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** In a deleted part of the script, there's a montage of more people giving donations, including a young street kid that helped Joe on Hollywood Boulevard, Jason gathering money in school, and even Pindi giving some cash to Kweli.
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** In a deleted part of the script, there's a montage of more people giving donations, including a young street kid that helped Joe on Hollywood Boulevard, Jason gathering money in school, and even Pindi giving some cash to Kweli.Kweli.
* The audience's introduction to Joe as an adult. Gregg is taking a blood sample from a leopard, telling the men he hired to release the leopard from the cage they trapped it in. The screams of the leopard attract Joe, who makes a big entrance and advances to the cage. In an aversion of WhatMeasureIsANonCute, he rips open the cage to release the leopard. Leopards are carnivores who have, in some cases, preyed on gorillas, but Joe only sees the cat as a victim of poachers.
* The audience's introduction to Joe as an adult. Gregg is taking a blood sample from a leopard, telling the men he hired to release the leopard from the cage they trapped it in. The screams of the leopard attract Joe, who makes a big entrance and advances to the cage. In an aversion of WhatMeasureIsANonCute, he rips open the cage to release the leopard. Leopards are carnivores who have, in some cases, preyed on gorillas, but Joe only sees the cat as a victim of poachers.
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* O'Hara establishing himself as a BenevolentBoss when several drunks harass one of his staff, making her spill the cigarettes she was selling. After chewing the rabble out, he assures the waitress the damages won't come out of her pay.
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* O'Hara establishing establishes himself as a BenevolentBoss when several drunks harass one of his staff, making her spill the cigarettes she was selling. After chewing out the rabble out, rabble, he assures the waitress the damages won't come out of her pay.
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* "Don't worry kid. There's nobody in the world gonna shoot Joe now..."
** Just the fact that Joe went out of his way to shield one of the children from some falling debris.
** Just the fact that Joe went out of his way to shield one of the children from some falling debris.
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* "Don't worry worry, kid. There's nobody in the world gonna shoot Joe now..."
** Justthe fact that Joe went out of his way to shield one of the children from some falling debris.
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* Jill and Joe play hide-and-seek, which doubles as funny.
** Jill later teaches the conservation staff how Joe plays the game.
** Jill later teaches the conservation staff how Joe plays the game.
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* When Gregg is alone with a caged and depressed Joe, he laments how the ape was put in a cage when the former promised Jill that would never happen. Next, Gregg places his hand into Joe's, who turns to face him, seeing Gregg's apologetic expression. Then Joe reciprocates by wrapping his fingers around Gregg's hand.
* The wildlife park staff all saying goodbye to Joe when the great escape is enacted; even the publicity-chasing head of the park has nothing but kind words to say.
* While saving Jason from the burning Ferris Wheel, Joe gives him a look that says, "I'm here to help, so trust me."
* The ending, where people donate enough money for Jill and Gregg to buy more than enough land for Joe to roam freely, dubbing the space the "Joe Young Wildlife Preserve."
* The wildlife park staff all saying goodbye to Joe when the great escape is enacted; even the publicity-chasing head of the park has nothing but kind words to say.
* While saving Jason from the burning Ferris Wheel, Joe gives him a look that says, "I'm here to help, so trust me."
* The ending, where people donate enough money for Jill and Gregg to buy more than enough land for Joe to roam freely, dubbing the space the "Joe Young Wildlife Preserve."
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* When Gregg is alone with a caged and depressed Joe, he laments how the ape was put in a cage when the former promised Jill that would never happen. Next, Gregg places his hand into Joe's, who Joe's palm. Joe turns to face him, him and, seeing Gregg's apologetic expression. Then Joe remorseful expression, reciprocates by wrapping his fingers around Gregg's hand.
hand. In the script, Greg says an extra line to Joe that homages one Max O'Hara says to Jill in the original film.
-->'''Gregg:''' I helped put you here. And now I'm going to do everything I can to get you out.
*The wildlife park staff all saying Cecily says goodbye to Joe when the great escape is enacted; occurs; even Harry, the publicity-chasing head of the park park, has nothing but kind words to say.
* While saving Jason from the burning Ferris Wheel, Joe gives him a look that clearly says,"I'm "I know you're scared, but I'm here to help, so trust help. Trust me."
* The ending, where people donate enough money for Jill and Gregg to buy more than enough land for Joe to roam freely, dubbing the space the "Joe Young Wildlife Preserve.""
