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--> '''Eien Tamashi''': "I'm a part of you…you jackass!" She then [[ArmorPiercingSlap slaps him]].
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--> '''Eien Tamashi''': "I'm a part of you…you jackass!" She then [[ArmorPiercingSlap slaps him]].him.
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* Ichigo and company all learn a [[FantasticAesop very important lesson]] in chapter 62: [[DrivesLikeCrazy Never let Kukaku drive]].
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* Ichigo and company all learn a [[FantasticAesop [[SpoofAesop very important lesson]] in chapter 62: [[DrivesLikeCrazy Never let Kukaku drive]].
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* Rangiku laughs when she finds out Lelouch is a virgin. Eien Tamashi [[spoiler: Lelouch's Zanpakuto]] begins cackling herself despite the fact that she knows that already, much to Lelouch's chagrin
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* Rangiku laughs when she finds out Lelouch is a virgin. Eien Tamashi [[spoiler: Lelouch's Zanpakuto]] begins cackling herself despite the fact that she knows that already, much to Lelouch's chagrinchagrin.
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* In chapter 18, Eien Tamashi acts as Yuna's echo just to annoy Lelouch
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* In chapter 18, Eien Tamashi acts as Yuna's echo just to annoy LelouchLelouch.
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* Chapter 26 Depsite the fact that Lelouch, and the reader, are quite excited about the prospect of Lelouch finding Rukia while Hisana is still alive, Eien Tamashi couldn't care less
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* Chapter 26 Depsite Despite the fact that Lelouch, and the reader, are quite excited about the prospect of Lelouch finding Rukia while Hisana is still alive, Eien Tamashi couldn't care lessless.
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* In chapter 27 Mayuri forgets he's lost four not three deputy department heads. Lelouch and Nemu kindly remind him of this
* Ichigo and his nakama randomly guessing why [[spoiler: Fong Shaolin, their teacher]], is absent. Ichigo asks Keigo if he's high when Keigo suggests that [[spoiler: Soifon]] is a Yakuza. [[TheCuckoolanderWasRight Orihime almost correctly guesses]] what [[spoiler: Soifon]] is and Ichigo says that it's actually better than Keigo's thoery.
* In chapter 38 [[spoiler: Soifon]] the normally [[{{Jerkass}} callous and ruthless]] [[spoiler: former executive militia commander]] acting [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness bubbly and excited]] because [[spoiler: Yoruichi promised her something special]] if four members of Ichigo's class got in the top 25 of the freshman class
* Ichigo and his nakama randomly guessing why [[spoiler: Fong Shaolin, their teacher]], is absent. Ichigo asks Keigo if he's high when Keigo suggests that [[spoiler: Soifon]] is a Yakuza. [[TheCuckoolanderWasRight Orihime almost correctly guesses]] what [[spoiler: Soifon]] is and Ichigo says that it's actually better than Keigo's thoery.
* In chapter 38 [[spoiler: Soifon]] the normally [[{{Jerkass}} callous and ruthless]] [[spoiler: former executive militia commander]] acting [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness bubbly and excited]] because [[spoiler: Yoruichi promised her something special]] if four members of Ichigo's class got in the top 25 of the freshman class
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* In chapter 27 Mayuri forgets he's lost four not three deputy department heads. Lelouch and Nemu kindly remind him of this
this.
* Ichigo and his nakama randomly guessing why[[spoiler: Fong [[spoiler:Fong Shaolin, their teacher]], is absent. Ichigo asks Keigo if he's high when Keigo suggests that [[spoiler: Soifon]] [[spoiler:Soifon]] is a Yakuza. [[TheCuckoolanderWasRight Orihime almost correctly guesses]] what [[spoiler: Soifon]] [[spoiler:Soifon]] is and Ichigo says that it's actually better than Keigo's thoery.
* In chapter 38[[spoiler: Soifon]] [[spoiler:Soifon]] the normally [[{{Jerkass}} callous and ruthless]] [[spoiler: former [[spoiler:former executive militia commander]] acting [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness bubbly and excited]] because [[spoiler: Yoruichi [[spoiler:Yoruichi promised her something special]] if four members of Ichigo's class got in the top 25 of the freshman classclass.
* Ichigo and his nakama randomly guessing why
* In chapter 38
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* Ichigo and company all learn a [[FantasticAesop very important lesson]] in chapter 62: [[DrivesLikeCrazy Never let Kukaku drive]]
* Just about every thing with Yammy who's been turned into a expy of Nappa from DBZ abridged
* Just about every thing with Yammy who's been turned into a expy of Nappa from DBZ abridged
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* Ichigo and company all learn a [[FantasticAesop very important lesson]] in chapter 62: [[DrivesLikeCrazy Never let Kukaku drive]]
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* Just about every thing with Yammy who's been turned into a expy of Nappa from DBZabridgedabridged.
