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12. When it all ends,\\
to:
12. When it all everything ends,\\
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--> -- @/SarothCyngus
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--> -- @/SarothCyngus@/SarothCyngus
Well, lo and behold\\
''The Days of Grays'' in haiku\\
For your amusement.
1. All fades to gray\\
Desolate orchestral track\\
Dark introduction.
2. Witch hunt is coming\\
I must die along with her\\
It was all my fault.
3. Last Amazing Grays\\
In the eyes of every child\\
I see the future.
4. Voyage to the States\\
We made it, now let's settle\\
Happy ending at last.
5. I stand defeated\\
{{Despair Event Horizon}}\\
Can't control my life.
6. Soldiers sent to die\\
Dancing on the borderline\\
Screw the government.
7. It's a breakup song\\
Peel off the dead skin, my tears\\
Don't mean anything.
8. Caleb has returned\\
And Juliet won't stand for this\\
So she will kill him.
9. Need her poison kiss\\
Dreams can't heal a broken heart\\
Is she a vampire?
10. Wrongfully accused\\
I'll live my last as if the\\
World wasn't ending.
11. The truth is out there\\
The world's stranger than fiction\\
I want to believe.
12. When it all ends,\\
we dive into the darkness\\
All fades to gray.
13. What's this? Bonus tracks?\\
Let's have some sex in the dark\\
Stay with me somehow.
14. Nothing more to say\\
What once was there is now dead\\
I'm doomed to this death.
15. Keeper of all keys\\
In my eyes you're a giant\\
I'll guard you always.
Now to take my leave\\
''The Days of Grays'' is over\\
I wonder what's next?
--> -- @/TheDeadSkin
Well, lo and behold\\
''The Days of Grays'' in haiku\\
For your amusement.
1. All fades to gray\\
Desolate orchestral track\\
Dark introduction.
2. Witch hunt is coming\\
I must die along with her\\
It was all my fault.
3. Last Amazing Grays\\
In the eyes of every child\\
I see the future.
4. Voyage to the States\\
We made it, now let's settle\\
Happy ending at last.
5. I stand defeated\\
{{Despair Event Horizon}}\\
Can't control my life.
6. Soldiers sent to die\\
Dancing on the borderline\\
Screw the government.
7. It's a breakup song\\
Peel off the dead skin, my tears\\
Don't mean anything.
8. Caleb has returned\\
And Juliet won't stand for this\\
So she will kill him.
9. Need her poison kiss\\
Dreams can't heal a broken heart\\
Is she a vampire?
10. Wrongfully accused\\
I'll live my last as if the\\
World wasn't ending.
11. The truth is out there\\
The world's stranger than fiction\\
I want to believe.
12. When it all ends,\\
we dive into the darkness\\
All fades to gray.
13. What's this? Bonus tracks?\\
Let's have some sex in the dark\\
Stay with me somehow.
14. Nothing more to say\\
What once was there is now dead\\
I'm doomed to this death.
15. Keeper of all keys\\
In my eyes you're a giant\\
I'll guard you always.
Now to take my leave\\
''The Days of Grays'' is over\\
I wonder what's next?
--> -- @/TheDeadSkin
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3. False News Travals Fast\\
to:
3. False News Travals Travels Fast\\
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Overhunt, [[BigBadassWolf wolves]] will eat you\\
to:
Overhunt, [[BigBadassWolf wolves]] wolves will eat you\\
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[[OrIsIt I'm blinded no more?]]
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--> --SarothCyngus
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--> --SarothCyngus-- @/SarothCyngus
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The Power of One\\
to:
I shall do the same\\
For the album of ''Silence''\\
Summed up in Haiku.
1. Everything it has to give\\
The most beautiful music\\
Silence is golden.
2. In "Weballergy"\\
The lies cover up the truth.\\
You think you have it now?
3. False News Travals Fast\\
Life wrecked by the haunting lies\\
And i'm still your man.
4. {{Stalker with a crush}}\\
In "The End of This Chapter"\\
Shows his true colors.
5. Live with the {{Black Sheep}}\\
You can never escape, now.\\
Is this a [[RapeAsDrama rape]] song?
6. The Land of the Free\\
Is a true utopia\\
But we can't reach it.
