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-->''I could return to a life full of comfort, study, and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers delicious home-cooked dinners]]''.
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-->''I could return to a life full of comfort, study, and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers delicious home-cooked dinners]]''.dinners''.
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'''Index''':And why would we believe that?\\
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** Stephen has some pretty snarky dialogue here and there.
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** Stephen in general has some pretty snarky funny dialogue here and there.
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->'''Stephen''': Whoa, easy there. I’m on your side.\\
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-->"I don't believe [[Myth/ClassicalMythology Hestia]] exists any more than I believe the UsefulNotes/FlyingSpaghettiMonster exists."
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-->"I don't believe [[Myth/ClassicalMythology Hestia]] exists any more than I believe the UsefulNotes/FlyingSpaghettiMonster exists.""
* This exchange from Chapter 13:
->'''Stephen''': Whoa, easy there. I’m on your side.\\
'''Index''':And why would we believe that?\\
'''Stephen''': ''*Opens mouth, shuts it, frowns*'' Wait. Why would you believe that? I really should have planned this out better.
**Stephen has some pretty snarky dialogue here and there.
* This exchange from Chapter 13:
->'''Stephen''': Whoa, easy there. I’m on your side.\\
'''Index''':And why would we believe that?\\
'''Stephen''': ''*Opens mouth, shuts it, frowns*'' Wait. Why would you believe that? I really should have planned this out better.
**Stephen has some pretty snarky dialogue here and there.
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-->"I don't believe [[Myth/ClassicalMythology Hestia]] exists any more than I believe the [[UsefulNotes/FlyingSpaghettiMonster Flying Spaghetti Monster]] exists."
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-->"I don't believe [[Myth/ClassicalMythology Hestia]] exists any more than I believe the [[UsefulNotes/FlyingSpaghettiMonster Flying Spaghetti Monster]] UsefulNotes/FlyingSpaghettiMonster exists."
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-->"I don't believe [[ClassicalMythology Hestia]] exists any more than I believe the [[UsefulNotes/FlyingSpaghettiMonster Flying Spaghetti Monster]] exists."
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-->"I don't believe [[ClassicalMythology [[Myth/ClassicalMythology Hestia]] exists any more than I believe the [[UsefulNotes/FlyingSpaghettiMonster Flying Spaghetti Monster]] exists."
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* Index's first meeting with Touma. Pretty much all of it.
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* Index's first meeting with Touma. Pretty much all of it.it.
* The following gems from Chapter 7:
** Touma's ignorance of Christian denominations and Index's attempt to explain them.
-->After I spend about half an hour attempting to elucidate to Touma exactly how the (admittedly vast and often confusing) variety of Christian denominations are organized, we both decide that the whole thing is rather more complicated than it ought to be, and look for a different subject to discuss.
** Index explaining the importance of materials:
-->"...no good magician would be caught dead without a very large bundle of telephone cables."
** And Index on other gods:
-->"I don't believe [[ClassicalMythology Hestia]] exists any more than I believe the [[UsefulNotes/FlyingSpaghettiMonster Flying Spaghetti Monster]] exists."
* The following gems from Chapter 7:
** Touma's ignorance of Christian denominations and Index's attempt to explain them.
-->After I spend about half an hour attempting to elucidate to Touma exactly how the (admittedly vast and often confusing) variety of Christian denominations are organized, we both decide that the whole thing is rather more complicated than it ought to be, and look for a different subject to discuss.
** Index explaining the importance of materials:
-->"...no good magician would be caught dead without a very large bundle of telephone cables."
** And Index on other gods:
-->"I don't believe [[ClassicalMythology Hestia]] exists any more than I believe the [[UsefulNotes/FlyingSpaghettiMonster Flying Spaghetti Monster]] exists."
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Even though this series [[FixFic gets rid of the absurd plot elements]], it doesn't get rid of the humor.
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* Saten's introduction, as noted in the main page under EstablishingCharacterMoment. And then we learn she even has ''trading cards'' of Mikoto.
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* Saten's introduction, as noted in the main page under EstablishingCharacterMoment. And then we learn she even has ''trading cards'' of Mikoto.Mikoto.
* Index's first meeting with Touma. Pretty much all of it.
