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* Jack and Lily the Mermaid, in a RescueRomance sort of way. Turns into a bit of a TearJerker when they have to part company.
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* Jack and Lily the Mermaid, in a RescueRomance sort of way. The two kids quickly become friends and bond throughout their adventure on the island. Turns into a bit of a TearJerker when they have to part company.
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* Jack and Lily the Mermaid, in a RescueRomance sort of way. Turns into a bit of a TearJerker when the they have to part company.
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* Jack and Lily the Mermaid, in a RescueRomance sort of way. Turns into a bit of a TearJerker when the they have to part company.
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--> '''Lily''': It gave me a leaf to remember it by.
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--> '''Morgan''': Oh by my word Gwyn! [[AnguishedDeclarationOfLove Your the most breathtaking beauty I've seen in all my days!]] Teh! There I've said it. Thew, I feel the burden lifted already.
--> '''Gwyn''': ...Fine timing Morgan!
--> '''Gwyn''': ...Fine timing Morgan!
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--> '''Gwyn''': ...
'''Gwyn:''' ...Fine timing Morgan!
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* Jack and Lily the Mermaid, how cute. Turns into a bit of a TearJerker when the they have to part company.
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* Jack and Lily the Mermaid, how cute.in a RescueRomance sort of way. Turns into a bit of a TearJerker when the they have to part company.
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* Jack and Lily the Mermaid, how cute. Turns to TearJerker when the they have to part company.
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* Jack and Lily the Mermaid, how cute. Turns to into a bit of a TearJerker when the they have to part company.
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* Jack and Lily the Mermaid, how cute! Turns to TearJerker when the they have to part company.
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* Jack and Lily the Mermaid, how cute! cute. Turns to TearJerker when the they have to part company.
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* Jack hands over the only piece of treasure he could recover (the rug he used to get Lily out of the treasure room) to Morgan.
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* Jack hands willingly handing over the only piece of treasure he could recover (the rug he used to get Lily out of the treasure room) to Morgan.
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* Jack and Morgan bonding over their shared problems, with Morgan confessing to Jack he had a pretty lonely childhood.
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* Jack and Morgan bonding over their shared problems, with Morgan confessing to Jack he had a pretty lonely childhood.childhood.
* Jack hands over the only piece of treasure he could recover (the rug he used to get Lily out of the treasure room) to Morgan.
* Jack hands over the only piece of treasure he could recover (the rug he used to get Lily out of the treasure room) to Morgan.
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** Mind you, they were buried up to their heads in sand at the moment. So it's understandable she'd be a bit cranky.
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** Mind you, they were buried up to their heads in sand at the moment. So it's understandable she'd be a bit cranky.cranky.
* Jack and Morgan bonding over their shared problems, with Morgan confessing to Jack he had a pretty lonely childhood.
* Jack and Morgan bonding over their shared problems, with Morgan confessing to Jack he had a pretty lonely childhood.
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--> '''Lily''': It gave me a leaf to remember it by.
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--> '''Lily''': It gave me a leaf to remember it by.by.
* Morgan confessing his crush to Gwyn, though his timing ''could'' have been a bit better.
--> '''Morgan''': Oh by my word Gwyn! [[AnguishedDeclarationOfLove Your the most breathtaking beauty I've seen in all my days!]] Teh! There I've said it. Thew, I feel the burden lifted already.
--> '''Gwyn''': ...Fine timing Morgan!
** Mind you, they were buried up to their heads in sand at the moment. So it's understandable she'd be a bit cranky.
* Morgan confessing his crush to Gwyn, though his timing ''could'' have been a bit better.
--> '''Morgan''': Oh by my word Gwyn! [[AnguishedDeclarationOfLove Your the most breathtaking beauty I've seen in all my days!]] Teh! There I've said it. Thew, I feel the burden lifted already.
--> '''Gwyn''': ...Fine timing Morgan!
** Mind you, they were buried up to their heads in sand at the moment. So it's understandable she'd be a bit cranky.
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* Jack and Lily the Mermaid, how cute! Turns to TearJerker when the they have to part company.
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* Jack and Lily the Mermaid, how cute! Turns to TearJerker when the they have to part company.company.
** Lily is such a FriendToAllLivingThings that the trees give her gifts.
--> '''Lily''': It gave me a leaf to remember it by.
** Lily is such a FriendToAllLivingThings that the trees give her gifts.
--> '''Lily''': It gave me a leaf to remember it by.
