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* Remeber Nabeh, the goofy guy who did the ''Bawk bawk bawk'' imitation a little ''too'' long? Hard to forget him.
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* Remeber Remember Nabeh, the goofy guy who did the ''Bawk bawk bawk'' imitation a little ''too'' long? Hard to forget him.
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* "Hey. [[PreMortemOneLiner How ya doin'?]]" *winkBANG*
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* "Hey. [[PreMortemOneLiner How ya doin'?]]" doin'?]] Hmm?" *winkBANG*
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* After Daniel is brought to the cover stones, he immediately begins tearing apart and fixing the shoddy translation of the text someone already did on the blackboard.
-->'''Daniel:''' Well the translation of the outer text is... Wrong... Must've used Budge. I don't know why they keep reprinting his books... [''starts erasing and writing new translations'']
-->'''Gary Meyers:''' Hey, you- We've used every known translation- What are you-
-->'''Daniel:'''[''Not paying attention''] It's not "coffin"... [''strikes several more lines''] "For all time"... Who the hell translated this?
-->[''Everyone looks at Gary Meyers'']
-->'''Gary:''' Well, er uh um I-I did.
-->'''Daniel:''' Well the translation of the outer text is... Wrong... Must've used Budge. I don't know why they keep reprinting his books... [''starts erasing and writing new translations'']
-->'''Gary Meyers:''' Hey, you- We've used every known translation- What are you-
-->'''Daniel:'''[''Not paying attention''] It's not "coffin"... [''strikes several more lines''] "For all time"... Who the hell translated this?
-->[''Everyone looks at Gary Meyers'']
-->'''Gary:''' Well, er uh um I-I did.
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--> '''Daniel''': HELLLLPPP MEEEEE! OHHHHHH! ([[CrowningMusicOfAwesome as the theme song blares at full volume.]])
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--> '''Daniel''': HELLLLPPP MEEEEE! OHHHHHH! ([[CrowningMusicOfAwesome ([[SugarWiki/AwesomeMusic as the theme song blares at full volume.]])
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* Skaara imitating O'Neil smoking the cigarette. He gets a look of utter panic across his face as he starts coughing, frantically shouts as he stomps out the cigarette on the floor, and shoots O'Neil a look of bewildered disgust.
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* Skaara imitating O'Neil smoking the cigarette. He gets a look of utter panic across his face as he starts coughing, frantically shouts as he stomps out the cigarette on the floor, and shoots O'Neil a look of bewildered disgust.disgust.
** It's even better the way O'Neil baits Skaara by inhaling the smoke rather than breathing it out, knowing that Skaara wouldn't be able to do the same.
** It's even better the way O'Neil baits Skaara by inhaling the smoke rather than breathing it out, knowing that Skaara wouldn't be able to do the same.
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* "He's inviting us to go with him." "How do you know that?" "Because he's *gestures* inviting us to go with him."
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* "He's inviting us to go with him." "How do you know that?" "Because he's *gestures* (''*gestures*'') inviting us to go with him."
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* Skaara imitating O'Neil smoking the cigarette: he gets a look of utter panic across his face as he starts coughing, he frantically stomps out the cigarette on the floor while shouting, and shoots O'Neil a look of bewildered disgust.
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* Skaara imitating O'Neil smoking the cigarette: he cigarette. He gets a look of utter panic across his face as he starts coughing, he frantically shouts as he stomps out the cigarette on the floor while shouting, floor, and shoots O'Neil a look of bewildered disgust.
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* Whether or not you see what's coming, there's the moment where both Jackson and O'Neil look at [[ChekhovsGun the teleporter, the controller on Anubis, and O'Neil's nuke,]] and both say "I've got an idea."
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* Whether or not you see what's coming, there's the moment where both Jackson and O'Neil look at [[ChekhovsGun the teleporter, the controller on Anubis, and O'Neil's nuke,]] and both say "I've got an idea.""
* Skaara imitating O'Neil smoking the cigarette: he gets a look of utter panic across his face as he starts coughing, he frantically stomps out the cigarette on the floor while shouting, and shoots O'Neil a look of bewildered disgust.
* Skaara imitating O'Neil smoking the cigarette: he gets a look of utter panic across his face as he starts coughing, he frantically stomps out the cigarette on the floor while shouting, and shoots O'Neil a look of bewildered disgust.
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--> '''Kakalsky''': ...Cover me.
--> '''Ferretti''': COVER YOU?! KAKALSKY!
--> '''Ferretti''': COVER YOU?! KAKALSKY!
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--> '''Kakalsky''': ...'''Kawalsky''': ...Cover me.
