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* #17 - the Suicide Squad's constant complaining about being teleported into the Arctic without a change of warm clothes.
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* #17 - the Suicide Squad's constant complaining about being teleported into the Arctic without a change of warm clothes.clothes.
* The second Annual has Jason undercover at the circus. When Dick comes to visit, Jason pranks him by claiming he's "an acrobatic clown", complete with lame stage name and ugly costume. Dick's expression just screams "my baby bro is a meanie".
* The second Annual has Jason undercover at the circus. When Dick comes to visit, Jason pranks him by claiming he's "an acrobatic clown", complete with lame stage name and ugly costume. Dick's expression just screams "my baby bro is a meanie".
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* Simon's HeelFaceTurn reveal, both Jason and Roy look done for and then Simon hugs Jason.
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* Simon's HeelFaceTurn reveal, both Jason and Roy look done for and then Simon hugs Jason.Jason.
* #17 - the Suicide Squad's constant complaining about being teleported into the Arctic without a change of warm clothes.
* #17 - the Suicide Squad's constant complaining about being teleported into the Arctic without a change of warm clothes.
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-->'''Jason's Narration''': This was the happiest day of my life.
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-->'''Jason's Narration''': [[CrossesTheLineTwice This was the happiest day of my life. life.]]
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**The whole story is presented with a certain degree of GallowsHumor.
-->'''Jason''': ''*is born*''
-->'''Jason's Narration''': This was the happiest day of my life.
-->'''Jason''': ''*is born*''
-->'''Jason's Narration''': This was the happiest day of my life.
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--> Cue trap Kori was right
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--> Cue trap Kori was rightright
* Simon's HeelFaceTurn reveal, both Jason and Roy look done for and then Simon hugs Jason.
* Simon's HeelFaceTurn reveal, both Jason and Roy look done for and then Simon hugs Jason.
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* If you like Roy's sense of humor he can be absolutely hilarious when he actually let's the joes fly.
* For some people this situation in one of the first issues.
* For some people this situation in one of the first issues.
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* If you like Roy's sense of humor he can be absolutely hilarious when he actually let's lets the joes jokes fly.
* For some people this situation in one of the firstissues.issues:
* For some people this situation in one of the first
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--> Roy and Jason being... [[{{Troll}} them]][[ToDumbToLive selves]] brush it off and make fun of her for being afraid.
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--> Roy and Jason being... [[{{Troll}} them]][[ToDumbToLive them]][[TooDumbToLive selves]] brush it off and make fun of her for being afraid.
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--> Roy and Jason being... [[Troll them]][[ToDumbToLive selves]] brush it off and make fun of her for being afraid.
--> Que trap Kori was right
--> Que trap Kori was right
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--> Roy and Jason being... [[Troll [[{{Troll}} them]][[ToDumbToLive selves]] brush it off and make fun of her for being afraid.
-->Que Cue trap Kori was right
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-->''Jason's Narration'': That's my story and I'm sticking to it.
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-->''Jason's Narration'': That's my story and I'm sticking to it.it.
* If you like Roy's sense of humor he can be absolutely hilarious when he actually let's the joes fly.
* For some people this situation in one of the first issues.
--> The Outlaws enter a creepy dark corridor.
--> Starfire lampshades how creepy it is and says it's probably a trap.
--> Roy and Jason being... [[Troll them]][[ToDumbToLive selves]] brush it off and make fun of her for being afraid.
--> Que trap Kori was right
* If you like Roy's sense of humor he can be absolutely hilarious when he actually let's the joes fly.
* For some people this situation in one of the first issues.
--> The Outlaws enter a creepy dark corridor.
--> Starfire lampshades how creepy it is and says it's probably a trap.
--> Roy and Jason being... [[Troll them]][[ToDumbToLive selves]] brush it off and make fun of her for being afraid.
--> Que trap Kori was right
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* Jason's origin story is the feature of #0. When the tale reaches his resurrection via Lazarus Pit, the final line pokes fun at the original Superboy Prime Reality-Punch explanation.
-->''Jason's Narration'': That's my story and I'm sticking to it.
-->''Jason's Narration'': That's my story and I'm sticking to it.
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in retrospect, not even close to a CMOF. IIRC, I was the one who added it - vc
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* The gag about Starfire's GagBoobs, before she is even on panel. It doesn't make sense at all, but Arsenals "who do we know that has a pair of 38s?", then Starfire's arrival, in issue #1.
** It was in response to the encroaching Tanks, Arsenal wondering about a pair of 38mm Cannons.
** It was in response to the encroaching Tanks, Arsenal wondering about a pair of 38mm Cannons.
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* The gag about Starfire's GagBoobs, before she is even on panel. It doesn't make sense at all, but Arsenals "who do we know that has a pair of 38s?", then Starfire's arrival, in issue #1.
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* The gag about Starfire's GagBoobs, before she is even on panel. It doesn't make sense at all, but Arsenals "who do we know that has a pair of 38s?", then Starfire's arrival, in issue #1.#1.
** It was in response to the encroaching Tanks, Arsenal wondering about a pair of 38mm Cannons.
** It was in response to the encroaching Tanks, Arsenal wondering about a pair of 38mm Cannons.