7. A cheating girlfriend\\
And a {{dark and troubled past}}\\
Culminate in this.
8. Epic war of love\\
Sun of San Sebastian\\
The girl dies, I live.
9. Peer pressure and death\\
Cause you to [[TitleDrop sing in silence]]\\
Ends with suicide.
10. Ah, Revontulet!\\
''Silence's'' instrumental\\
Nothing but awesome.
11. Epic {{Tear Jerker}}\\
Tallulah, the {{breakup song}}\\
Love is cruel sometimes.
12. The wolf and raven\\
Will teach you a thing or two\\
About servitude.
13. The Power of One\\
For the album of ''Silence''\\
Summed up in Haiku.
1. Everything it has to give\\
The most beautiful music\\
Silence is golden.
2. In "Weballergy"\\
The lies cover up the truth.\\
You think you have it now?
3. False News Travals Fast\\
Life wrecked by the haunting lies\\
And i'm still your man.
4. {{Stalker with a crush}}\\
In "The End of This Chapter"\\
Shows his true colors.
5. Live with the {{Black Sheep}}\\
You can never escape, now.\\
Is this a [[RapeAsDrama rape]] song?
6. The Land of the Free\\
Is a true utopia\\
But we can't reach it.
7. A cheating girlfriend\\
And a {{dark and troubled past}}\\
Culminate in this.
8. Epic war of love\\
Sun of San Sebastian\\
The girl dies, I live.
9. Peer pressure and death\\
Cause you to [[TitleDrop sing in silence]]\\
Ends with suicide.
10. Ah, Revontulet!\\
''Silence's'' instrumental\\
Nothing but awesome.
11. Epic {{Tear Jerker}}\\
Tallulah, the {{breakup song}}\\
Love is cruel sometimes.
12. The wolf and raven\\
Will teach you a thing or two\\
About servitude.
13. The Power of One\\
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I am patriot.\\
You have my land, my soul.\\
You have all I had.\\
Caleb's insane mind.\\
Murdered his lecherous wife.\\
Stage set for battle.
From Kemi, Finland.\\
Power metal. Greatest band ever.\\
Sonata really rules.
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From Kemi, Finland.
Power metal. Greatest band ever.
Power metal. Greatest band ever.
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From Kemi,
Power metal. Greatest band ever.\\
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--> -- @/BoundByTheMoon
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--> -- @/BoundByTheMoon@/BoundByTheMoon
The Power of One\\
A man fights the entire world.\\
This is an epic song.\\
I am patriot.\\
You have my land, my soul.\\
You have all I had.\\
Caleb's insane mind.\\
Murdered his lecherous wife.\\
Stage set for battle.
From Kemi, Finland.
Power metal. Greatest band ever.
Sonata really rules.
--> --SarothCyngus
The Power of One\\
A man fights the entire world.\\
This is an epic song.\\
I am patriot.\\
You have my land, my soul.\\
You have all I had.\\
Caleb's insane mind.\\
Murdered his lecherous wife.\\
Stage set for battle.
From Kemi, Finland.
Power metal. Greatest band ever.
Sonata really rules.
--> --SarothCyngus
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Life sucks so I write stories\\
to:
Life sucks so [[ReclusiveArtist I write stories\\stories]]\\
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I'm blinded no more?
to:
[[OrIsIt I'm blinded no more?
more?]]
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Overhunt, wolves will eat you\\
Don't mess with nature
Don't mess with nature
to:
Overhunt, wolves [[BigBadassWolf wolves]] will eat you\\
[[GreenAesop Don't mess withnature
nature]]
[[GreenAesop Don't mess with
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Stalker with a crush becomes\\
Violent and jealous
Violent and jealous
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[[{{Yandere}} Violent and
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And reverse-Pinocchio\\
Overlong title
Overlong title
to:
And reverse-Pinocchio\\
[[PuppetPermutation reverse-Pinocchio]]\\
[[LongTitle Overlongtitle
title]]
[[LongTitle Overlong
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Ends with suicide?
to:
[[DrivenToSuicide Ends with suicide?
suicide?]]
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Even I go "Aww..."
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[[TearJerker Even I go "Aww..."
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