** In a deleted part of the script, there's a montage of more people giving donations, including a young street kid that helped Joe on Hollywood Boulevard, Jason gathering money in school, and even Pindi giving some cash to Kweli.
-->'''Gregg:''' I helped put you here. And now I'm going to do everything I can to get you out.
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* While saving Jason from the burning Ferris Wheel, Joe gives him a look that clearly says,
* The ending, where people donate enough money for Jill and Gregg to buy more than enough land for Joe to roam freely, dubbing the space the "Joe Young Wildlife Preserve.
** In a deleted part of the script, there's a montage of more people giving donations, including a young street kid that helped Joe on Hollywood Boulevard, Jason gathering money in school, and even Pindi giving some cash to Kweli.
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* O'Hara's HeelFaceTurn, where he admits that the whole mess was his fault. He then adamantly notes he's willing to do whatever he can to set things right.
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* O'Hara's HeelFaceTurn, where he admits that the whole mess with Joe was his fault. He then adamantly notes he's willing to do whatever he can to set things right.
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** Just the fact that Joe went out of his way to shield one of the children from some of the falling debris.
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** Just the fact that Joe went out of his way to shield one of the children from some of the falling debris.
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* When Gregg is alone with a caged and depressed Joe, he laments how the ape was put in a cage when the former promised Jill that would never happen. Gregg places his hand into Joe's, who turns to face him, seeing Gregg's apologetic expression. Then Joe reciprocates by wrapping his fingers around Gregg's hand.
* The wildlife park staff all saying goodbye to Joe when the great escape is enacted, even the publicity-chasing head of the park has nothing but kind words to say.
* The ending, where people donate enough money for Jill and Gregg to buy more than enough land for Joe to roam freely, dubbing the space the "Joe Young Wildlife Preserve".
* The wildlife park staff all saying goodbye to Joe when the great escape is enacted, even the publicity-chasing head of the park has nothing but kind words to say.
* The ending, where people donate enough money for Jill and Gregg to buy more than enough land for Joe to roam freely, dubbing the space the "Joe Young Wildlife Preserve".
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* When Gregg is alone with a caged and depressed Joe, he laments how the ape was put in a cage when the former promised Jill that would never happen. Next, Gregg places his hand into Joe's, who turns to face him, seeing Gregg's apologetic expression. Then Joe reciprocates by wrapping his fingers around Gregg's hand.
* The wildlife park staff all saying goodbye to Joe when the great escape isenacted, enacted; even the publicity-chasing head of the park has nothing but kind words to say.
* While saving Jason from the burning Ferris Wheel, Joe gives him a look that says, "I'm here to help, so trust me."
* The ending, where people donate enough money for Jill and Gregg to buy more than enough land for Joe to roam freely, dubbing the space the "Joe Young WildlifePreserve".Preserve."
* The wildlife park staff all saying goodbye to Joe when the great escape is
* While saving Jason from the burning Ferris Wheel, Joe gives him a look that says, "I'm here to help, so trust me."
* The ending, where people donate enough money for Jill and Gregg to buy more than enough land for Joe to roam freely, dubbing the space the "Joe Young Wildlife
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* O'Hara establishing himself as a BenevolentBoss when several drunks harass one of his staff, making her spill the cigarettes she was selling. After chewing the rabble out, he assures the waitress the damages won't come out of her pay.
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* O'Hara's HeelFaceTurn, where he admits that the whole mess was his fault. He then adamantly notes he's willing to do whatever he can to set things right.
** Just the fact that Joe went out of his way to shield one of the children from some of the falling debris.
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--> '''O'Hara''': Hey, they said "Hello, Max". (Joe walks into the scene. O'Hara takes a ''big'' step back) [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments *Yipe*]].
* O'Hara's HeelFaceTurn, where he admits that the whole mess was his fault and that he's willing to do whatever he can to set things right.
* O'Hara's HeelFaceTurn, where he admits that the whole mess was his fault and that he's willing to do whatever he can to set things right.
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--> '''O'Hara''': Hey, they said "Hello, Max". (Joe (''Joe walks into the scene. O'Hara takes a ''big'' step back) back'') [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments *Yipe*]].
* O'Hara's HeelFaceTurn, where he admits that the whole mess was his fault and that he's willing to do whatever he can to set things right.
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* Loved the end of the original film, with Jill and Gregg's "filmed letter".
