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* The reveal that (for all the times Vuffi Rea refers to Lando as Master against his wishes) the droid refused to call Whett Master when they were together, claiming it wasn't in his programming to do so, helping emphasize his distaste for his previous owner and their mission. PolitenessJudo indeed.
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* The reveal that (for all the times Vuffi Rea Raa refers to Lando as Master against his wishes) the droid refused to call Whett Master when they were together, claiming it wasn't in his programming to do so, helping emphasize his distaste for his previous owner and their mission. PolitenessJudo indeed.
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* Lando playing sababacc with the Oswaft in the third book (winning tens of millions in valuable gems), especially with the BaitAndSwitch buildup to it at the end of the previous chapter.
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* Lando playing sababacc sabacc with the Oswaft in the third book (winning tens of millions in valuable gems), especially with the BaitAndSwitch buildup to it at the end of the previous chapter.
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--> '''Oswaft:''' The three of you are to appear before [[The Elders]] at once in order to explain your impertinence and face their mighty judgment.
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--> '''Oswaft:''' '''Oswaft guard:''' The three of you are to appear before [[The Elders]] [The Elders] at once in order to explain your impertinence and face their mighty judgment.
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Fixing three spelling errors I made.
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* When Osuno Whett says that there are a few billion Oswaft out there Shanga snarks two the words "few" and "billion" don't belong together.
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* When Osuno Whett says that there are a few billion Oswaft out there Shanga snarks two how the words "few" and "billion" don't belong together.
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* Vuffi Raa suggests that Lando seek information somewhere filled with information about the ancient, historic and valuable. Lando then jumps up, cuts him off with a thanks and charges into the nearby bar (with a no droids sign) as Vuffi protests he wasn't going to say the library.
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* Vuffi Raa suggests that Lando seek information somewhere filled with information about the ancient, historic and valuable. Lando then jumps up, cuts him off with a thanks and charges into the nearby bar (with a no droids sign) as Vuffi protests he wasn't was going to say the library.
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* The last lines of the story, Vuffi calling Lando b his first name instead of Master and wanting to know why he never asked that before (which of course he did).
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* The last lines of the story, Vuffi calling Lando b by his first name instead of Master and wanting to know why he never asked that before (which of course he did).
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Changed line(s) 4 (click to see context) from:
* Lando playing sababacc with the Oswaft in the third book, especially with the BaitAndSwitch buildup to it at the end of the previous chapter.
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* Shanga announcing his intention to meet with Gepta about one of his men being in the brig by saying "I have to see a toad about a man."
* When Osuno Whett says that there are a few billion Oswaft out there Shanga snarks two the words "few" and "billion" don't belong together.
* Lando playing sababacc with the Oswaft in the thirdbook, book (winning tens of millions in valuable gems), especially with the BaitAndSwitch buildup to it at the end of the previous chapter.
* When Osuno Whett says that there are a few billion Oswaft out there Shanga snarks two the words "few" and "billion" don't belong together.
* Lando playing sababacc with the Oswaft in the third
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* A Rafa system droid haters anti-droid rant is cut short by the scream of pain he makes after being stupid enough to kick a very solid droid.
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* A Rafa system droid haters anti-droid rant is cut short by the scream of pain he makes after being stupid enough to kick a very solid droid.droid.
* The reveal that (for all the times Vuffi Rea refers to Lando as Master against his wishes) the droid refused to call Whett Master when they were together, claiming it wasn't in his programming to do so, helping emphasize his distaste for his previous owner and their mission. PolitenessJudo indeed.
* The last lines of the story, Vuffi calling Lando b his first name instead of Master and wanting to know why he never asked that before (which of course he did).
* The reveal that (for all the times Vuffi Rea refers to Lando as Master against his wishes) the droid refused to call Whett Master when they were together, claiming it wasn't in his programming to do so, helping emphasize his distaste for his previous owner and their mission. PolitenessJudo indeed.
* The last lines of the story, Vuffi calling Lando b his first name instead of Master and wanting to know why he never asked that before (which of course he did).
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* Waywa Fybot asking for a centipede as he wakes up.
