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* A British vorcha in a top hat and monocle. Just let that image sink in for a moment.


* When they get the distress signal from Liara's team, Shepard wonders if anyone is still alive, because they're a bunch of helpless scientists against a horde of pirates. One GilliganCut later, Wrex is going full [[ComicBook/TheIncredibleHulk Hulk]] on an unfortunate Scrin Intruder.

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* When they get the distress signal from Liara's team, Shepard wonders if anyone is still alive, because they're a bunch of helpless scientists against a horde of pirates. One GilliganCut later, Wrex is going full [[ComicBook/TheIncredibleHulk Hulk]] on an unfortunate Scrin Intruder.Intruder.
-->'''Wrex''': Puny Scrin.

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* Again, Chapter Twelve, Apparently [[NotSoAboveItAll Kane]] had ''insisted'' on giving his Marked of Kane TronLines.


* In Chapter Thirteen, a Scrin Battlemind busts through a wall into an aircar bay of the GDI Embassy. Garrus is not amused that it's stealing his schtick.

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* In Chapter Thirteen, a Scrin Battlemind busts through a wall into an aircar bay of the GDI Embassy. Garrus is not amused that it's stealing his schtick.schtick.
* When they get the distress signal from Liara's team, Shepard wonders if anyone is still alive, because they're a bunch of helpless scientists against a horde of pirates. One GilliganCut later, Wrex is going full [[ComicBook/TheIncredibleHulk Hulk]] on an unfortunate Scrin Intruder.

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** His BigDamnHeroes DynamicEntry in chapter twelve leads one to believe that Garrus simply never learned how to operate a door.


-->''A Corrupter shows up''

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-->''A -->[''A Corrupter shows up''up'']

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* Also in Chapter Twelve, Shepard has just killed a [[MadeOfIron Ravager]] while [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice pinned to a wall by a Tiberium spike]]. Tali and Dr. Michel are talking about what to do after they cut her free.
-->'''Michel''': Get her off the wall, and we'll extract when we get to a safe location. The armory station?
-->'''Shepard''': Good idea. Kal'Reegar should be back any minute anyway with heavy weapons.
-->''A Corrupter shows up''
-->'''Shepard''': Oh ''what the fuck.''


-->Advisory: notamusing - acknowledged - ignored

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-->Advisory: notamusing - acknowledged - ignoredignored
* In Chapter Thirteen, a Scrin Battlemind busts through a wall into an aircar bay of the GDI Embassy. Garrus is not amused that it's stealing his schtick.


-->''Her mind reeled, remembering everything the Spectre had told her about how he handled things, and then about everything she knew about how Admiral Nicolas Parker V operated, and realized that putting them in the same room would result in . . . well, havoc. On the one hand, there was an elite covert operative whose general approach to problems was apparently "Overkill?" and "Kneecaps!" On the other was a special operations commander for whom orbital bombardment was the first resort, and was unsatisfied when an operation was completed and at least two buildings were not demolished. Her mind treated her to horror scenarios, where "hostage rescue" and "strategic ordnance deployment" were used in the same sentence. Words like "collateral damage" and "unspecified urban renewal" followed.''

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-->''Her mind reeled, remembering everything the Spectre had told her about how he handled things, and then about everything she knew about how Admiral Nicolas Parker V operated, and realized that putting them in the same room would result in . . . well, havoc. On the one hand, there was an elite covert operative whose general approach to problems was apparently "Overkill?" and "Kneecaps!" On the other was a would special operations commander for whom orbital bombardment was the first resort, and was unsatisfied when an operation was completed and at least two buildings were not demolished. Her mind treated her to horror scenarios, where "hostage rescue" and "strategic ordnance deployment" were used in the same sentence. Words like "collateral damage" and "unspecified urban renewal" followed.''



* In Chapter Twelve, the Scrin are communicating via their odd interface, when this exchange pops up in the fanfic equivalent of a FreezeFrameBonus:

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* In Chapter Twelve, the Scrin are communicating via their odd interface, when this exchange pops these two exchanges pop up in the fanfic equivalent of a FreezeFrameBonus:FreezeFrameBonus:
-->Identification: Turian - Spectre - Garrus Vakarian - Qualifier: Insane
**And then later this:

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* In Chapter Twelve, the Scrin are communicating via their odd interface, when this exchange pops up in the fanfic equivalent of a FreezeFrameBonus:
-->[[MemeticMutation Assuming: direct control]]
-->Advisory: notamusing - acknowledged - ignored


* In Chapter 7, when the car carrying Shepard, Anderson, and the two [[spoiler: kidnappers]] crashes into a building. When she comes to, an advertisement is playing in the background, with an elcor droning on about body wash. ''[[TheManYourManCouldSmellLike "Smug: I am on a rachni."]]''

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* In Chapter 7, when the car carrying Shepard, Anderson, and the two [[spoiler: kidnappers]] crashes into a building. When she comes to, an advertisement is playing in the background, with an elcor droning on about body wash. ''[[TheManYourManCouldSmellLike ''[[Advertising/TheManYourManCouldSmellLike "Smug: I am on a rachni."]]''

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