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* Loved the end of the original film, The ending, with Jill and Gregg's "filmed letter".
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* O'Hara's HeelFaceTurn, where he admits that the whole mess was his fault and that he's willing to do whatever he can to set things right.
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* O'Hara's HeelFaceTurn, where he admits that the whole mess was his fault and that he's willing to do whatever he can to set things right.right.
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* Jill sings her African lullaby to calm Joe, and he gently strokes her cheek before falling asleep.
* When Gregg is alone with a caged and depressed Joe, he laments how the ape was put in a cage when the former promised Jill that would never happen. Gregg places his hand into Joe's, who turns to face him, seeing Gregg's apologetic expression. Then Joe reciprocates by wrapping his fingers around Gregg's hand.
* The ending, where people donate enough money for Jill and Gregg to buy more than enough land for Joe to roam freely, dubbing the space the "Joe Young Wildlife Preserve".
[[AC:1998 film]]
* Jill sings her African lullaby to calm Joe, and he gently strokes her cheek before falling asleep.
* When Gregg is alone with a caged and depressed Joe, he laments how the ape was put in a cage when the former promised Jill that would never happen. Gregg places his hand into Joe's, who turns to face him, seeing Gregg's apologetic expression. Then Joe reciprocates by wrapping his fingers around Gregg's hand.
* The ending, where people donate enough money for Jill and Gregg to buy more than enough land for Joe to roam freely, dubbing the space the "Joe Young Wildlife Preserve".
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--> '''Windy''': You got time for this (turns on movie projector. Jill and Gregg come into the scene).
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--> '''Windy''': You got time for this (turns (''turns on movie projector. Jill and Gregg come into the scene).scene'').
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--> '''O'Hara''': (calling to the screen) Hey, Jill.
--> '''Jill''': (silently) Hello Max.
--> '''Jill''': (silently) Hello Max.
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--> '''O'Hara''': (calling (''calling to the screen) screen'') Hey, Jill.
--> '''Jill''':(silently) (''silently'') Hello Max.
--> '''Jill''':
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--> '''O'Hara''': Hey, they said "Hello, Max". (Joe walks into the scene. O'Hara takes a ''big'' step back) [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments *Yipe*]].
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--> '''O'Hara''': Hey, they said "Hello, Max". (Joe walks into the scene. O'Hara takes a ''big'' step back) [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments *Yipe*]].*Yipe*]].
* O'Hara's HeelFaceTurn, where he admits that the whole mess was his fault and that he's willing to do whatever he can to set things right.
* O'Hara's HeelFaceTurn, where he admits that the whole mess was his fault and that he's willing to do whatever he can to set things right.
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--> '''O'Hara''': Hey, they said "Hello, Max". (Joe walks into the scene. O'Hara takes a ''big'' step back) [[CrowningMomentOfFunny *Yipe*]].
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--> '''O'Hara''': Hey, they said "Hello, Max". (Joe walks into the scene. O'Hara takes a ''big'' step back) [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments *Yipe*]].
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* "Don't worry kid. There's nobody in the world gonna shoot Joe now..."
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* Loved the end of the original film, with Jill and Gregg's "filmed letter".
--> '''O'Hara''': Come on, Windy, I got a million things to do.
--> '''Windy''': You got time for this (turns on movie projector. Jill and Gregg come into the scene).
--> '''O'Hara''': Hey, it's the kids!
--> '''Windy''': Crawford told me to spring it on you. He shot it when he was down there.
--> '''O'Hara''': (calling to the screen) Hey, Jill.
--> '''Jill''': (silently) Hello Max.
--> '''O'Hara''': Hey, they said "Hello, Max". (Joe walks into the scene. O'Hara takes a ''big'' step back) [[CrowningMomentOfFunny *Yipe*]].
* Loved the end of the original film, with Jill and Gregg's "filmed letter".
--> '''O'Hara''': Come on, Windy, I got a million things to do.
--> '''Windy''': You got time for this (turns on movie projector. Jill and Gregg come into the scene).
--> '''O'Hara''': Hey, it's the kids!
--> '''Windy''': Crawford told me to spring it on you. He shot it when he was down there.
--> '''O'Hara''': (calling to the screen) Hey, Jill.
--> '''Jill''': (silently) Hello Max.
--> '''O'Hara''': Hey, they said "Hello, Max". (Joe walks into the scene. O'Hara takes a ''big'' step back) [[CrowningMomentOfFunny *Yipe*]].