* Gepta's TranquilFury every time he has to talk with Klyn Shanga.
* Lando playing sababacc with the Oswaft (and later the StarfishRobot's and Klyn Shanga) in the third book.
* Gepta's TranquilFury every time he has to talk with Klyn Shanga.
* Lando playing sababacc with the Oswaft (and later the StarfishRobot's and Klyn Shanga) in the third book.
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* Avian alien Waywa Fybot asking his mother for a centipede as he wakes up after being knocked up.
* Gepta's TranquilFury every time he has to talk with KlynShanga.
Shanga and deal with the man mocking his insincerity.
* Lando playing sababacc with the Oswaft(and later the StarfishRobot's and Klyn Shanga) in the third book.book, especially with the BaitAndSwitch buildup to it at the end of the previous chapter.
--> '''Oswaft:''' The three of you are to appear before [[The Elders]] at once in order to explain your impertinence and face their mighty judgment.
--> '''Lando:''' [[GilliganCut SABACC!]]
--> '''Elder Sen:''' Truly it is amazing captainmasterlandocarlissian, Amazing,you cannot even see the cards but yet you have won hand after hand under fair and impartial circumstances. I abase myself to your skill and intellect.
* Gepta's TranquilFury every time he has to talk with Klyn
* Lando playing sababacc with the Oswaft
--> '''Oswaft:''' The three of you are to appear before [[The Elders]] at once in order to explain your impertinence and face their mighty judgment.
--> '''Lando:''' [[GilliganCut SABACC!]]
--> '''Elder Sen:''' Truly it is amazing captainmasterlandocarlissian, Amazing,you cannot even see the cards but yet you have won hand after hand under fair and impartial circumstances. I abase myself to your skill and intellect.
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* Lando playing sababacc with the Oswaft (and later the StarfishRobot's and Klyn Shanga) in the third book.
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* Lando playing sababacc with the Oswaft (and later the StarfishRobot's and Klyn Shanga) in the third book.book.
* Vuffi Raa suggests that Lando seek information somewhere filled with information about the ancient, historic and valuable. Lando then jumps up, cuts him off with a thanks and charges into the nearby bar (with a no droids sign) as Vuffi protests he wasn't going to say the library.
* A Rafa system droid haters anti-droid rant is cut short by the scream of pain he makes after being stupid enough to kick a very solid droid.
* Vuffi Raa suggests that Lando seek information somewhere filled with information about the ancient, historic and valuable. Lando then jumps up, cuts him off with a thanks and charges into the nearby bar (with a no droids sign) as Vuffi protests he wasn't going to say the library.
* A Rafa system droid haters anti-droid rant is cut short by the scream of pain he makes after being stupid enough to kick a very solid droid.
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* The time Lando enters the ancient vault containing the Mindharp of Sharu, a cavernous space with polished marble floors meant especially to make people take small, careful steps and be even more impressed with the grandeur of the place. Lando's response is to take a running start and slide on the floor. Bonus points for yelling "Wheee!"
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* The time Lando enters the ancient vault containing the Mindharp of Sharu, a cavernous space with polished marble floors meant especially to make people take small, careful steps and be even more impressed with the grandeur of the place. Lando's response is to take a running start and slide on the floor. Bonus points for yelling "Wheee!""Wheee!"
* Waywa Fybot asking for a centipede as he wakes up.
* Gepta's TranquilFury every time he has to talk with Klyn Shanga.
* Lando playing sababacc with the Oswaft (and later the StarfishRobot's and Klyn Shanga) in the third book.
* Waywa Fybot asking for a centipede as he wakes up.
* Gepta's TranquilFury every time he has to talk with Klyn Shanga.
* Lando playing sababacc with the Oswaft (and later the StarfishRobot's and Klyn Shanga) in the third book.
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* The time Lando enters the ancient vault containing the Mindharp of Sharu, a cavernous space with polished marble floors meant especially to make people take small, careful steps and be even more impressed with the grandeur of the place. Lando's response is to take a running start and slide on the floor. Bonus points for yelling "Wheee!"