--> '''Ferretti''': COVER YOU?!KAKALSKY!KAWALSKY!
--> '''Ferretti''': COVER YOU?!
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* After drinking an offering, Daniel offers the village chief Kasuf a 5th Avenue bar in return; Kasuf finds it quite delicious.
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* After drinking an offering, Daniel offers the village chief Kasuf a 5th Avenue bar in return; Kasuf finds it quite delicious.delicious.
* Whether or not you see what's coming, there's the moment where both Jackson and O'Neil look at [[ChekhovsGun the teleporter, the controller on Anubis, and O'Neil's nuke,]] and both say "I've got an idea."
* Whether or not you see what's coming, there's the moment where both Jackson and O'Neil look at [[ChekhovsGun the teleporter, the controller on Anubis, and O'Neil's nuke,]] and both say "I've got an idea."
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* After drinking an offering, Daniel offers the village chief a 5th Avenue bar in return; the chief finds it quite delicious.
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* After drinking an offering, Daniel offers the village chief Kasuf a 5th Avenue bar in return; the chief Kasuf finds it quite delicious.
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* "Hey. [[PreMortemOneLiner How ya doin'?]]" *winkBANG*
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* "Hey. [[PreMortemOneLiner How ya doin'?]]" *winkBANG**winkBANG*
* After drinking an offering, Daniel offers the village chief a 5th Avenue bar in return; the chief finds it quite delicious.
* After drinking an offering, Daniel offers the village chief a 5th Avenue bar in return; the chief finds it quite delicious.
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--> '''Daniel''': HELLLLPPP MEEEEE! OHHHHHH! ([[CrowningMusicOfAwesome As the theme song blares at full volume.]])
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--> '''Daniel''': HELLLLPPP MEEEEE! OHHHHHH! ([[CrowningMusicOfAwesome As as the theme song blares at full volume.]])
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* "Hey. [[PreMortemOneLiner How ya doin'?]]" *winkwinkBANG*
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* "Hey. [[PreMortemOneLiner How ya doin'?]]" *winkwinkBANG**winkBANG*
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--> '''Daniel''': HELLLLPPP MEEEEE! OHHHHHH!
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--> '''Daniel''': HELLLLPPP MEEEEE! OHHHHHH!OHHHHHH! ([[CrowningMusicOfAwesome As the theme song blares at full volume.]])
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* "Hey. How ya doin'?"
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* "Hey. [[PreMortemOneLiner How ya doin'?"doin'?]]" *winkwinkBANG*
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--> '''Ferretti''': COVER YOU?! KAKALSKY!
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--> '''Ferretti''': COVER YOU?! KAKALSKY!KAKALSKY!
* "Hey. How ya doin'?"
* "Hey. How ya doin'?"
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* It's a little like dark humor but, when Kawalsky, Ferretti and the kids ar pinned down. Kawalsky goes off trying to be heroic, and Ferretti is ''less than pleased''.
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* It's a little like dark humor but, when Kawalsky, Ferretti and the kids ar are pinned down. Kawalsky goes off trying to be heroic, and Ferretti is ''less than pleased''.
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* Remeber Nabeh, the goofy guy who did the ''Bawk bawk bawk'' imitation a little ''too'' long? Hard to forget him.
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* Remeber Nabeh, the goofy guy who did the ''Bawk bawk bawk'' imitation a little ''too'' long? Hard to forget him.him.
* It's a little like dark humor but, when Kawalsky, Ferretti and the kids ar pinned down. Kawalsky goes off trying to be heroic, and Ferretti is ''less than pleased''.
--> '''Ferretti''': Well what are we gonna do!?
--> '''Kakalsky''': ...Cover me.
--> '''Ferretti''': COVER YOU?! KAKALSKY!
* It's a little like dark humor but, when Kawalsky, Ferretti and the kids ar pinned down. Kawalsky goes off trying to be heroic, and Ferretti is ''less than pleased''.
--> '''Ferretti''': Well what are we gonna do!?
--> '''Kakalsky''': ...Cover me.
--> '''Ferretti''': COVER YOU?! KAKALSKY!
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-->"I don't suppose the word 'dweeb' means anything to you people..."
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* Daniel, being dragged all over an alien desert by the alien equivalent to a horse.
--> '''Daniel''': HELLLLPPP MEEEEE! OHHHHHH!
* Remeber Nabeh, the goofy guy who did the ''Bawk bawk bawk'' imitation a little ''too'' long? Hard to forget him.
--> '''Daniel''': HELLLLPPP MEEEEE! OHHHHHH!
* Remeber Nabeh, the goofy guy who did the ''Bawk bawk bawk'' imitation a little ''too'' long? Hard to forget him.
