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As its name would suggest, '''VideoGame/LoveAndWar''' is often about love, so expect quite a few of these.
'''Part One:'''
'''Part One:'''
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As its name would suggest, '''VideoGame/LoveAndWar''' is often about love, so expect quite a few of these.
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these. '''Spoilers are unmarked as per policy.'''
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* Ryan's joy at hearing that Henrik has made it into King's College definitely counts, especially when the two realize that they will truly miss each other once he's gone. [[spoiler: Of course, by the end of the story, Ryan feels betrayed by Henrik's actions during their final battle with Kodenai, and they haven't made it up as of Act II.]]
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* Ryan's joy at hearing that Henrik has made it into King's College definitely counts, especially when the two realize that they will truly miss each other once he's gone. [[spoiler: Of course, by the end of the story, Ryan feels betrayed by Henrik's actions during their final battle with Kodenai, and they haven't made it up as of Act II.]]
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* Though it's just a [[IrrelevantSidequest small and optional scene]], Ryan's kind advice to a fellow passenger whose girlfriend did not accompany him on the trip - even though [[YourCheatingHeart his own heart is broken]] - certainly counts.
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* Though it's just a [[IrrelevantSidequest small and optional scene]], Ryan's kind advice to a fellow passenger whose girlfriend did not accompany him on the trip - even though [[YourCheatingHeart his own heart is broken]] broken - certainly counts.
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As its name would suggest, '''LoveAndWar''' '''VideoGame/LoveAndWar''' is often about love, so expect quite a few of these.
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* During Lavie and Ryan's quest at Glendale, after the boss battle, Lavie is badly shaken. Ryan then has the chance to either be gentle with her, or to take a "motivational speaker" approach and snap her out of it. Both of these are quite a refreshing change from Ryan's generally dismissive manner towards Lavie, especially the former:
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* During Lavie and Ryan's quest at Glendale, after the boss battle, Lavie is badly shaken.shaken and on the verge of hysteria. Ryan then has the chance to either be gentle with her, or to take a "motivational speaker" approach and snap her out of it. Both of these are quite a refreshing change from Ryan's generally dismissive manner towards Lavie, especially the former:
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* During Lavie and Ryan's quest at Glendale, after the boss battle, Lavie is badly shaken. Ryan then has the chance to either be gentle with her, or to take a "motivational speaker" approach and snap her out of it. Both of these are quite a refreshing change from Ryan's generally dismissive manner towards Lavie, especially the former:
--> '''Ryan:''' "You know I'd never let anything happen to my one and only deputy, right?"
--> ''(Cue artwork of a [[LuminescentBlush beaming and blushing]] Lavie.)''
--> '''Ryan:''' "You know I'd never let anything happen to my one and only deputy, right?"
--> ''(Cue artwork of a [[LuminescentBlush beaming and blushing]] Lavie.)''
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--> '''Carranya:''' ''(smiling)'' "I guess it did."
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--> '''Carranya:''' ''(smiling)'' "I guess it did.""
* This becomes even better when Ryan follows it up with ''this'':
--> '''Ryan:''' "And for what it's worth, [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre I think you make a great Princess. I'd be proud to be your subject when you become Queen.]]"
* This becomes even better when Ryan follows it up with ''this'':
--> '''Ryan:''' "And for what it's worth, [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre I think you make a great Princess. I'd be proud to be your subject when you become Queen.]]"
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* Though we never only learn of it from Anne Lancaster's memories, the romance between Lavie's grandparents is equally heartwarming, in an [[GrowOldWithMe old-fashioned way.]]
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* Though we never only learn of it from Anne Lancaster's memories, the romance between Lavie's grandparents is equally heartwarming, in an [[GrowOldWithMe old-fashioned way.]]
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--> '''Prince Derren:''' [[DyingDeclarationOfLove '''(dying)''']] "Penelope.... I love you."
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--> '''Prince Derren:''' [[DyingDeclarationOfLove '''(dying)''']] ''[[DyingDeclarationOfLove (dying)]]'' "Penelope.... I love you."
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--> '''Prince Derren:''' [[DyingDeclarationOfLove ''(dying)'']] "Penelope.... I love you."
