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From the Magnificent Bastard cleanup thread, "If it refers to an approved character on any such page, the wick can stay."
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* Baron John Marcone gets one when, after having been tortured by the Denarians for a week straight, he silently demands that Harry and the Knights save [[spoiler: Ivy]] first. Then he turns around and ''shelters'' her and [[PetTheDog makes sure she’s the first one to get on the rescue helicopter]].
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* [[MagnificentBastard Baron John Marcone Marcone]] gets one when, after having been tortured by the Denarians for a week straight, he silently demands that Harry and the Knights save [[spoiler: Ivy]] first. Then he turns around and ''shelters'' her and [[PetTheDog makes sure she’s the first one to get on the rescue helicopter]].
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* [[MagnificentBastard Baron John Marcone]] gets one when, after having been tortured by the Denarians for a week straight, he silently demands that Harry and the Knights save [[spoiler: Ivy]] first. Then he turns around and ''shelters'' her and [[PetTheDog makes sure she’s the first one to get on the rescue helicopter]].
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* [[MagnificentBastard Baron John Marcone]] Marcone gets one when, after having been tortured by the Denarians for a week straight, he silently demands that Harry and the Knights save [[spoiler: Ivy]] first. Then he turns around and ''shelters'' her and [[PetTheDog makes sure she’s the first one to get on the rescue helicopter]].
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* One in ''Small Favor'' that really got me: during the hob attack in the subway, Harry and Michael (with Mouse) burst into a room where an attendant ushered some trapped travelers to protect them, and is furiously praying for help and protection. When Michael, Knight of the Cross, busts in with a shining holy blade emitting pure white light (to say nothing of the Wizard and Temple Dog by his side), she begins crying tears of shocked, hopeful joy, to which Michael replies, "Of course He's there. Of course He listens. Granted, He doesn't always answer this quickly." The quiet power and beauty of that one scene, where amidst all the horror and GrimDark of ''The Dresden Files'', the heroic KnightInShiningArmor really does show up to save the day, and the effect he has on the ordinary people, always makes me want to cry. That one paragraph sums up everything you need to know about the Knights of the Cross and what they do, and firmly and forever cements them as the unquestioned Good Guys in an otherwise very grey setting.
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* One in ''Small Favor'' that really got me: Favor'': during the hob attack in the subway, Harry and Michael (with Mouse) burst into a room where an attendant ushered some trapped travelers to protect them, and is furiously praying for help and protection. When Michael, Knight of the Cross, busts in with a shining holy blade emitting pure white light (to say nothing of the Wizard and Temple Dog by his side), she begins crying tears of shocked, hopeful joy, to which Michael replies, "Of course He's there. Of course He listens. Granted, He doesn't always answer this quickly." The quiet power and beauty of that one scene, where amidst all the horror and GrimDark of ''The Dresden Files'', the heroic KnightInShiningArmor really does show up to save the day, and the effect he has on the ordinary people, always makes me want to cry. That one paragraph sums up everything you need to know about the Knights of the Cross and what they do, and firmly and forever cements them as the unquestioned Good Guys in an otherwise very grey setting.
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* One in ''Small Favor'' that really got me: during the hob attack in the subway, Harry and Michael (with Mouse) burst into a room where an attendant ushered some trapped travelers to protect them, and is furiously praying for help and protection. When Michael, Knight of the Cross, busts in with a shining holy blade emitting pure white light (to say nothing of the Wizard and Foo Dog by his side), she begins crying tears of shocked, hopeful joy, to which Michael replies, "Of course He's there. Of course He listens. Granted, He doesn't always answer this quickly." The quiet power and beauty of that one scene, where amidst all the horror and GrimDark of ''The Dresden Files'', the heroic KnightInShiningArmor really does show up to save the day, and the effect he has on the ordinary people, always makes me want to cry. That one paragraph sums up everything you need to know about the Knights of the Cross and what they do, and firmly and forever cements them as the unquestioned Good Guys in an otherwise very grey setting.
