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-->'''Bigweld''': '''''[[SayMyName RATCHET!]]'''''\\
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-->'''Ratchet:''' ''(after learning that Bigweld is arriving)'' NO, NO! Tell him I'm not here! Tell him anything, just don't let him in!
-->'''Bigweld''': (slamming the door '''''wide''''' open) '''''[[SayMyName RATCHET!]]'''''\\
-->'''Bigweld''': (slamming the door '''''wide''''' open) '''''[[SayMyName RATCHET!]]'''''\\
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'''Rodney:''' AH!\\
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'''Rodney:''' AH!\\[[OhCrap AH!]]\\
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'''Rodney:''' Why do you have two noses?\\
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'''Rodney:''' [[LampshadeHanging Why do you have two noses?\\noses?]]\\
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* Although the entire scene where Fender was in the Chop Shop was part of the Nightmare Fuel, but the part where he shrieks after finding out that his new legs had a skirt before escaping was a bit amusing.
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* Although the entire scene where Fender was in Fender's encounter at the Chop Shop was part of the Nightmare Fuel, but the part where he shrieks after finding out that it does have a few funny moments.
** This bit when Ratchet is about to show his mother his newlegs had silver sweeper:
-->'''Ratchet:''' Okay, mother, this way.
-->'''Madame Gasket:''' Let me have askirt before escaping peek, I can't bear it.
-->'''Ratchet:''' No peeking now, it's a surprise.
-->'''Madame Gasket:''' Oh, you are a wicked boy.
** After Fender puts on a new pair of legs, it also has a skirt. Fender's reaction wasa bit amusing.pretty hilarious.
** This bit when Ratchet is about to show his mother his new
-->'''Ratchet:''' Okay, mother, this way.
-->'''Madame Gasket:''' Let me have a
-->'''Ratchet:''' No peeking now, it's a surprise.
-->'''Madame Gasket:''' Oh, you are a wicked boy.
** After Fender puts on a new pair of legs, it also has a skirt. Fender's reaction was
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-->'''Rodney''': Ratchet.
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-->'''Rodney''': Ratchet. [[CaptainObvious Ratchet.]]
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* Bigweld's [[HesBack return to form]] is mostly a CrowningMomentOfAwesome ''and'' a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming, but there is one moment of humor:
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* Bigweld's [[HesBack return to form]] is mostly a CrowningMomentOfAwesome SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome ''and'' a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming, SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments, but there is one moment of humor:
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'''Bigweld''': (''shoving Ratchet out of the Big Chair'') [[ShutUpHannibal Profits,]] [[WordSchmord schmofits!]] Now, [[GetOut GET OUT!]]\\
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'''Bigweld''': (''shoving (''[[ShutUpHannibal shoving Ratchet out of the Big Chair'') [[ShutUpHannibal Chair]]'') [[ScrewTheMoneyIHaveRules Profits,]] [[WordSchmord schmofits!]] Now, [[GetOut GET OUT!]]\\
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-->'''Crank:''' Ouch. *Diesel's eyes break*
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-->'''Crank:''' Ouch. [[LampshadeHanging Ouch.]] *Diesel's eyes break*
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* Bigweld's [[HesBack return to form]] is mostly a CrowningMomentOfAwesome ''and'' a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming, but there is one moment of humor:
-->'''Bigweld:''' Kid, if you're gonna fight, I'm going in with you!\\
'''Rodney:''' Y-You are?\\
'''Bigweld:''' ''(gesturing at [[ComicallyOversizedButt Aunt Fanny]])'' [[DistractedByTheSexy Hey, who's the dame with the sweet keister?]]\\
'''Rodney:''' But why?\\
'''Bigweld:''' [[ComicallyMissingThePoint I don't know, I'm a big guy]] [[HasAType and I like women with a large-]]\\
'''Rodney:''' No no no, I mean why are you gonna help us?
-->'''Bigweld:''' Kid, if you're gonna fight, I'm going in with you!\\
'''Rodney:''' Y-You are?\\
'''Bigweld:''' ''(gesturing at [[ComicallyOversizedButt Aunt Fanny]])'' [[DistractedByTheSexy Hey, who's the dame with the sweet keister?]]\\
'''Rodney:''' But why?\\
'''Bigweld:''' [[ComicallyMissingThePoint I don't know, I'm a big guy]] [[HasAType and I like women with a large-]]\\
'''Rodney:''' No no no, I mean why are you gonna help us?
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'''Fender:''' Relax, she's not my aunt. She just takes in bots who are, um...broke. Bless her little heart.