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--> '''Prince Derren:''' [[DyingDeclarationOfLove ''(dying)'']] '''(dying)''']] "Penelope.... I love you."
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--> '''Prince Derren:''' ''(dying)'' "Penelope.... I love you."
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--> '''Prince Derren:''' ''(dying)'' [[DyingDeclarationOfLove ''(dying)'']] "Penelope.... I love you."
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* Ryan advising Carranya on how to deal with her father, King Arlbert of Galvenia, whom she feels is neglecting her:
--> '''Ryan:''' "When you get home from your mission of peace, give your father a hug. Tell him you understand the strain he's under, and ask to spend more time with him. He's your father, after all. [[DisappearedDad You're fortunate to have one.]]"
--> '''Ryan:''' "When you get home from your mission of peace, give your father a hug. Tell him you understand the strain he's under, and ask to spend more time with him. He's your father, after all. [[DisappearedDad You're fortunate to have one.]]"
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--> '''Lavie:''' ''(moved to tears)'' "..Thank you."
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--> '''Lavie:''' ''(moved to tears)'' ''(blushing)'' "..Thank you."
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* The entire encounter between Lavie and her grandmother, ''especially'' the gift Lavie receives - [[spoiler: her late grandfather's cufflinks, a prized family heirloom]] - from her just at the end.
--> [[spoiler: '''Anne Lancaster:''' "When the time comes, Lavie... give them to the man you're going to marry."]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Lavie:''' ''(moved to tears)'' "..Thank you."]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Anne Lancaster:''' "When the time comes, Lavie... give them to the man you're going to marry."]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Lavie:''' ''(moved to tears)'' "..Thank you."]]
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* The entire encounter between Lavie and her grandmother, ''especially'' the gift Lavie receives - [[spoiler: her late grandfather's cufflinks, a prized family heirloom]] heirloom - from her just at the end.
-->[[spoiler: '''Anne Lancaster:''' "When the time comes, Lavie... give them to the man you're going to marry."]]
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-->[[spoiler: '''Lavie:''' ''(moved to tears)'' "..Thank you."]]"
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--> [[spoiler: '''Anne Lancaster:''' "He's still with me, watching over me and protecting me."]]
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--> [[spoiler: '''Anne Lancaster:''' "He's still with me, watching over me and protecting me."]]
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* Lavie's [[GirlsLoveStuffedAnimals teddy bear]], which she treasures because Ryan won it in a shooting contest when they were kids, and gave it to her.
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* Prince Derren and Lady Penelope's romance, in the [[ShowWithinAShow]] play that Ryan, Carranya and Rinoa act in on the ship's theatre.
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* Prince Derren and Lady Penelope's romance, in the [[ShowWithinAShow]] [[ShowWithinAShow play that Ryan, Carranya and Rinoa act in on the ship's theatre. board ship.]]
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* Carranya's nineteenth birthday. She's run away from home on a mission of peace, is feeling lost away from the Palace for the first time in her life, but Ryan can still make it a memorable day for her, especially when he chooses [[ChekhovsGift the right gift]] to give her.
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* Carranya's nineteenth birthday. She's run away from home on a mission of peace, is feeling lost away from the Palace for the first time in her life, but Ryan can still make it a memorable day for her, especially when he chooses [[ChekhovsGift the right gift]] to give her.
* Prince Derren and Lady Penelope's romance, in the [[ShowWithinAShow]] play that Ryan, Carranya and Rinoa act in on the ship's theatre.
--> '''Prince Derren:''' ''(dying)'' "Penelope.... I love you."
* Prince Derren and Lady Penelope's romance, in the [[ShowWithinAShow]] play that Ryan, Carranya and Rinoa act in on the ship's theatre.
--> '''Prince Derren:''' ''(dying)'' "Penelope.... I love you."
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--> [[spoiler: '''Ryan:''' "Did any of that make sense?"]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Carranya:''' ''(smiling)'' "I guess it did."]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Carranya:''' ''(smiling)'' "I guess it did."]]
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--> [[spoiler: '''Ryan:''' "Did any of that make sense?"]]
sense?"