* Just about every thing with Yammy who's been turned into a expy of Nappa from DBZ
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* Phoebe attacking Rita and believing that she has her on the ropes cause all Rita is doing is blocking and Rita is wondering in her head what she should have for dinner and the moment she comes out of it, [[CurbstompBattle combos Phoebe without even trying]]
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* Phoebe attacking Rita and believing that she has her on the ropes cause all Rita is doing is blocking and Rita is wondering in her head what she should have for dinner and the moment she comes out of it, [[CurbstompBattle combos Phoebe without even trying]]trying]].
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** and a little bit later we get "Bored now, kicking your ass". Who is she? [[IdiotHero Goku]] from WebVideo/DragonBallAbridged?
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** and And a little bit later we get "Bored now, kicking your ass". Who is she? [[IdiotHero Goku]] from WebVideo/DragonBallAbridged?
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* Mashiro channeling [[WesternAnimation/LooneyTunes Roadrunner]] while fighting Zurik because that is that is the type of thing you expect from [[BunnyEarsLawyer Mashiro]]
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* Mashiro channeling [[WesternAnimation/LooneyTunes Roadrunner]] while fighting Zurik because that is that is the type of thing you expect from [[BunnyEarsLawyer Mashiro]]Mashiro]].
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* Shunsui and Orin mocking card games and paying quite an AffectionateParody to Anime/YuGiOh and [[ShoutOut shout outs]] to WebVideo/YuGiOhTheAbridgedSeries
** Shunsui explains that he and Orin are not in the Shadow Realm
** Shunsui says that card games are SeriousBusiness
** Orin is aghast that he and Shunsui’s fight will be decided by a children’s card game
** Shunsui explains that he and Orin are not in the Shadow Realm
** Shunsui says that card games are SeriousBusiness
** Orin is aghast that he and Shunsui’s fight will be decided by a children’s card game
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* Shunsui and Orin mocking card games and paying quite an AffectionateParody to Anime/YuGiOh and [[ShoutOut shout outs]] to WebVideo/YuGiOhTheAbridgedSeries
WebVideo/YuGiOhTheAbridgedSeries.
** Shunsui explains that he and Orin are not in the ShadowRealm
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** Shunsui says that card games areSeriousBusiness
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** Orin is aghast that he and Shunsui’s fight will be decided by a children’s cardgamegame.
** Shunsui explains that he and Orin are not in the Shadow
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** Orin is aghast that he and Shunsui’s fight will be decided by a children’s card
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** Orin saying [[ScrewTheRulesIMakeThem Screw The Rules I have Power]]
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** Orin saying [[ScrewTheRulesIMakeThem Screw The Rules I have Power]]Power]].
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* Cornelia’s blunt query to Guinevere if she engaged in sexual activity to become Viceroy of Area 14
* Cornelia saying that she’ll castrate anyone that tries to bed Euphie before Euphie turns 19. When Euphie calls her out on this, Cornelia notes that perhaps she’d [[ComicallyMissingThePoint use her gunblade rather than a knife]]. Euphie then remarks that [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything size isn’t the issue]].
* Cornelia saying that she’ll castrate anyone that tries to bed Euphie before Euphie turns 19. When Euphie calls her out on this, Cornelia notes that perhaps she’d [[ComicallyMissingThePoint use her gunblade rather than a knife]]. Euphie then remarks that [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything size isn’t the issue]].
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* Cornelia’s blunt query to Guinevere if she engaged in sexual activity to become Viceroy of Area 14
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* Cornelia saying that she’ll castrate anyone that tries to bed Euphie beforeEuphie she turns 19. When Euphie the latter calls her the former out on this, Cornelia notes that perhaps she’d [[ComicallyMissingThePoint use her gunblade rather than a knife]]. Euphie then remarks that [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything size isn’t the issue]].
* Cornelia saying that she’ll castrate anyone that tries to bed Euphie before
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* chapter 14
--> '''Eien Tamashi''': What's the matter Lelouch you're not into young girls
--> '''Lelouch''': Zip it
--> '''Eien Tamashi''': What's the matter Lelouch you're not into young girls
--> '''Lelouch''': Zip it
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* chapter Chapter 14
--> '''Eien Tamashi''': What's the matter Lelouch you're not into younggirls
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--> '''Lelouch''': Zipitit.
