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** In a meta-sense: seeing the author write such a sad yet heartwarming chapter for Luan despite her not being his favorite character.
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Even a story has depressing as this can have some heartwarming moments.
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Even a story has as depressing as this can have some heartwarming moments.
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** This chapter, being the GrandFinale, no doubt has the biggers CMOH of all, since the author obviously wants to end the story on a high note rather than a depressing one. ''All'' Lincolns family, friends, and ''every single person'' he ever met and meant something for, no matter how brief or small, gathered at the gym of the Royal Woods Athletic Club to throw Lincoln a massive surprise party. One where they all praise him for the many accomplishments he made in his short life, remind him how much he meant for them, and all give him a reward they won to thank him for it. All while Luna and her band sing a song she composed for him.
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** This chapter, being the GrandFinale, no doubt has the biggers CMOH of all, since the author obviously wants to end the story on a high note rather than a depressing one. ''All'' Lincolns of Lincoln's family, friends, and ''every single person'' he ever met and meant something for, no matter how brief or small, gathered at the gym of the Royal Woods Athletic Club to throw Lincoln a massive surprise party. One where they all praise him for the many accomplishments he made in his short life, remind him how much he meant for them, and all give him a reward they won to thank him for it. All while Luna and her band sing a song she composed for him.
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'''BEWARE OF SPOILERS'''
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* Chapter 26: ''A smile at the twilight of life (FINAL)''
**This chapter, being the GrandFinale, no doubt has the biggers CMOH of all, since the author obviously wants to end the story on a high note rather than a depressing one. ''All'' Lincolns family, friends, and ''every single person'' he ever met and meant something for, no matter how brief or small, gathered at the gym of the Royal Woods Athletic Club to throw Lincoln a massive surprise party. One where they all praise him for the many accomplishments he made in his short life, remind him how much he meant for them, and all give him a reward they won to thank him for it. All while Luna and her band sing a song she composed for him.
**This chapter, being the GrandFinale, no doubt has the biggers CMOH of all, since the author obviously wants to end the story on a high note rather than a depressing one. ''All'' Lincolns family, friends, and ''every single person'' he ever met and meant something for, no matter how brief or small, gathered at the gym of the Royal Woods Athletic Club to throw Lincoln a massive surprise party. One where they all praise him for the many accomplishments he made in his short life, remind him how much he meant for them, and all give him a reward they won to thank him for it. All while Luna and her band sing a song she composed for him.
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* Chapter 25: ''Promises''
** Since they all want to bunk with Lincoln, the Loud Siblings decide to hold a huge sleepover in the living room. During this sleepover, Lincoln confesses his fear that his sisters might forget him after his death. Naturally, they all assure him why that will never happen.
** Since they all want to bunk with Lincoln, the Loud Siblings decide to hold a huge sleepover in the living room. During this sleepover, Lincoln confesses his fear that his sisters might forget him after his death. Naturally, they all assure him why that will never happen.
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** Lisa immediately dropping of '''ALL''' of her commitments upon [[spoiler:correctly self-diagnosing Lincoln to FindTheCure for a disease that is already in its terminal stages. [[TheAtoner She says that it's a great trial given to her for failing to see the signs earlier whenever he was her lab rat.]]]]
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** Lisa immediately dropping of '''ALL''' of her commitments upon [[spoiler:correctly correctly self-diagnosing Lincoln to FindTheCure for a disease that is already in its terminal stages. [[TheAtoner She says that it's a great trial given to her for failing to see the signs earlier whenever he was her lab rat.]]]]]]
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** Lincoln gently putting Lisa in bed after finding she has fallen asleep on the floor of her room [[spoiler: while working on a cure for him]].
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** Lincoln gently putting Lisa in bed after finding she has fallen asleep on the floor of her room [[spoiler: while working on a cure for him]].him.
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*** Speaking of Lana, she is planting a tree with Lincoln, ending with him asking Lana to take care of it full-time. [[spoiler:[[LockedOutOfTheLoop Unaware of his numbered days,]] Lana proceeds to the gush at how [[TemptingFate they are going to spend time]] when they build the eventual tree house on it.]]
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*** Speaking of Lana, she is planting a tree with Lincoln, ending with him asking Lana to take care of it full-time. [[spoiler:[[LockedOutOfTheLoop [[LockedOutOfTheLoop Unaware of his numbered days,]] Lana proceeds to the gush at how [[TemptingFate they are going to spend time]] when they build the eventual tree house on it.]]