-->[[spoiler: '''Carranya:''' ''(smiling)'' "I guess it did."]]"
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* Though it's just a [[IrrelevantSidequest small and optional scene]], Ryan's kind advice to a fellow passenger whose girlfriend did not accompany him on the trip - even though [[YourCheatingHeart his own heart is broken]] - certainly counts.
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* Carranya's nineteenth birthday. She's run away from home on a mission of peace, is feeling lost away from the Palace for the first time in her life, but Ryan can still make it a memorable day for her, especially when he chooses [[ChekhovsGift the right gift]] to give her.
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* Carranya's nineteenth birthday. She's run away from home on a mission of peace, is feeling lost away from the Palace for the first time in her life, but Ryan can still make it a memorable day for her, especially when he chooses [[ChekhovsGift the right gift]] to give her.her.
* Ryan's inspirational talk to a depressed Carranya, who [[IJustWantToBeNormal wishes she'd never been born as a princess.]] Though he's respectful, he makes it clear to her that [[ScrewDestiny she isn't fated to be anything she doesn't want to]], and can always take her life into her own hands.
--> [[spoiler: '''Ryan:''' "Did any of that make sense?"]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Carranya:''' ''(smiling)'' "I guess it did."]]
* Ryan's inspirational talk to a depressed Carranya, who [[IJustWantToBeNormal wishes she'd never been born as a princess.]] Though he's respectful, he makes it clear to her that [[ScrewDestiny she isn't fated to be anything she doesn't want to]], and can always take her life into her own hands.
--> [[spoiler: '''Ryan:''' "Did any of that make sense?"]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Carranya:''' ''(smiling)'' "I guess it did."]]
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'''Part One:'''
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--> [[spoiler: '''Anne Lancaster:''' "He's still with me, watching over me and protecting me."]]"]]
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* Carranya's nineteenth birthday. She's run away from home on a mission of peace, is feeling lost away from the Palace for the first time in her life, but Ryan can still make it a memorable day for her, especially when he chooses [[ChekhovsGift the right gift]] to give her.
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* Carranya's nineteenth birthday. She's run away from home on a mission of peace, is feeling lost away from the Palace for the first time in her life, but Ryan can still make it a memorable day for her, especially when he chooses [[ChekhovsGift the right gift]] to give her.
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* Ryan's joy at hearing that Henrik has made it into King's College definitely counts, especially when the two realize that they will truly miss each other once he's gone. [[spoiler: Of course, by the end of the story, Ryan feels betrayed by Henrik's actions during their final battle with Kodenai, and they haven't made it up as of Act II.]]
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* Though Ryan is a little embarrassed by her demonstrativeness, it's hard not to sympathize with Sheila Eramond's [[SoProudOfYou pride at the fine young man her son has become.]]
* The entire encounter between Lavie and her grandmother, ''especially'' the gift Lavie receives - [[spoiler: her late grandfather's cufflinks, a prized family heirloom]] - from her just at the end.
--> [[spoiler: '''Anne Lancaster:''' "When the time comes, Lavie... give them to the man you're going to marry."]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Lavie:''' ''(moved to tears)'' "..Thank you."]]
* Though we never only learn of it from Anne Lancaster's memories, the romance between Lavie's grandparents is equally heartwarming, in an [[GrowOldWithMe old-fashioned way.]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Anne Lancaster:''' "He's still with me, watching over me and protecting me."]]
* Though Ryan is a little embarrassed by her demonstrativeness, it's hard not to sympathize with Sheila Eramond's [[SoProudOfYou pride at the fine young man her son has become.]]
* The entire encounter between Lavie and her grandmother, ''especially'' the gift Lavie receives - [[spoiler: her late grandfather's cufflinks, a prized family heirloom]] - from her just at the end.
--> [[spoiler: '''Anne Lancaster:''' "When the time comes, Lavie... give them to the man you're going to marry."]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Lavie:''' ''(moved to tears)'' "..Thank you."]]
* Though we never only learn of it from Anne Lancaster's memories, the romance between Lavie's grandparents is equally heartwarming, in an [[GrowOldWithMe old-fashioned way.]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Anne Lancaster:''' "He's still with me, watching over me and protecting me."]]