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'''Fender:''' Relax, she's not my aunt. She just takes in bots who are, um...broke. Bless her little heart.\\
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-->'''Rodney:''' Well then, why is she called "Aunt Fanny"?\\
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-->'''Rodney:''' Are sure your aunt won't mind?\\
'''Fender:''' Relax, she's not my aunt. She just takes in bots who are, um...broke. Bless her little heart.
'''Rodney:''' Well then, why is she called "AuntFanny"?\\Fanny"?\\
''(The two of them enter the room to find Aunt Fanny's comically large rear end facing them)''\\
'''Fender:''' Relax, she's not my aunt. She just takes in bots who are, um...broke. Bless her little heart.
'''Rodney:''' Well then, why is she called "Aunt
''(The two of them enter the room to find Aunt Fanny's comically large rear end facing them)''\\
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''(The two of them enter the room to find Aunt Fanny's comically large rear end facing them)''\\
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* Although the entire scene where Fender was in the Chop Shop was part of the Nightmare Fuel, but the part where he shrieks after finding out that his new legs had a skirt before escaping.
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* Although the entire scene where Fender was in the Chop Shop was part of the Nightmare Fuel, but the part where he shrieks after finding out that his new legs had a skirt before escaping.escaping was a bit amusing.
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'''Bigweld''': (''shoving Ratchet out of the Big Chair'') [[ShutUpHannibal Profits,]] [[WordSchmord schmofits!]] Now, get out!\\
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'''Bigweld''': (''shoving Ratchet out of the Big Chair'') [[ShutUpHannibal Profits,]] [[WordSchmord schmofits!]] Now, get out!\\[[GetOut GET OUT!]]\\
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* Although the entire scene where Fender was in the Chop Shop was part of the Nightmare Fuel, but the part where he shrieks after finding out that his new legs had a skirt before escaping.
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'''Ratchet''': (''[[ScreamsLikeALittleGirl screams like a girl]] and scrambles onto Bigweld's chair'')\\
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'''Ratchet''': (''[[ScreamsLikeALittleGirl screams (''[[OhCrap screams]] [[ScreamsLikeALittleGirl like a girl]] and scrambles onto Bigweld's chair'')\\
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* '''Ratchet''' So I don’t wanna hear another, "where’s Bigweld? (imitates baby whining)".
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* '''Ratchet''' '''Ratchet''': So I don’t wanna hear another, "where’s Bigweld? (imitates baby whining)".
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'''Ratchet''': No, wait! Please listen to me! You can't do this to me. This job is my ''life''! It means everything to me! You don't know what I've done to get here! [[DiggingYourselfDeeper The lies I told, the lives I]] ''[[DiggingYourselfDeeper ruined!]]''...[[NotHelpingYourCase This isn't helping me.]]\\
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'''Ratchet''': No, wait! Please listen to me! You can't do this to me. This job is my ''life''! It means everything to me! You don't know what I've done to get here! [[DiggingYourselfDeeper The lies I I've told, the lives I]] I've]] ''[[DiggingYourselfDeeper ruined!]]''...[[NotHelpingYourCase This isn't helping me.]]\\
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'''Rodney''': (''angrily'') Let GO of him!\\
'''Ratchet''': (''chuckles sarcastically'') Sure. Listen kid, it's over. (''angrily sets his guards to capture Rodney, Cappy and Wonderbot'') You lost! Bigweld is gonna be melted down into next season's upgrades along with you and your moronic coffeepot! And Cappy...such a waste.
'''Ratchet''': (''chuckles sarcastically'') Sure. Listen kid, it's over. (''angrily sets his guards to capture Rodney, Cappy and Wonderbot'') You lost! Bigweld is gonna be melted down into next season's upgrades along with you and your moronic coffeepot! And Cappy...such a waste.
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'''Rodney''': (''angrily'') (''firmly'') Let GO of him!\\
'''Ratchet''': (''chuckles sarcastically'') Sure. Listen kid, it's over.(''angrily sets his (''sics the guards to capture on Rodney, Cappy and Wonderbot'') You lost! Bigweld is gonna be melted down into next season's upgrades upgrades, along with you and you, your moronic coffeepot! And Cappy...such MORONIC COFFEEPOT, and Cappy. (''Cappy glares at him'') Such a waste.
'''Ratchet''': (''chuckles sarcastically'') Sure. Listen kid, it's over.
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** It went straight [[CrossesTheLineTwice over the line]] the next morning, when the lampbot that Fanny's {{Fartillery}} brought down disappears, replaced by a ''taped outline.''
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** It went straight [[CrossesTheLineTwice over the line]] the next morning, when the lampbot that Fanny's {{Fartillery}} brought down disappears, replaced by a ''taped outline.''[[ChalkOutline taped outline]].''
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** Ratchet questions how Gasket got in there; she explains she came up the ventilation shaft. She moves aside and we see she ripped a giant hole in the wall; Ratchet's clear alarm and confusion as to ''how'' she did that without making a sound is evident.