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* One in ''Small Favor'' that really got me: during the hob attack in the subway, Harry and Michael (with Mouse) burst into a room where an attendant ushered some trapped travelers to protect them, and is furiously praying for help and protection. When Michael, Knight of the Cross, busts in with a shining holy blade emitting pure white light (to say nothing of the Wizard and Foo Temple Dog by his side), she begins crying tears of shocked, hopeful joy, to which Michael replies, "Of course He's there. Of course He listens. Granted, He doesn't always answer this quickly." The quiet power and beauty of that one scene, where amidst all the horror and GrimDark of ''The Dresden Files'', the heroic KnightInShiningArmor really does show up to save the day, and the effect he has on the ordinary people, always makes me want to cry. That one paragraph sums up everything you need to know about the Knights of the Cross and what they do, and firmly and forever cements them as the unquestioned Good Guys in an otherwise very grey setting.
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* One in ''Small Favor'' that really got me: during the hob attack in the subway, Harry and Michael(with Mouse) burst into a room where an attendant ushered some trapped travellers to protect them, and is furiously praying for help and protection. When Michael, Knight of the Cross, busts in with a shining holy blade emitting pure white light (to say nothing of the Wizard and Foo Dog by his side), she begins crying tears of shocked, hopeful joy, to which Michael replies, "Of course He's there. Of course He listens. Granted, He doesn't always answer this quickly." The quiet power and beauty of that one scene, where amidst all the horror and GrimDark of ''The Dresden Files'', the heroic KnightInShiningArmor really does show up to save the day, and the effect he has on the ordinary people, always makes me want to cry. That one paragraph sums up everything you need to know about the Knights of the Cross and what they do, and firmly and forever cements them as the unquestioned Good Guys in an otherwise very grey setting.
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* One in ''Small Favor'' that really got me: during the hob attack in the subway, Harry and Michael(with Michael (with Mouse) burst into a room where an attendant ushered some trapped travellers travelers to protect them, and is furiously praying for help and protection. When Michael, Knight of the Cross, busts in with a shining holy blade emitting pure white light (to say nothing of the Wizard and Foo Dog by his side), she begins crying tears of shocked, hopeful joy, to which Michael replies, "Of course He's there. Of course He listens. Granted, He doesn't always answer this quickly." The quiet power and beauty of that one scene, where amidst all the horror and GrimDark of ''The Dresden Files'', the heroic KnightInShiningArmor really does show up to save the day, and the effect he has on the ordinary people, always makes me want to cry. That one paragraph sums up everything you need to know about the Knights of the Cross and what they do, and firmly and forever cements them as the unquestioned Good Guys in an otherwise very grey setting.
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* [[MagnificentBastard Baron John Marcone]] gets one when, after having been tortured by the Denarians for a week straight, he silently demands that Harry and the Knights save [[spoiler: Ivy]] first. Then he turns around and ''shelters'' her and [[PetTheDog makes sure she is the first one to get on the rescue helicopter]].
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* [[MagnificentBastard Baron John Marcone]] gets one when, after having been tortured by the Denarians for a week straight, he silently demands that Harry and the Knights save [[spoiler: Ivy]] first. Then he turns around and ''shelters'' her and [[PetTheDog makes sure she is she’s the first one to get on the rescue helicopter]].
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* [[MagnificentBastard Gentleman]] John Marcone gets one when, after having been tortured by the Denarians for a week straight, he silently demands that Harry and the Knights save [[spoiler: Ivy]] first. Then he turns around and ''shelters'' her and [[PetTheDog makes sure she is the first one to get on the rescue helicopter]].
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* [[MagnificentBastard Gentleman]] Baron John Marcone Marcone]] gets one when, after having been tortured by the Denarians for a week straight, he silently demands that Harry and the Knights save [[spoiler: Ivy]] first. Then he turns around and ''shelters'' her and [[PetTheDog makes sure she is the first one to get on the rescue helicopter]].
