive young man so he could clear his debt with a dangerous loan shark and go home to see his ill parent, and then sells the necklace and uses the money to buy an extravagantly awesome case for Kvothe's lute, as a gift.gift.
* This beautiful line: "So yes. It had flaws, but what does that matter when it comes to matters of the heart? We love what we love. Reason does not enter into it. In many ways, unwise love is the truest love. Anyone can love a thing because. That’s as easy as putting a penny in your pocket. But to love something despite. To know the flaws and love them too. That is rare and pure and perfect."
* This beautiful line: "So yes. It had flaws, but what does that matter when it comes to matters of the heart? We love what we love. Reason does not enter into it. In many ways, unwise love is the truest love. Anyone can love a thing because. That’s as easy as putting a penny in your pocket. But to love something despite. To know the flaws and love them too. That is rare and pure and perfect."
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* When Kvothe thinks Elodin might rat Auri out to others, he begs Elodin not to tell anyone, fearing Auri might be stuck in the nuthouse. Elodin reveals he has no intent to tell anyone, and tells Kvothe to pull himself together before she sees him upset and freaks out. It's only after this he lets Kvothe sign up for his class.
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--> Denna gets two in quick succession- instead of keeping or selling the expensive necklace and earrings given to her by an admirer, which would easily have produced enough money for her to live on for a long time, she gave the earrings to a naive young man so he could clear his debt with a dangerous loan shark and go home to see his ill parent, and then sells the necklace and uses the money to buy an extravagantly awesome case for Kvothe's lute, as a gift.
--> Denna gets two in quick succession- instead of keeping or selling the expensive necklace and earrings given to her by an admirer, which would easily have produced enough money for her to live on for a long time, she gave the earrings to a naive young man so he could clear his debt with a dangerous loan shark and go home to see his ill parent, and then sells the necklace and uses the money to buy an extravagantly awesome case for Kvothe's lute, as a gift.
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* Abenthy's note to Kvothe left in Rhetoric And Logic.
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* How Auri comforts Kvothe after he breaks down about his parents' deaths during his Plum Bob period..
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-->'''Auri''': You are special to me. I want you to know I will always take care of you.
* Kvothe and Denna singing "The Lay Of Sir Savien."
* When it's revealed that Stapes [[spoiler:had been replacing the flits in the Maer's gilded cage, not in some plot to poison him, but to make sure the Maer, his employer and best friend, didn't see any death while he was recovering.]] His crying when he's discovered doubles as a {{TearJerker}}.
* Another with Stapes, when [[spoiler:Kvothe is kicked out of the Maer's house]], and he needs to return everyone's rings. Stapes takes the gold ring, but insists Kvothe keep the bone one.
-->'''Stapes:''' This is not part of any game.
* Wil and Sim taking turns [[spoiler: protecting Kvothe from Ambrose's malfeasance while he sleeps, for many many nights]]. They also spend a good deal of their days helping Kvothe with his research on the Amyr.
--> '''Narrator!Kvothe:''' They were the best sort of friends. The sort everyone hopes for but no one deserves, least of all me.
* When Kvothe notices Fela start liking Simmon, the guy he constantly describes as a truly good/great person and who has been made clear to be horrible with women.
--> '''Narrator!Kvothe:''' It was worth blood and the fear of death to see her fall in love with him. Just a little. Just the first faint breathe of love, so light she probably didn't notice it herself.
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People may hate her, but most of the scenes between Kvothe and Denna are beautiful and sweet.
Kvothe's occasional off the hip poetry scene (In the first book, through clever paragraph formatting, it's hard to tell that Kvothe's reply to Deoch's warning about Denna is in verse:
Deoch, my heart is made
Of stronger stuff than glass.
When she strikes she’ll find
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Or gold and adamant
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Don’t think I’m unaware,
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By hunter’s horns. It’s she who should take care,
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That it can’t help but bring her back
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Kvothe and Denna singing "The Lay Of Sir Savien."
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Kvothe's occasional off the hip poetry scene (In the first book, through clever paragraph formatting, it's hard to tell that Kvothe's reply to Deoch's warning about Denna is in verse:
Deoch, my heart is made
Of stronger stuff than glass.
When she strikes she’ll find
it strong as iron-bound brass
Or gold and adamant
together mixed.
Don’t think I’m unaware,
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By hunter’s horns. It’s she who should take care,
for when she strikes
My heart will make a sound
so beautiful and bright
That it can’t help but bring her back
to me in winged flight.
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Kvothe and Denna singing "The Lay Of Sir Savien."
Abenthy's note to Kvothe left in Rhetoric And Logic
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