--> '''Eien Tamashi''': What's the matter Lelouch you're not into young
--> '''Lelouch''': Zip
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* chapter 15
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* chapter Chapter 15
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--> '''Eien Tamashi''': What's the matter Lelouch you're not into [[{{Lolicon}} young girls]]girls
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--> '''Mayuri''': [[{{Frankenstein}} It is…alive!]]
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--> '''Mayuri''': [[{{Frankenstein}} [[Film/{{Frankenstein 1931}} It is…alive!]]
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** Well, Gin does look and sound like [[BlazBlue Hazama]], so a talent for trolling must come as part of the package...
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** Well, Gin does look and sound like [[BlazBlue [[VideoGame/BlazBlue Hazama]], so a talent for trolling must come as part of the package...
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* Gin making Lelouch needing to reach for the BrainBleach by dropping the idea of [[{{Fandisservice}} Omaeda in Speedos]].
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* Gin making Lelouch needing (and everyone else) need to reach for the BrainBleach by dropping the idea of [[{{Fandisservice}} Omaeda in Speedos]].
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* Several bits of Lelouch outright mocking[[hottip:*: read that as trolling]] [[spoiler:Aizen]] with some really good [[DeadpanSnarker snarking]]. Eien Tamashi apparently thought so herself.
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* Several bits of Lelouch outright mocking[[hottip:*: read that as trolling]] mocking [[spoiler:Aizen]] with some really good [[DeadpanSnarker snarking]]. Eien Tamashi apparently thought so herself.
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** Well, Gin does look and sound like [[BlazBlue Hazama]], so a talent for trolling must come as part of the package...
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* Gin making Lelouch needing to reach for the BrainBleach by dropping the idea of [[{{Fandisservice}} Omaeda in a speedo]].
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* Gin making Lelouch needing to reach for the BrainBleach by dropping the idea of [[{{Fandisservice}} Omaeda in a speedo]].Speedos]].
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*** Even more so when Lelouch himself borrows it to use against Aizen decades later.
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** Also doubles as a ShoutOut to CodeGeassTheAbridgedSeries
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** Also doubles as a ShoutOut to CodeGeassTheAbridgedSeries''WebVideo/CodeGeassTheAbridgedSeries''.
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--> '''Lelouch''': Thank you [[CaptainObvious Captain Obvious.]]
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--> '''Lelouch''': Thank you [[CaptainObvious Captain Obvious.]]you, CaptainObvious.
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--> '''Lelouch''' (narrating): I needed to [[EvilGloating gloat]], [[CodeGeassTheAbridgedSeries my ego demanded it]].
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--> '''Lelouch''' (narrating): I needed to [[EvilGloating gloat]], [[CodeGeassTheAbridgedSeries [[WebVideo/CodeGeassTheAbridgedSeries my ego demanded it]].
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--> '''Eien Tamashi''': Yes, [[SarcasmMode heaven forbid I try to stop you]] from having sex with [[spoiler: [[{{Squick}} your]] [[BrotherSisterIncest sister]]]].
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--> '''Eien Tamashi''': Yes, [[SarcasmMode heaven forbid I try to stop you]] from having sex with [[spoiler: [[{{Squick}} your]] [[BrotherSisterIncest sister]]]].sister]]]].
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* Chapter 198 really is appropriately named a dinner disaster what with [[MySisterIsOffLimits Cornelia nearly skewering Suzaku's groin with a haphazardly thrown fork]] [[spoiler:and Talbumosuke doing similar to Clovis]], [[spoiler:[[CorruptTheCutie Mia]] [[CorruptTheCutie trying to corrupt]] [[IncorruptablePurePureness Nunnally]] [[PlayedForLaughs (played for laughs)]]]], [[spoiler:Marianne]] playfully flirting with [[spoiler:Talbumosuke]] and the effect it has on Lelouch, and to top it all off Susanna and Shirley [[{{Irony}} the one's you'd expect to maybe cause something like this cat fight style]] are talking to each other with the utmost politeness and civility and possibly [[LesYay something else]].
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* Chapter 198 really is appropriately named a dinner disaster what with [[MySisterIsOffLimits Cornelia nearly skewering Suzaku's groin with a haphazardly thrown fork]] [[spoiler:and Talbumosuke doing similar to Clovis]], [[spoiler:[[CorruptTheCutie Mia]] [[CorruptTheCutie trying to corrupt]] [[IncorruptablePurePureness [[IncorruptiblePurePureness Nunnally]] [[PlayedForLaughs (played for laughs)]]]], [[spoiler:Marianne]] playfully flirting with [[spoiler:Talbumosuke]] and the effect it has on Lelouch, and to top it all off Susanna and Shirley [[{{Irony}} the one's you'd expect to maybe cause something like this cat fight style]] are talking to each other with the utmost politeness and civility and possibly [[LesYay something else]].