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* One in ''Small Favor'' that really got me: during the hob attack in the subway, Harry and Michael(with Mouse) burst into a room where an attendant ushered some trapped travellers to protect them, and is furiously praying for help and protection. When Michael, Knight of the Cross, busts in with a shining holy blade emitting pure white light(to say nothing of the Wizard and Foo Dog by his side.), she begins crying tears of shocked, hopeful joy, to which Michael replies, "Of course He's there. Of course He listens. Granted, He doesn't always answer this quickly." The quiet power and beauty of that one scene, where amidst all the horror and GrimDark of ''The Dresden Files'', the heroic KnightInShiningArmor really does show up to save the day, and the effect he has on the ordinary people, always makes me want to cry. That one paragraph sums up everything you need to know about the Knights of the Cross and what they do, and firmly and forever cements them as the unquestioned Good Guys in an otherwise very grey setting.
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* One in ''Small Favor'' that really got me: during the hob attack in the subway, Harry and Michael(with Mouse) burst into a room where an attendant ushered some trapped travellers to protect them, and is furiously praying for help and protection. When Michael, Knight of the Cross, busts in with a shining holy blade emitting pure white light(to light (to say nothing of the Wizard and Foo Dog by his side.), side), she begins crying tears of shocked, hopeful joy, to which Michael replies, "Of course He's there. Of course He listens. Granted, He doesn't always answer this quickly." The quiet power and beauty of that one scene, where amidst all the horror and GrimDark of ''The Dresden Files'', the heroic KnightInShiningArmor really does show up to save the day, and the effect he has on the ordinary people, always makes me want to cry. That one paragraph sums up everything you need to know about the Knights of the Cross and what they do, and firmly and forever cements them as the unquestioned Good Guys in an otherwise very grey setting.
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* One in ''Small Favor'' that really got me: during the hob attack in the subway, Harry and Michael burst into a room where an attendant ushered some trapped travellers to protect them, and is furiously praying for help and protection. When Michael, Knight of the Cross, busts in with a shining holy blade emitting pure white light, she begins crying tears of shocked, hopeful joy, to which Michael replies, "Of course He's there. Of course He listens. Granted, He doesn't always answer this quickly." The quiet power and beauty of that one scene, where amidst all the horror and GrimDark of ''The Dresden Files'', the heroic KnightInShiningArmor really does show up to save the day, and the effect he has on the ordinary people, always makes me want to cry. That one paragraph sums up everything you need to know about the Knights of the Cross and what they do, and firmly and forever cements them as the unquestioned Good Guys in an otherwise very grey setting.
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* One in ''Small Favor'' that really got me: during the hob attack in the subway, Harry and Michael Michael(with Mouse) burst into a room where an attendant ushered some trapped travellers to protect them, and is furiously praying for help and protection. When Michael, Knight of the Cross, busts in with a shining holy blade emitting pure white light, light(to say nothing of the Wizard and Foo Dog by his side.), she begins crying tears of shocked, hopeful joy, to which Michael replies, "Of course He's there. Of course He listens. Granted, He doesn't always answer this quickly." The quiet power and beauty of that one scene, where amidst all the horror and GrimDark of ''The Dresden Files'', the heroic KnightInShiningArmor really does show up to save the day, and the effect he has on the ordinary people, always makes me want to cry. That one paragraph sums up everything you need to know about the Knights of the Cross and what they do, and firmly and forever cements them as the unquestioned Good Guys in an otherwise very grey setting.
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* Michael gets these all the time, but one that really stands out doubles as a moment of awesome as well. [[spoiler:After he is shot and has some of his organs shredded by a Fallen angel, and spends hours if not days in the hospital in critical condition, the first thing he does after waking up is ask if Harry is okay.]]
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* Michael gets these all the time, but one that really stands out doubles as a moment of awesome as well. [[spoiler:After he is he’s shot and has some of his organs shredded by a Fallen angel, and spends hours if not days in the hospital in critical condition, the first thing he does after waking up is ask if Harry is okay.]]
