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* Char fell in love with Ella when she was having a human moment of vulnerability: crying at her mother's funeral. It shows the emphasis on JustTheWayYouAre.
* Whether or not Lucinda earned Ella's forgiveness is up to the reader, but she does make a strong effort after her HeelRealization. She says she can't remove Ella's curse but promises to help her and orders Ella to summon her if she ever needs assistance.
* Despite the fact that Olive annoys him for many reasons, Char graciously dances with her a few times at the ball. He also to no avail tries to tell her that money isn't everything and being royalty doesn't mean you can tax everyone's earnings.
* The entire ending really, but Olive's marriage might slip under the radar. Olive is the only member of the step-family who
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* The entire ending really, but Olive's marriage might slip under the radar. Olive is the only member of the step-family who doesn't act maliciously, her family treats her almost as dismissively as they do Ella, and she legitimately doesn't seem to understand the extent to which she's taking advantage of Ella. Olive ultimately marries a widower who is willing to give her all the attention and mild coddling she wants/needs and he's able to love her for her simple devoted attention -- essentially, getting everything she really wants in life from someone who's able to give it willingly.gets her own version of a happy ending.
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* The entire ending really, but Olive's marriage might slip under the radar. Olive is the only member of the step-family who doesn't act maliciously, her only sin really being so dim that she has to have some kind of disability, and her family treats her almost as dismissively as they do Ella, and she legitimately doesn't seem to understand the extent to which she's taking advantage of Ella. So she manages to come across Olive ultimately marries a widower who is willing to give her all the attention and mild coddling she wants/needs and he's able to love her for her simple devoted attention.attention -- essentially, getting everything she really wants in life from someone who's able to give it willingly.
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* The entire ending really, but Olivia's Olive's marriage might slip under the radar. Olivia Olive is the only member of the step-family who doesn't act maliciously, her only sin really being so dim that she has to have some kind of disability, and her family treats her almost as dismissively as they do Ella. So she manages to come across a widower who is willing to give her all the attention and mild coddling she wants/needs and he's able to love her for her simple devoted attention.
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* The entire ending really, but Olivia's marriage might slip under the radar. Olivia is the only member of the step-family who doesn't act maliciously, her only sin really being so dim that she has to have some kind of disability, and her family treats her almost as dismissively as they do Ella. So she manages to come across a widower who is willing to give her all the attention and mild coddling she wants/needs and he's able to love her for her simple devoted attention.
* The entire ending really, but Olivia's marriage might slip under the radar. Olivia is the only member of the step-family who doesn't act maliciously, her only sin really being so dim that she has to have some kind of disability, and her family treats her almost as dismissively as they do Ella. So she manages to come across a widower who is willing to give her all the attention and mild coddling she wants/needs and he's able to love her for her simple devoted attention.