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** Creator/GregKinnear's delivery of that last line in particular just sells it.
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* Rodney asking Bigweld if he's ok.
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* Rodney asking Bigweld if he's ok.OK.
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-->'''Crank:''' Ouch.
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-->'''Crank:''' Ouch. *Diesel's eyes break*
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* When Rodney and Fender do arm pit farts. We cue to the outside of the house as each window lights up as Crank and Piper join in.
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* When Rodney and Fender do arm pit farts. We cue cut to the outside of the house as each window lights up as Crank and Piper join in.
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'''Fender''': We're ''what''?! ''(to Rodney)'' Once again. ''(Rodney slaps him again)'' Ah! Thank you. ''(to Tim)'' Fine! WE will go! You will explain to your superiors why were not able to attend your luau, your barn dance, whatever it is! But we're leaving! IN A ''''''HUFF!''''' ''(Rodney and Fender start to march away)''\\
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'''Fender''': We're ''what''?! ''(to Rodney)'' Once again. ''(Rodney slaps him again)'' Ah! Thank you. ''(to Tim)'' Fine! WE will go! You will explain to your superiors why were not able to attend your luau, your barn dance, whatever it is! But we're leaving! IN A ''''''HUFF!''''' '''''HUFF!''''' ''(Rodney and Fender start to march away)''\\
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'''Ratchet''': Who? And are you sure they're not laughing with me?\\
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'''Ratchet''': Who? And are you sure they're not laughing with ''with'' me?\\
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'''Fender''': We're ''what''?! ''(to Rodney)'' Once again. ''(Rodney slaps him again)'' Ah! Thank you. ''(to Tim)'' Fine! WE will go! You will explain to your superiors why were not able to attend your luau, your barn dance, whatever it is! But we're leaving! In a huff! ''(Rodney and Fender start to march away)''\\
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'''Fender''': We're ''what''?! ''(to Rodney)'' Once again. ''(Rodney slaps him again)'' Ah! Thank you. ''(to Tim)'' Fine! WE will go! You will explain to your superiors why were not able to attend your luau, your barn dance, whatever it is! But we're leaving! In a huff! IN A ''''''HUFF!''''' ''(Rodney and Fender start to march away)''\\
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** First he barges into Piper putting makeup on.
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** First he barges into Piper putting makeup on.on, causing her to shriek in terror.
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'''Piper''': ''(shrieks)'' Fender! Get outta my room!\\
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'''Piper''': ''(shrieks)'' Aaaaaah! Fender! Get outta my room!\\
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* Rodney waking up to Fender attempting to steal his foot. "If I seem to be getting smaller... it's because...''I'M LEAVING!''" (Does just that.)
* "We've told you hundreds of times, 'Don't talk to strange men.' Thank you, Manuel."
* "We've told you hundreds of times, 'Don't talk to strange men.' Thank you, Manuel."
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* Rodney waking up to Fender attempting to steal his foot. "If I seem to be getting smaller... it's because...''I'M LEAVING!''" LEAVING!'' (Does just that.)
) Foot, don't fail me now!"
* "We've told youhundreds of a hundred times, 'Don't talk to strange men.' Thank you, Manuel."
* "We've told you
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'''Countryside robot:''' Hey, could you look at my arm? ''(his arm falls off when Rodney holds it)''\\
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'''Countryside robot:''' Hey, could you look at my arm? ''(his arm falls off when Rodney holds it)''\\it, but still grips on)''\\
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'''Fender''': (''in a thick foreign accent'') I think a-maybe you can. This is-a Count Roderick Von Brokenzipper! Formally Count Velcro.\\
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'''Fender''': (''in ''(in a thick foreign accent'') accent)'' I think a-maybe you can. This is-a Count Roderick Von Brokenzipper! Formally Count Velcro.\\
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'''Fender''': Where are the trumpets?!\\
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'''Fender''': Where ''Where'' are the trumpets?!\\trumpets?\\
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'''Fender''': We were promised trumpets to announce the Count's arrival! (''to Rodney'') I'm sorry, Your Grace. Beat me until you're happy. ''(Rodney slaps him in the face)'' He's happy, and I'm not feeling too bad myself!\\
