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* Anakin and Obi-Wan's relationship is rather tense all things considered. But in spite of their constant disagreements, Anakin still considers Obi-Wan a great mentor and the closest thing he has to a father. Despite their differences, Anakin still considers Obi-Wan an important part of his life and really cares about him.
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* Jar Jar's reaction to seeing Obi-Wan again after a decade is to immediately approach him and shake his hand enthusiastically while telling him he's very glad to see him again with Obi-Wan saying the same back to him. D'awww…
* Anakin and Obi-Wan's relationship is rather tense all things considered. But in spite of their constant disagreements, Anakin still considers Obi-Wan a great mentor and the closest thing he has to a father.Despite Though they their differences, Anakin still considers Obi-Wan an important part of his life and really cares about him.
* Anakin and Obi-Wan's relationship is rather tense all things considered. But in spite of their constant disagreements, Anakin still considers Obi-Wan a great mentor and the closest thing he has to a father.
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** The couple exchange R2 and C-3PO as gifts binding not only themselves, but one of the most iconic duos in film history together.
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** The couple exchange R2 R2-D2 and C-3PO as gifts binding not only themselves, but one of the most iconic duos in film history together.
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* Anakin and Obi-Wan's relationship is rather tense all things considered. But despite their animosities, Anakin still considers Obi-Wan "The closest thing I have to a father." Despite their differences, Anakin still considers Obi-Wan an important part of his life.
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* Anakin and Obi-Wan's relationship is rather tense all things considered. But despite in spite of their animosities, constant disagreements, Anakin still considers Obi-Wan "The a great mentor and the closest thing I have he has to a father." father. Despite their differences, Anakin still considers Obi-Wan an important part of his life.life and really cares about him.
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* Even if he is understandingly scared that his former slave boy has turned into something as powerful as a Jedi, Watto seems genuinely happy to see Anakin again, almost like a crusty but funny uncle you don't see very much. He comments on how "Annie" has grown, makes a move to hug him, and doesn't show a grudge towards Qui-Gon Jinn for fixing their bet. Watto even offers to let them stay and gives them the contact information for Shmi's new husband.
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* Even if he is understandingly scared that his former slave boy has turned into something as powerful as a Jedi, Watto seems genuinely happy to see Anakin again, almost like a crusty but funny uncle you don't see very much. He comments on how "Annie" "Ani" has grown, makes a move to hug him, and doesn't show a grudge towards Qui-Gon Jinn for fixing their bet. Watto even offers to let them stay and gives them the contact information for Shmi's new husband.
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** The couple exchange R2 and 3PO as gifts binding not only themselves, but one of the most iconic duos in film history together.
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** The couple exchange R2 and 3PO C-3PO as gifts binding not only themselves, but one of the most iconic duos in film history together.
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** In a deleted scene with Mace and Obi-Wan talking about Kamino, Mace gives advice to Obi-Wan to have more faith in his apprentice. If the war never happen Mace and Anakin might have become good friends.
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** In a deleted scene with Mace and Obi-Wan talking about Kamino, Mace gives advice to Obi-Wan to have more faith in his apprentice. If the war had never happen happened Mace and Anakin might have become good friends.
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** In some scenes Mace is shown to admire Anakin's skills as seen in Obi-Wan conversation with Mace and Yoda.
** In a deleted scene with Mace and Obi-Wan talking about Kamino, Mace gives advice to Obi-Wan to have more faith in his apprentice. If the war never happen Mace and Anakin might have become good friends.
** In a deleted scene with Mace and Obi-Wan talking about Kamino, Mace gives advice to Obi-Wan to have more faith in his apprentice. If the war never happen Mace and Anakin might have become good friends.
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** '''Yoda''': "Truly wonderful, the mind of a child is."
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[[caption-width-right:350:Even if this place if full of sand, [[Memes/AttackOfTheClones which Anakin loathes]], his love for his dame won't get blown out or buried by sand.]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:Even if this place if is full of sand, [[Memes/AttackOfTheClones which Anakin loathes]], his love for his dame won't get blown out or buried by sand.]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:Even if this place if full of sand, [[Memes/AttackOfTheClones which Anakin loathes]], his love for his dame won't get blown out or buried by sand.]]
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* Mace Windu is also never anything but supportive to Anakin. He gives him advice before his first solo assignment and he and Yoda express faith that he'll be able to complete it. It's nice to see that although he's strict, he's by no means harsh or disapproving, as he's sometimes painted.
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** Obi-Wan being a good sport about Yoda's "Lost a planet, Master Obi-Wan has" joke.
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** While he was paid in credits, the other thing Jango requested was a clone, not altered at all, not docile, not growth accelerated. That was Boba.
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** While he was paid in credits, the other thing Jango requested was a clone, not altered at all, not docile, not growth accelerated. That was clone is Boba.
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** His first reaction to seeing Obi-Wan? "Boba, get on board! (the ''Slave 1'')"
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** While he was paid in credits, the other thing Jango requested was a clone, not altered at all, not docile, not growth accelerated. That was Boba.
** His first reaction to seeing Obi-Wan? "Boba, [[PapaWolf get onboard! board!]] (the ''Slave 1'')"
** His first reaction to seeing Obi-Wan? "Boba, [[PapaWolf get on
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**His first reaction to seeing Obi-Wan? "Boba, get on board! (the ''Slave 1'')"
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** ''Yoda''': "Truly wonderful, the mind of a child is."
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** ''Yoda''': '''Yoda''': "Truly wonderful, the mind of a child is."
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** -->'''Yoda''': "Truly wonderful, the mind of a child is."
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** -->'''Yoda''': ''Yoda''': "Truly wonderful, the mind of a child is."
