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** They probably could use other pony races if the situation called for it, it's just that Pegasi are the easiest to get a hold of without suspicion since [[ReleasedToElsewhere they're being exiled anyway.]]
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** They probably could use other pony races if the situation called for it, it's just that Pegasi are the easiest to get a hold of without suspicion since [[ReleasedToElsewhere they're being exiled anyway.]]]]
*** Not to mention that Cloudsdale, being built on clouds, doesn't have too many Unicorns or Earth Ponies -- making the rare ones "disappear" would draw attention.
*** Not to mention that Cloudsdale, being built on clouds, doesn't have too many Unicorns or Earth Ponies -- making the rare ones "disappear" would draw attention.
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* Do they have to use living pegasus foals to do the deed? Can't they just use ones that are already dead? For that matter, dose it have to be a pegasus? What about a unicorn or Earth Pony?
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* Do they have to use living pegasus foals to do the deed? Can't they just use ones that are already dead? For that matter, dose it have to be a pegasus? Pegasus? What about a unicorn Unicorn or Earth Pony?
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*** They actually explain that extracting colors while the filly is under pain and stress yields the best results.
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*** They actually explain that extracting colors while the filly is under pain and stress yields the best results.
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** It's a grimdark fic for the sake of grimdark. [[MST3KMantra Don't think about it too much]].
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** It's a grimdark GrimDark fic for the sake of grimdark. [[MST3KMantra Don't think about it too much]].much]].
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** It's a grimdark fic for the sake of grimdark. [[MST3KMantra Don't think about it too much]].
** It's a grimdark fic for the sake of grimdark. [[MST3KMantra Don't think about it too much]].
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* Do they have to use living pegasus foals to do the deed? Can't they just use ones that all are already dead? For that matter, dose it have to be a pegasus? What about a unicorn or Earth Pony?
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