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'''Fender''': We were promised trumpets to announce the Count's arrival! (''to Rodney'') ''(to Rodney)'' I'm sorry, Your Grace. Beat me until you're happy. ''(Rodney slaps him in the face)'' He's happy, and I'm not feeling too bad myself!\\
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'''Fender''': We're ''what''?! (''to Rodney'') Once again. (''Rodney slaps him again'') Ah! Thank you. (''to Tim'') FINE! WE WILL GO! You will explain to your superiors why were not able to attend your luau, your barn dance, whatever it is! BUT WE ARE LEAVING! IN A HUFF! (''Rodney and Fender start to march away'')\\
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'''Fender''': We're ''what''?! (''to Rodney'') ''(to Rodney)'' Once again. (''Rodney ''(Rodney slaps him again'') again)'' Ah! Thank you. (''to Tim'') FINE! ''(to Tim)'' Fine! WE WILL GO! will go! You will explain to your superiors why were not able to attend your luau, your barn dance, whatever it is! BUT WE ARE LEAVING! IN A HUFF! (''Rodney But we're leaving! In a huff! ''(Rodney and Fender start to march away'')\\away)''\\
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'''Tim''': Thank you, Your Grace. (''his jacket flops down revealing his underwear, causing a nearby lady-bot to faint'')
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'''Tim''': Thank you, Your Grace. (''his ''(his jacket flops down revealing his underwear, causing a nearby lady-bot to faint'')faint)''
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'''Ratchet''': No, wait! Please listen to me! You can't do this to me. This job is my ''LIFE''! It means everything to me! You don't KNOW WHAT I'VE DONE TO GET HERE!! [[DiggingYourselfDeeper THE LIES I'VE TOLD, THE LIVES I'VE]] ''[[DiggingYourselfDeeper RUINED!]]''...[[NotHelpingYourCase This isn't helping me.]]\\
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'''Ratchet''': No, wait! Please listen to me! You can't do this to me. This job is my ''LIFE''! ''life''! It means everything to me! You don't KNOW WHAT I'VE DONE TO GET HERE!! know what I've done to get here! [[DiggingYourselfDeeper THE LIES I'VE TOLD, THE LIVES I'VE]] The lies I told, the lives I]] ''[[DiggingYourselfDeeper RUINED!]]''...ruined!]]''...[[NotHelpingYourCase This isn't helping me.]]\\
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'''Rodney''': (''angrily'') Let GO of him!!\\
'''Ratchet''': (''chuckles sarcastically'') Sure. Listen kid, it's over. (''angrily sets his guards to capture Rodney, Cappy and Wonderbot'') You lost! Bigweld is gonna be melted down into next season's upgrades along with you and your moronic coffeepot!! And Cappy... such a waste.
'''Ratchet''': (''chuckles sarcastically'') Sure. Listen kid, it's over. (''angrily sets his guards to capture Rodney, Cappy and Wonderbot'') You lost! Bigweld is gonna be melted down into next season's upgrades along with you and your moronic coffeepot!! And Cappy... such a waste.
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'''Rodney''': (''angrily'') Let GO of him!!\\
him!\\
'''Ratchet''': (''chuckles sarcastically'') Sure. Listen kid, it's over. (''angrily sets his guards to capture Rodney, Cappy and Wonderbot'') You lost! Bigweld is gonna be melted down into next season's upgrades along with you and your moroniccoffeepot!! coffeepot! And Cappy... Cappy...such a waste.
'''Ratchet''': (''chuckles sarcastically'') Sure. Listen kid, it's over. (''angrily sets his guards to capture Rodney, Cappy and Wonderbot'') You lost! Bigweld is gonna be melted down into next season's upgrades along with you and your moronic
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-->'''Madame Gasket:''' Who are THESE losers?!
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-->'''Madame Gasket:''' Who are THESE losers?!losers?
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'''Fender:''' I think so. '''[[SuddenlyShouting COULD YOU ALL STOP MOVING AROUND!!!]]''' This is so frustrating!!! I think I counted one of you twice!\\
'''Madame Gasket:''' While you're at it.... COUNT THESE!!
'''Madame Gasket:''' While you're at it.... COUNT THESE!!
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'''Fender:''' I think so. '''[[SuddenlyShouting COULD YOU ALL STOP MOVING AROUND!!!]]''' AROUND!?]]''' This is so frustrating!!! I think I counted one of you twice!\\
'''Madame Gasket:''' While you're atit.... it...COUNT THESE!!THESE!
'''Madame Gasket:''' While you're at
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'''Piper''': GET OUT OF MY ROOM!
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'''Piper''': GET OUT OF OUTTA MY ROOM!
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'''Fender:''' I think so. '''[[SuddenlyShouting COULD YOU ALL STOP MOVING AROUND!!!]]''' This is so frustrating!!! I think I counted one of you twice!
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'''Fender:''' I think so. '''[[SuddenlyShouting COULD YOU ALL STOP MOVING AROUND!!!]]''' This is so frustrating!!! I think I counted one of you twice!twice!\\
'''Madame Gasket:''' While you're at it.... COUNT THESE!!
'''Madame Gasket:''' While you're at it.... COUNT THESE!!