* Index's first meeting with Touma. Pretty much all of it.
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Even though this series [[FixFic gets rid of absurd plot elements]], it doesn't get rid of the humor.
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Even though this series [[FixFic gets rid of absurd plot elements]], it doesn't get rid of all the humor.
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Even though this series gets rid of absurd plot elements from the original, it doesn't get rid of all the humor.
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Even though this series [[FixFic gets rid of absurd plot elements from the original, elements]], it doesn't get rid of all the humor.
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!!''In Memoriam''
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!!General
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!!''In Memoriam''
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* Touma's [[FirstPersonSmartass hilariously snarky]] narration.
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* [[TheGadfly Troll]][[CharacterizationTags !]]Uiharu.
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* [[TheGadfly Troll]][[CharacterizationTags !]]Uiharu.
!]]Uiharu.
*Saten is a major Mikoto fangirl, and Saten's introduction, as noted in the main page under EstablishingCharacterMoment. And then we learn she even has ''trading cards'' of her.Mikoto.
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* [[TheGadfly Troll]][[CharacterizationTags !Uiharu]].
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* [[TheGadfly Troll]][[CharacterizationTags !Uiharu]].!]]Uiharu.
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* Despite her {{Adaptational Badass}}ery, Index is still a BigEater. For example, when she thinks about calling off her escape attempt, she thinks that she "could return to a life full of comfort, study, and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers delicious home-cooked dinners]]".
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* Despite her {{Adaptational Badass}}ery, Index is still a BigEater. For example, when she thinks about calling off her escape attempt, she thinks that she "could attempt:
-->''I could return to a life full of comfort, study, and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers delicious home-cookeddinners]]".dinners]]''.
-->''I could return to a life full of comfort, study, and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers delicious home-cooked
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That is more than enough to convince me that the bed in question is not suitable for use by either of us girls"
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That is more than enough to convince me that the bed in question is not suitable for use by either of us girls"girls
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!!''In Memoriam''
* This gem during Touma's first meeting with Mikoto.
-->"You're a Level 5," he says with a shrug. "You're all some kind of batshit crazy."\\
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"Aw, now that's just mean." I grin at him, but mentally tick off all the other Level 5's I've met or heard about.'' Accelerator...Shokuhou...Meltdown...freaking Sogiita...holy crap, he's right.''
* Despite her {{Adaptational Badass}}ery, Index is still a BigEater. For example, when she thinks about calling off her escape attempt, she thinks that she "could return to a life full of comfort, study, and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers delicious home-cooked dinners]]".
* The reason Maika doesn't want anyone using her brothers bed. As narrated by Index:
-->"Don't you know what he ''does'' in that bed?" she asks, horrified.\\
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"...no?"\\
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She narrows her eyes, and looks around, as if to check whether her brother has suddenly returned. "He ''[[ToiletHumour farts]]''," she whispers secretively. "A ''lot''."\\
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That is more than enough to convince me that the bed in question is not suitable for use by either of us girls"
* [[TheGadfly Troll]][[CharacterizationTags !Uiharu]].
* This gem during Touma's first meeting with Mikoto.
-->"You're a Level 5," he says with a shrug. "You're all some kind of batshit crazy."\\
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"Aw, now that's just mean." I grin at him, but mentally tick off all the other Level 5's I've met or heard about.'' Accelerator...Shokuhou...Meltdown...freaking Sogiita...holy crap, he's right.''
* Despite her {{Adaptational Badass}}ery, Index is still a BigEater. For example, when she thinks about calling off her escape attempt, she thinks that she "could return to a life full of comfort, study, and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers delicious home-cooked dinners]]".
* The reason Maika doesn't want anyone using her brothers bed. As narrated by Index:
-->"Don't you know what he ''does'' in that bed?" she asks, horrified.\\
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"...no?"\\
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She narrows her eyes, and looks around, as if to check whether her brother has suddenly returned. "He ''[[ToiletHumour farts]]''," she whispers secretively. "A ''lot''."\\
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That is more than enough to convince me that the bed in question is not suitable for use by either of us girls"
* [[TheGadfly Troll]][[CharacterizationTags !Uiharu]].
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* Saten is a major Mikoto fangirl, and even has ''trading cards'' of her.