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** After Lincoln [[spoiler:dyes his hair brown]], the siblings (sans Lisa) share a group hug with him and says that he looks beautiful.
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** After Lincoln [[spoiler:dyes dyes his hair brown]], brown, the siblings (sans Lisa) share a group hug with him and says that he looks beautiful.
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** Pop Pop telling Lincoln that his medals mean nothing compared to him and his ten sisters.
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* Chapter 22: ''The Calm''
** Lynn and Ronnie Anne make amends for their fight earlier, and then drag Lincoln into a group hug.
** Lynn and Ronnie Anne make amends for their fight earlier, and then drag Lincoln into a group hug.
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* Chapter 21: ''A Trophy for Love'':
**Lincoln and Ronnie Anne drop the masquerade, admit they love each other, and officially become a couple.
**Lincoln and Ronnie Anne drop the masquerade, admit they love each other, and officially become a couple.
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*** Not to mention, the moment Lincoln was hospitalised, Lisa spent every waking moment trying to figure out what was he down with.
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*** Not to mention, the moment Lincoln was hospitalised, hospitalized, Lisa spent every waking moment trying to figure out what was he down with.
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** When Lola and Lana became suspicious and ask Lincoln about the [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness behaviour of the older sisters]], Lisa immediately covers for him by saying that they are feeling down because she told them that she is stopping her tutoring sessions [[ExactWords due to a big project that will change the course of mankind and their family]].
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** When Lola and Lana became suspicious and ask Lincoln about the [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness behaviour behavior of the older sisters]], Lisa immediately covers for him by saying that they are feeling down because she told them that she is stopping her tutoring sessions [[ExactWords due to a big project that will change the course of mankind and their family]].
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** Luna expressing her concerns about Luan’s sudden silence, proving that, despite Luans antics and bad jokes, she really does like her younger sister.
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** Luna expressing her concerns about Luan’s sudden silence, proving that, despite Luans Luan's antics and bad jokes, she really does like her younger sister.
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** Lincoln taking Leni's suggestion that he and the rest of the siblings should play a board game. It was undoubtedly the most fun the siblings had with each other in a while.
** Lincoln trying his best with keeping his mother from breaking down.
** Lincoln trying his best with keeping his mother from breaking down.
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** Lincoln deciding to help out Luan, Lynn, and Lucy:
*** Lincoln decides to practice [[PieInTheFace throwing pies]] with Luan, and the two genuinely having fun together.
*** Lynn apologizes for the times she was rough towards Lincoln, and calls him the best little brother in the word.
*** Lincoln convincing Lucy to continue writing poetry, in spite of it reminding her so much of Lincoln and his upcoming death.
** After Lincoln [[spoiler:dyes his hair brown]], the siblings (sans Lisa) share a group hug with him and says that he looks beautiful.
** Lincoln allowing the twins to sleep alongside him, with the twins telling Lincoln that they love him.
*** Lincoln decides to practice [[PieInTheFace throwing pies]] with Luan, and the two genuinely having fun together.
*** Lynn apologizes for the times she was rough towards Lincoln, and calls him the best little brother in the word.
*** Lincoln convincing Lucy to continue writing poetry, in spite of it reminding her so much of Lincoln and his upcoming death.
** After Lincoln [[spoiler:dyes his hair brown]], the siblings (sans Lisa) share a group hug with him and says that he looks beautiful.
** Lincoln allowing the twins to sleep alongside him, with the twins telling Lincoln that they love him.
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* Lucy admitting to her family that the princess pony book belonged to her, which prompts all the sisters to recall the times Lincoln took the fall for them or when they mistreated him.
* Harold and Howard praising Lincoln for how he helped Clyde, and accepted the McBrides for what they were.
* Harold and Howard praising Lincoln for how he helped Clyde, and accepted the McBrides for what they were.
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* Chapter 20: ''A different Lincoln''
* Lucy admitting to her family that the princess pony book belonged to her, which prompts all the sisters to recall the times Lincoln took the fall for them or when they mistreated him.
* Harold and Howard praising Lincoln for how he helped Clyde, and accepted the McBrides for what they were.
* Lucy admitting to her family that the princess pony book belonged to her, which prompts all the sisters to recall the times Lincoln took the fall for them or when they mistreated him.
* Harold and Howard praising Lincoln for how he helped Clyde, and accepted the McBrides for what they were.
